sorry about the last 2 slides

1. Reading silently
3 credits for reading quietly.

2. Lesson 1
L.I. To learn how to correct your writing presentation
Check over your work and see if there is any mistakes
Mark in green pen

3. My story
I was walking along the street on my way to school and I saw someone beating
another person up and I realised they were from my school and I knew their names Lois
was beating up Peter my really old friends they must have had a fight about something
because he wouldn’t just do that for a random reason. I ran and told my teacher so she
could get it sorted out so see went round and saw Lois on the floor and then I was
confused because Peter was getting beaten up . So what happened then…
TO BE CONTINUED…

4. My peer marked work
For: Ms Gutierrez by: Lexi Yates
You
star
Your
star
Your
wish
You did describe what happened in a lot
of the sentences with great description
You used a lot of the opening
sentences that are meant to be
used, and that is great vocabulary.
Make at least 1 mistake in you
writing. you can makes mistakes
they are good to make.

5. My marked story
It was a sunny morning everyone was as happy as the sun
glimmering down from the sapphire blue sky and I love day like
that, my mum always used to take me out on picnics like this
because it was such a sunny so why waste it when you can go and
get fresh made ice cream

6. Explain what you
and your partner
thought using
sentence opening
and. good
vocabulary. And
describe how
other people
might feel
Explain what you
and your
partner thought
using sentence
opening and.
good vocabulary
What did you
think?
I thought…
They thought…
We thought…
She/he thought…
The group thought…
My partner
thought…
Warm
Explain what
you and your
partner
thought using
sentence
opening .
Hot
Scorching

7. Lesson 2
What does god actually look like?

8. Main task