The document provides feedback on three film projects. For the first project, strengths included good use of natural lighting and editing of the three characters. Weaknesses were the simplistic title font and introduction shots being too long. For the second project, strengths were the framing and professional style. Weaknesses included shots being too short in the introduction and simplistic font. For the third project, strengths included the target audience liking the title and use of black and white contrast. Weaknesses were pictures being too close together and thick black lines.
3. STRENGTHS WEAKNESSES
GOOD USE OF NATURAL LIGHTING – The natural
lighting shining on emily was really good
EDITING ALLTHETHREE CHARACTERS WAS GOOD –
a well constructed narrative across all three
TITLE – the font needed to change as it was too simplistic
and basic
INTRODUCTION – shots in the introduction needed to be
shorter as it was too long
THE FRAMING OF SHOTS WAS EXCELLENT – the
framing for all the three characters fitted in well and all
positioned perfectly
VOICE OVERS – need to add voice overs
VOLUME OF JACK – turn up the volume of Jack as it was
too quiet
7. STRENGTHS WEAKNESSES
LIKETHE CHANNEL 4 Intro – makes it look conventional
FRAMING – looks well done and professional
SHOTS ARETOO SHORT FOR INTRODUCTION – make
them longer
STYLE FONT STILLTO SIMPLISTIC – need to change the
style as it looks to basic and black outline needs to go
BBC ARTICLE – air plane crash – as documents we won't
remember the crash therefore need to put headline
NATURAL LIGHTING ON EMILY – shines on her really
well
NARRATIVE –The narrative flows well and the use of
anecdotes which Emily talks about is fascinating
VOICE OVERS – need to add voice over to channel 4 intro
and introduction of characters and music to the channel 4
18. STRENGTHS WEAKNESSES
LIKETHETITE – the target audience liked the title of my
double page spread battling the stigma and thought the
use of stigma conveyed synergy across all three texts
BLACK AND WHITE – members of the target audience
thought the contrast of black and white was good
DISTRIBUTION OF PICTURE – this could have improved
and the pictures are too close together and should be more
spread out
BLACK LINES – the thickness of the black lines can
improve and maybe be thinner
PHOTOS – members of the target audience argued the
photos were good such as 'battle of the stigma' and the
photo of Emily and Jack with these shots taken when
constructing the documentary
