My name is Areena bhatti. i am 15 years old. i love stories and poems. VICNITY is my series of stories. THE BIGGY BAG is its first part which is extremely funny and horror....

1. VICNITY
Actually I am not afraid of. Ghost type
rubbish but still its a fact I cant read
horror bed time stories which mom
usually use to tell me
Ya i am a brave boy no doub .
But sometimes some things make me
wet my pants . ok i know its
embarracing but why jhonny is so
brave ?? I hate this thing.
Jhonny my younger brother .
'Everybody come downstairs for
dorobeats' mom said
I dont know why mom always call us
when we are busy in some sort of work
except studing.
Oh let me introduce my favourite
DOROBEATS. They are something
triangular shaped crispy chips but
filled with chocolate. I am seriously
addict of it. First you crunch the crispy

2. Layer and then suddenly chocolate
flavour change your taste your mind
your soul.
No its too much only your taste.
'Can i have some more Dorobeats?'
Jhonny said. I dont know why younger
brothers and sisters are always that
much hungry.
'Ya ya eat eat my fat brother jhonny,
Ha ha he always get irritate whenever i
call him Jhonny .
Oh i forgot to tell his name is Jhon.
Jhonny is my dog.
Ha ha but their names resemble each
other and also some habits like eating
too much and sometimes..
Sometimes.... Ha ha peeing in pants or
anywhere.
'I never did that' he said furiously.
Ha ha ' go and feed jhonny'
Oh my God i love dogs and pets but
feeding them is a great duty and why

3. always i have to go outside slowly
slowy in so cold then opening his
cage and feeding him.
Actually there is warmness inside as
There is small heater inside.
So.. So ha ha i slept there.
But jhon locked the cage .
Oh crap . i was inside a cage, locked,
with a dog and in a scary night.
Oh My God.
Jhon went away saying 'i think you
love jhonny thats why you always call
me jhonny now sleep with your LOVE'
Oh No he knew very well i am so brave
that a little whisper of wind made my
pants wet.
And then something happened more
ridiculous as my pants were wet jhonny
started Barking.
Everybody came outside.
What a fantastic scene it was me my
Love in a cage with my pants wet and

4. jhonny barking.
SO EMBARACING IT WAS!!!!!
Everybody was still for 5 mints and
then i was made out of the cage and
then a beautifull twinkle twinkle sweet
soft ,
HALARIOUS LECTURE OF MOM.
I was upset sitting in my room.
She opened the door said' you are
discusting' and went away my sister,
actually elder sister. Nian .
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'Ghost do exist . they come when night
BLA BLA BLA BLAAAAAAA'
she was saying but my fingers were
inside my ears so I was not able to
hear anything I was assuming as if she
is saying BLa bla...
Our history teacher Grey kenz.
She intead to teaching us is telling
about. Ghost .

5. Stupid. I dont believe it . she is telling
about them as if she is a die heart fan
or friend of ghost.
I cant hear because i do care of my
pants.
I just find ways to go out of my class
with my best friend Robell.
Because if i remain in class for more
then 15mints its sure ill be embarraced
by any teacher because proudly i am
the super doober topper of my class
with highest percentage but from down.
Huh anyways. I dont want to hear any
lecture from any teacher on my result
infront of .....
Infront of. Carla a sweet girl .
Ha ha a sweet girl in my class.
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12:00 night all alone in my room and
watching TV, chanel NOG(news of
globe) .

6. Reporter: A gold robbery in US bank
ME: so go to police why telling me?
Anything new?
Reporter: the mention named Vicinity
is considered to be a house of demons.
Bla bla
I switched off TV Stupid news.
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3:00 noon at my dinning table.
Nian came in a worried state.
'I need a help my brother Vicky.'
She said.
And i refused at first.
'I need a help and if you will refuse i
will tell to mom'
Ha ha i said what will you tell ?
She took out a long list which she
usually calls 'Vicky complains' and she
always uses it to blackmale me.
* 13 Jan Vicky ate cholates which mom
said to give. It to neighbours.

7. * 29 Jan Vicky washed the flush of
toilet with brush of John .
* 15 Feb Vicky made Johnny wear
underpants of John.
* 30 march Vicky wetted his pants.
* 17 April Vicky accidently threw
chocolte ice cream on Mom,s 19$
dress
*24 April Vicky ate Dorobeats of John
and so on.................
I was hearing and ......
IT IS TOO EMBARACCING
'Would you like to help me or want me
to give mom this Vicky complains list'
I didn't refuse because I was having no
choice.
'my biggy bag with expensive make up,
my small teady bear, my pocket
money , my phone is lost'
She was weeping and I was yawning.
I asked where her biggy bag was lost?
She said ' me and my friend after

8. shopping were tired we saw a small
garden sat there and we were eating
Dorobeats.
The garden was actually of a large old
house .
We both after eating went close to that
house .
There was a broken window. We
enterred .
The house was so strange and there
was a small hole which goes into
basement and then we heard some
strange voice I was so afraid that we
both ran and came outside but my
biggy bag felt in hole and went into
basement. i dont want to go again
please go and bring it'
Ohh it was strange but where was the
house?
She said there was a old platelet
Outside the house it was written
VICNITY.

9. OHH MY GOD that horror mansion.
Never ever ill never go there........
But vicky complain list was also a
great pressure.
She said you have 2 days bring it .
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I went to Robell house for Night Out.
I was not allow to go alone so
unfortunately mom sent John and
Johnny with me.
Johnny was sleeping while John was
playing video game his favourite RUN
RUBBY.
The game is about a thief. Rubby who
is escaping from police.
Me and Robell were eating Dorobeats
and then something happened
embaraccing.
A sound of Fart
Oh crap!

10. It was John
'No not me'
May be jhonny?
'Bhow bhaow bhaow bhow'
Oh k .
ME and Robell went to another room
for some private talk because we are
13 while John is only 9 and Johnny 2
years old. I told him all the situation
And after 18 seconds he said OK we
can bring it.
We need a team.
I was shocked and I asked OK then tell
me the name of those genious excellent
members of our team.
He said
1) vicky
I Said fantastic
2) Robell
I said cool
3) John
What???? Oh crap

11. 4) Johnny
Whatttttt?????? Shit
WaOw what a great team we are.
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I asked John that I'll never call him
Johnny and I'll give him extra
dorobeats and ... So on
He was ready. And Johnny after eating
a bone was ready.
We 4 needed a plan because VICNITY
is a really horror mention.
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PLAN A
Jhon: we need extra pants
Robell: why?
Jhon: its a horror mention and
ofcourse vicky will wet his pants.
Vicky: shut up!
PLAN B
Robell: we will stand outside the
Vicinity and from broken window we

12. will throw a bone in whole and
Johnny will go in basement and will
bring bag.
Vicky: no because he will go in hole
and he will do nothing except doing
poop.
Ha ha flop plan.
Guys we will go together and we
will bring the bag.
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Next day 18 November,
Mom knew me John andJohnny are
at Robell,s home and Robell,s mom
knew he is at our home.
8:00 night we went to VICNITY.
I was afraid, terrified
Scared and petrified.
We went from window.we all were
having walkitalkies with us.
There was so dark inside.I was just
walking and there was a small door.

13. We exactly don't know where the
hole was.
I opened the door . Me and Johnny
went inside. But the door shut and
we were LOCKED.
Robell: guys I am going upstairs.
John: stupid we have to find
basement not attic.
We were in contact because of
walkitalkies.
we heard screaming of robell
Robell: oh oh My God there is
someone with long hair and white
dress on the first stair.
John:what?
And then his voice stopped we don't
even heard a single voice of him. I
don't know what was hi doing or
where he was gone because
unlukiely I was locked too.
And my pants were wet.
Then Johnny was smelling the floor

14. and he stuck some where .
Ya a small door again.
I opened and went down.
I was having goosebumps. Me and
Johnny were standing how can we
walk in dark?
Quietly we were standing with fear
and goosebumps may be 11:00
then..
Then........
A little patch at my back and...
We RAN
I don't know where but I was
running.
There was a little room with a little
bulb we went there.
There was small chit with a glass on
table.
On chit it was written DROP THE
CHEMICAL IN GLASS ON WHITE
WITCH.

15. Me and jhony were almost crying
and then we heard a KNOCK AT
THE DOOR.
Again we ran there was small room
with red bulb.
Jhon: where all have gone? I am
alone stuck here there is a chit here
written GIVE KNIFE TO OLD MAN
Oh I was understanding a little bit
its a bit tricky.
Vicky: John where are you?
John: I am in a room with bulb.
Me and Johnny went back to that
room now me Johnny and John were
together.
Now we needed to find robell
12:00
Finally we got him fainted. We woke
him up.
Now we four decided that we will
be together and for escaping we
need to solve chits.

16. Jhon: i wanted to go washroom
Oh no.........
JUST DO IT ANYWHERE.
We took the chemical from room
with small bulb.
Now we need to find the WHITE
WITCH.
Robell: I think they are talking
about jhon
John: shut up
Ohh Robell saw a witch .
We all were going upstairs and we
all SCREAMED
What was that?
John: it was just my fart .
Vicky: you shit
John: your pants are also smelling
as if washed with deodorants.
Robell: stop it guys look the witch is
standing beside the window with
cadal in her hand we can see her
back.

17. OK now who will throw chemical
her
??????? Silence???
Vicky: you know how brave I am
John: I am so young for this work
Johnny: bhaow bhaow
Robell: ookay i have no choice......
Robell went slowly slowly toward
her and threw chemical.
Suddenly she ran and a knife was
left behind.
We took knife and ha ha
Jhonny was having some long hair
in its mouth.
Ha ha witch ran because her wig
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WHAT? SHE was wearing wig?
It can't be possible guys.
Whatever this mansion VICNITY IS
REALLY UNBELIEVABLE.
John :I am hungry
Vicky:shut up

18. Robell: I am also hungry
And suddenly there was large
branch of tree coming from
somewhere I don't know with apples
on it.
I was just thinking it can be a trick
but before I could make any
suggestion john had taken a bite.
Before he could take another bite he
fell down .
Vicky: o crap
Robell: is it a snow white story?
Who is gonna kiss him?
Vicky: shut up not a funny joke
Robell: ha ha not me
Vicky: I will never
Robell and vicky: GO JHONNY
oh thanks to jhonny now he was
save.
Vicky: o my sweet brother john and
Johnny

19. John: shut up
Robell: what to do with this knife?
Vicky: I don't know
John: o I told you Vicky it was on
chit GIVE KNIFE TO OLD MAN
BUT there is no old man here...
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We took knife with us and moved on.
What happened next was
unbelievable. We felt cracks is the
floor as if going to tear up in pieces.
We can't go downstairs because we
cant find stairs as well as we can't
go upstairs because there were no
stairs.
Then the music played
Oh shit we have to dance???
Hip hop music:
We were doing as if KUNG FU
THE cracks reduced
Michel Jackson music :
Everybody jumped with their hands

20. on belly and said AAAOOOO
There were no more cracks
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We were standing then we heard a
knock at door.
Unlikely we opened. Likely an old
man came inside and sat on floor.
He don't wanted but we all were
forcing him to take
Old man: I will take only when you
guys will sing a song with some sort
of music.
Robell: i can sing
Vicky: what about music?
Robell: Johnny and John
John: how?
Robell: you can fart well and you
have to admit it and also you have
to do it for all of us to escape from
Vicinity
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SONG:

21. Robell+ Johnny(bhaow bhaow) +
John(poo)
VIC......NI...........TY
VIC....NI............TY
NO COFEE
NO TEA
POOOOOOOOO
BHAOW BHAOW
POOOOOOOO
BHAOW BHAOW
WE ARE ALL ALONE
POOOOOOOO
AND THAT ALL BELONG
BHAOW BHAOW
TO VIC....NI....TY
VIC.......NI........TY
POOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
OOOOOOOOOO
Vicky: Oh My God
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Finally he took knife and said room
302

22. We found room and went inside.
There was a small door but locked.
In that room there was table with a
chit and lots of KEYS.
It was written
OPEN DOOR WITH CORRECT
KEY
ONLY 3 CHANCES
OH crap how could we choose the
correct one among these keys.
John: can I try?
Robell: OK
John took a key and went towards
the door. He inserted key but The ke
was so small which even don't fit
inside.
Vicky: oh no you are idiot Johnny
John: my name is John OK and now
you may try.
Oh I took a larger key and moved
towards door. Before I inserted the

23. key everyone was like
Johnny: oh
John: oh my
Robell: oh my God
Vicky: relax guys.
Johnny,jhon,robell: ha ha okay okay
I inserted key and.......
And.... Again it was not correct key.
Robell: oh no now we have last
chance this time if we inserted
wrong key then...
Jhon: then?
Robell: we may be locked in the
Vicinity for forever.
John, Johnny,Vicky: WHAT?
IT was a really difficult situation.
What the rubbish? We are doing all
this shit just for Nian., for her
stupid silly BIGGY BAG.
I was so furious and I kicked the
table.All keys fell down and they
merged into a single key. We all

24. were surprised.
We inserted the key and WAOW
door was opened.
We went inside and then what we
saw was unbelievable .
A zombie standing still in front of us.
Our foot froze to the ground.
We SCREAMED, SHOUTED,
SCREAMED,
SHOUTED.....................
Vicky: AhhhhhhhhhhAhhhhhhhhh
John: Momyyyyyyyyy
Johnny: bhooooooooo
Robell: stop it guys don't worry he
is still.
Then he started moving towards us
SLOWLY SLOWY
Robell: Ahhhhhhhhhh
He came slowly slowly towards us ..
He said
LEAVE ONE OF YOUR MEMBER
WITH ME AND MOVE ON.

25. Oh ... It is not possible
John: how can we leave. One of us
with him?
Vicky: ya! But I think John you
should stay
John: shut up I am so young and if I
will dead who will make high scores
in RUN RUBBY GAME
Robell: ya he is so small for this.
Vicky: I'll never
Robell:what about Johnny?
Jhonny: nooooooo
Bhoooooooooo
John: yes Johnny you have to stay
Robell: yes you should.
Unwillingly we left my dog there
and moved on.
We were hearing some spooky
voices but still we were just moving
on.
We went inside a room and again
locked .

26. In the room, right, left, infront and
our back, 4 walls has 4 windows.
Three windows were closed and one
was open.
Suddenly john saw a chit on floor he
picked and me John and robell read
2. OF YOU CAN ESCAPE FROM
WINDOW AND THEN IT WILL BE
CLOSED. THEN FROM THE
OTHER 3 WINDOWS 3 ZOMBIES
WOULD COME INSIDE.
Oh crap.......
2 of us????
Now who will face the zombies.
John: not me. Please I'll start
crying.
Robell: I'll never
Vicky: I'll never
We all were so furious already we
lost Johnny Now how could we
leave one of us here.
Vicky: this is all shit

27. Robell: leave this rubbish. We three
will escape from the window
together.
We three went near the window
holding hands in a row.
Robell: on count 1 2 3 we shall run.
1 ... 2.... 3....
RAN....
I jumped out, robell jumped out
but .....
Before john would come, he slipped
back, felldown and window was
shut...........
We don't know what happened next I
cried we tried to open it a lot but all
in vien. We have no choice except to
move on....
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We went upstairs and finally we
found the attic.
We climed up and went outside.
WAOW we were standing on the

28. roof finally out of the VICNITY. But
how to reach down. We cant jump it
was a long distance.
Robell: what should we do now?
Vicky: wait here. I shall go back and
find a rope.
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There were many boxes in the attic.
I was so worried because i was
again and again thinking of john
and jhonny.
I finally found rope. I climbed little
and gave rope to Robell.
Before I could go out somebody
holded my leg.
OH MY GOD!
I turned around, it was a zombie.
Robell: give your hand I'll pull your
hand, come, come Vicky.
Vicky?????????
Vicky: no you may go and wait
outside the VICNITY.

29. Robell: what about you???
Vicky: I can't come without john and
Johnny.
Robell: but???
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I pulled my leg and ran.
I went downstairs. I was shouting
John, Johnny.
I went to the room with 4 windows.
It was opened.
I saw john in a large cage.
John: Vicky............
Vicky... Safe me
Vicky: how???????
John: find the key...
I remembered when I was finding
the key. There were lots of boxes and
among them it was written KEY on
one of the box.
I ran to the attic and found that box.
Thanks to God there was no zombie
there.

30. I took key and opened the cage.
Me and John were together now.
John: I was so afraid thanks for
coming.
Vicky: OK but how we will escape ?
John: should i made a suggestion?
Vicky: sure.
John: maybe this key also openes
the door of VICNITY
Vicky: OK we can try at least.
We went downstairs and inserted
key into the door of VICNITY
Its unbelievable, we were out of the
Vicinity.
OH MY GOD,
me john and Robell hugged each
other . Robell was surprised to see
me and jhon together.
But still
JHONNY???
Suddenly we saw broken window oh
it was open and Johnny came

31. outside running.
Waow we were all surprised and
happy and he was having the
BIGGY BAG in his mouth.
We hugged him
Finally we all were out of the
VICNITY and we got the BIGGY
BAG too after this halarious stupid
unforgettable adventure of
HORROR MANSION VICNITY.
We went home .
Nian: oh yessssss how you got my
sweeto biggy bag?
Ha ha we just went inside and
brought it
Nian: really you guys are amazing
and genius....
Ha ha yes we are..
Nian: i thought it is a horror
mansion but i already knew it, it was
just an old mansion ha ha
Ya ya the secret of VICNITY will

32. always be with us....................
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.. by Areena
bhatti