2. You should've been there,
Should've burst through the door,
With that 'baby I'm right here'
smile,
And it would've felt like,
A million little shining stars had
just aligned,
And I would've been so happy.
• As this is the first verse in the song I
think it would suit being a
performance. My artist would be
looking into the distance away from
the camera singing. Thus appearing to
be lost in thought like she is retelling a
story.
Christmas lights glisten,
I've got my eye on the door,
Just waiting for you to walk in,
But the time is ticking,
People ask me how I've been
As I comb back through my
memory,
How you said you'd be here,
You said you'd be here.
• During this verse narrative will be used
in the video. In this shot the my artist
will be shown at a dinner with her
friends staring at the door waiting.
There will then be a shot of the clock
letting the audience know what the
time is. This references the lyrics ‘eye
on the door’ and ‘time is ticking’.
3. And it was like slow motion,
Standing there in my party dress,
In red lipstick,
With no one to impress,
And they're all laughing,
As I'm looking around the room,
But there's one thing missing,
And that was the moment I knew.
And the hours pass by,
Now I just wanna be alone,
But your close friends always seem
to know
When there's something really
wrong,
So they follow me down the hall,
And there in the bathroom,
I try not to fall apart,
And the sinking feeling starts,
As I say hopelessly,
"He said he'd be here."
• This part of the chorus would be best
visually shown as narrative. My artist will
be shown visibly not having a good time
whilst all her friends are.
• It will then go to a performance of the
girl looking into the camera singing. Thus
showing the emotion on her face
reflecting on the lyrics.
• For this part of the verse narrative will
used and there will be a shot of the girl in
the bathroom with friends. She will then
admit to them whats bugging her. This
references ‘As I say hopelessly “He said
he’d be here”’.
4. And it was like slow motion,
Standing there in my party dress,
In red lipstick,
With no one to impress,
And they're all laughing,
And asking me about you,
But there was one thing missing,
And that was the moment I knew.
What do you say
When tears are streaming down your
face
In front of everyone you know?
And what do you do when the one
Who means the most to you
Is the one who didn't show?
You should've been here.
And I would've been so happy.
• This time for the chorus it will be a
switch between both narrative and
performance. I think this will suit the
lyrics as there will be a visual to them
i.e. the dinner. Also the performance
will show the artist describing what is
happening.
• For the artist to be able to show
emotion and make the audience relate
to what she is singing, I think that
performance would be most suitable.
My artist would be singing to the
camera so that the audience can feel
every word and see the emotion
across her face.
5. And it was like slow motion,
Standing there in my party dress,
In red lipstick,
With no one to impress,
And they're all standing around me
singing
"Happy birthday to you",
But there was one thing missing,
And that was the moment I knew.
• This part of the song will be narrative. A
long shot will be used to show that the
dinner was the girl’s birthday. Her friends
will be surrounding her singing ‘Happy
birthday’, whilst she is gazing at the door.
This references ‘but there was one thing
missing’.
Ooh, I knew.
Ooh,
You called me later,
And said, "I'm sorry, I didn't make
it,"
And I said, "I'm sorry too,"
And that was the moment I knew.
And that was the moment I knew.
• To conclude the song this verse will use
performance. My artist will be having the
realisation that her boyfriend is never
going to be there. The ending will be her
walking away i.e. walking away from
him.
6. And it was like slow motion,
Standing there in my party dress,
In red lipstick,
With no one to impress,
And they're all standing around me
singing
"Happy birthday to you",
But there was one thing missing,
And that was the moment I knew.
• This part of the song will be narrative. A
long shot will be used to show that the
dinner was the girl’s birthday. Her friends
will be surrounding her singing ‘Happy
birthday’, whilst she is gazing at the door.
This references ‘but there was one thing
missing’.
Ooh, I knew.
Ooh,
You called me later,
And said, "I'm sorry, I didn't make
it,"
And I said, "I'm sorry too,"
And that was the moment I knew.
And that was the moment I knew.
• To conclude the song this verse will use
performance. My artist will be having the
realisation that her boyfriend is never
going to be there. The ending will be her
walking away i.e. walking away from
him.
