1. Group redraft
Written By
Charley Fleming/
Dana Holloway & Amber Cornwell
Based on, if any
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2. 1
INT. SCHOOL CANTEEN - MORNING
HEAD MASTER (V.O)
It was morning break at the school of Merriwether High.
Students were gathering round tables in their friendship
groups welcoming each-other. All besides one girl.
This one girl was called Elsa, she wasn't your average girl
she'd be the one over in the corner on her own minding her
own business as the days went by.
INT. SCHOOL CANTEEN
JAY
(loudly)
Woo, look at the jocks. What
idiots.
JOCK GROUP
Look at us? look at you giving the
weirdo girl the looks.
JAY
(casually)
I don't know what you're talking
about.
JOCK GROUP
Hahaha, whatever kiddo.
The Jocks walk away from winding Jay up casually. He stops
for a moment and stares at Elsa over in the corner.
INT. SCHOOL CANTEEN
- MOMENTS LATER
Jay walks over to Elsa, and starts to make a conversation.
JAY
(shyly)
Urhm..Hi, my names Jay, I keep
seeing you but I urhm, well i've
never been able to walk
over..what's yours?
ELSA
(giggling)
Hehe, my names Elsa...
JAY
That's a nice name, so why're you
on your own...?

3. 2
ELSA
I like to be on my...
The buzzer goes off, next lesson is about to start. Jay and
Elsa stumble away to their lessons in the crowd.
EXT. PLAYING FEILD - AFTERNOON
The fitness classes make their way out to the playing field,
only to see they've been placed in mixed groups for the
term. A shock comes whilst being paired up for Jay and Elsa.
FITNESS TEACHER (MR JONES)
Right class get into pairs or
groups! HURRY!
Jay and Elsa see each other and decide to pair up.
JOCK GROUP
(mocking)
Awh look at the freakish couple.
ELSA
Uhg, they really annoy me, thank's
for pairing with me.
The Jocks walk past Jay, nudging him hardly to the side.
JOCK GROUP
Try not to get lost in the weird
girl Jay!
JAY
(mumurs)
Whatever...
FITNESS TEACHER
Todays lesson we're doing football.
Your task is to keep track of
strong kicks and turns!
Elsa and Jay start the task of strong passes.
EXT. PLAYING FEILD
- MOMENTS LATER
(swooshing football flies over)Jay screams and falls to the
floor.
ELSA
JAY, JAY, where are you hurt?
JAY
My ribs, my ribs they feel broken.