Screenplay!!!

March 15th, 2011
Why screenplay?
• A way to convey information to a lot of
  people
• Visual
  – Visual learners
First -
• An idea.
  – Why is this idea well-suited to screen?
  – Budget?
  – Is it a fresh idea?
  – Has it been done before?
  – Can you make it unique?
  – Can you relinquish creative control?
Storyboarding
Pitching
• Get your idea out there!
• Networking
  – Parties
  – Friends of friends
• Always have a pitch on hand for your
  idea.
Pitching
•   Refine your idea to one sentence.
•   What is the essence of the film?
•   The clearer you are, the better.
•   Verbal - short - 3 minutes maximum.
Pitching
• What is the title?
  – If need be, use a working title
• What is the theme?
  – A broad sense of issues that are being discussed
• What is the story?
  – Do people want to know the ending? Is it
    interesting?
• What is unique?
• Why you?
Pitching
• What is the catchiest thing about this
  project?
• Genre
• Where does the story come from?
• Why?
  – Why now?
  – Why do you love it?
  – Why do you want to make it?
Elevator Pitch
• Think of an elevator ride - you want to
  be able to pitch to somebody in the
  same time it would take to ride an
  elevator with them.
Next - the treatment
Treatment
• Telling the story of your screenplay -
  take your script and write it like a short
  story
• TWO PAGES OR LESS - brevity!
• Write the treatment with action that
  advances your story
Treatment
• Here is an example of a treatment
Treatment
• Written in simple present tense
• Each paragraph is a scene
• No dialogue
   – If there is any dialogue, it should aid in conveying the tone
• No camera directions
• Capitalize the names of characters the first time they
  are introduced
• Capitalize every sound
• Indent (5 spaces) every new paragraph
• Flush left
Beat Sheet
• A beat sheet is another way of laying your story out
• Can be done or after the screenplay - often done
  after the first draft of the screenplay
• It is composed of beats, which are the smallest unit
  of screen story-telling
• A beat is a moment in which something happens
   – Could be action or something dramatic (an explosion, a
     fight, etc.)
• Beats are represented by a bullet point or a number
Beat Sheet
• More than one beat can happen in a
  single setting or scene
• No required length - is as long as it
  needs to be
• Written clearly and simply as possible
Finally - the screenplay!
Screenplay
• Here is an example of a screenplay.
Screenplay - basics
• Scene - screenplay is made up of
  scenes. A scene is a unit of drama.
• A scene helps achieve coherence.
  – Advance story/show conflict/develop
    character/create suspense, etc.
Screenplay - basics
•    Dramatic action is action in pursuit of a
     goal
    1.   The protagonist has an
    2.   Objective which is opposed by
    3.   The antagonist out of which arises
    4.   Dramatic conflict
The Screenplay
• The main thing you need - FORMAT
  – Screen is a genre where format holds a lot of
    importance
• Programs for formatting:
  – Final Draft
  – Celtx (Free! But misbehaves)
  – Word (for the brave)
• Remember - about 1 minute per page of
  screenplay.
Formatting - History
• Screenplays were first typed on
  typewriters - hence the Courier font
• This is how the timing standard was set
• And this is why it is still the same format
  to this day - to keep the timing.
Screenplay
• Now, a screenplay written by Steven.
  For real! Kind of.
• This will help answer formatting
  questions in a creative way.
The Screenplay
• Screenplays are a bit of an odd genre to
  write in
• Very specific brand of writing
  – Sparse/brief
• Watch out for risk of offending
  – Actors
  – Directors
“No-nos”
• All rules can be broken, but here are some
  loose ones to follow for screenwriting:
  – Don’t write in camera angles or directions
  – Don’t write in lighting cues
  – Don’t write in nuanced acting (specific facial
    expressions)
  – Be aware of budget
  – Be aware of special effects
“No-Nos.”
•   Voice-overs
•   Dream sequences
•   Montages
•   Flashbacks
•   Narration

Screenplay march15 (3)

  • 1.
  • 2.
    Why screenplay? • Away to convey information to a lot of people • Visual – Visual learners
  • 3.
    First - • Anidea. – Why is this idea well-suited to screen? – Budget? – Is it a fresh idea? – Has it been done before? – Can you make it unique? – Can you relinquish creative control?
  • 4.
  • 5.
    Pitching • Get youridea out there! • Networking – Parties – Friends of friends • Always have a pitch on hand for your idea.
  • 6.
    Pitching • Refine your idea to one sentence. • What is the essence of the film? • The clearer you are, the better. • Verbal - short - 3 minutes maximum.
  • 7.
    Pitching • What isthe title? – If need be, use a working title • What is the theme? – A broad sense of issues that are being discussed • What is the story? – Do people want to know the ending? Is it interesting? • What is unique? • Why you?
  • 8.
    Pitching • What isthe catchiest thing about this project? • Genre • Where does the story come from? • Why? – Why now? – Why do you love it? – Why do you want to make it?
  • 9.
    Elevator Pitch • Thinkof an elevator ride - you want to be able to pitch to somebody in the same time it would take to ride an elevator with them.
  • 10.
    Next - thetreatment
  • 11.
    Treatment • Telling thestory of your screenplay - take your script and write it like a short story • TWO PAGES OR LESS - brevity! • Write the treatment with action that advances your story
  • 12.
    Treatment • Here isan example of a treatment
  • 13.
    Treatment • Written insimple present tense • Each paragraph is a scene • No dialogue – If there is any dialogue, it should aid in conveying the tone • No camera directions • Capitalize the names of characters the first time they are introduced • Capitalize every sound • Indent (5 spaces) every new paragraph • Flush left
  • 14.
    Beat Sheet • Abeat sheet is another way of laying your story out • Can be done or after the screenplay - often done after the first draft of the screenplay • It is composed of beats, which are the smallest unit of screen story-telling • A beat is a moment in which something happens – Could be action or something dramatic (an explosion, a fight, etc.) • Beats are represented by a bullet point or a number
  • 15.
    Beat Sheet • Morethan one beat can happen in a single setting or scene • No required length - is as long as it needs to be • Written clearly and simply as possible
  • 16.
    Finally - thescreenplay!
  • 17.
    Screenplay • Here isan example of a screenplay.
  • 18.
    Screenplay - basics •Scene - screenplay is made up of scenes. A scene is a unit of drama. • A scene helps achieve coherence. – Advance story/show conflict/develop character/create suspense, etc.
  • 19.
    Screenplay - basics • Dramatic action is action in pursuit of a goal 1. The protagonist has an 2. Objective which is opposed by 3. The antagonist out of which arises 4. Dramatic conflict
  • 20.
    The Screenplay • Themain thing you need - FORMAT – Screen is a genre where format holds a lot of importance • Programs for formatting: – Final Draft – Celtx (Free! But misbehaves) – Word (for the brave) • Remember - about 1 minute per page of screenplay.
  • 21.
    Formatting - History •Screenplays were first typed on typewriters - hence the Courier font • This is how the timing standard was set • And this is why it is still the same format to this day - to keep the timing.
  • 22.
    Screenplay • Now, ascreenplay written by Steven. For real! Kind of. • This will help answer formatting questions in a creative way.
  • 23.
    The Screenplay • Screenplaysare a bit of an odd genre to write in • Very specific brand of writing – Sparse/brief • Watch out for risk of offending – Actors – Directors
  • 24.
    “No-nos” • All rulescan be broken, but here are some loose ones to follow for screenwriting: – Don’t write in camera angles or directions – Don’t write in lighting cues – Don’t write in nuanced acting (specific facial expressions) – Be aware of budget – Be aware of special effects
  • 25.
    “No-Nos.” • Voice-overs • Dream sequences • Montages • Flashbacks • Narration