Screenplay
     By
Sam Mcdowall
1.INT KITCHEN
Tidy clean kitchen. Mother cooking a fry up of bacon and
eggs in a frying pan and Tony sitting down next at the table
waiting for her.

                    MOTHER
          Have you worked out what time you
          are leaving?
Tony, average height, slim jeans, shoes and a shirt and
styled hair, slowly gets up from the table and walks over
next to his mum impatiently waiting for his breakfast and
getting irritated about the fact that she is asking him
questions.
                    TONY
          Soon, how long will breakfast be?
                    MOTHER
          5 minutes, just sit down and wait
          for it.


2.INT CORRIDOR OF HOUSE
Mark, quite short, large, baggy jeans, trainers, t-shirt and
a denim jacket. He has long messy hair and is coming down
the stairs and down into the corridor, walks out towards the
door
                    MARK
          Bye dad
He leaves the house goes to open the front door.


3.INT CORRIDOR
Tony is seen coming out of the kitchen and picks up his bag
and makes for the corridor.

4.EXT STREET
Wide long shot of this sub-urban street. Tony and Mark both
come out of their houses at the same time. Making us
understand that they are neighbours and consequently best
mates. They are both wearing middle class clothes. They
meet on the street and then walk together down the street




                                                   (CONTINUED)
CONTINUED:                                               2.


                        TONY
             Alright?
                        MARK
             Yeh,you?

                       TONY
             just another day of school I
             suppose.


TITLE
Main title of film

5.EXT STREET

The two boys are walking along to the bus stop and are
waiting for the bus. Cuts to the bus coming up and then the
bus pulling up in front from of them from the opposite side
of the street, then cuts to the two boy getting on, and
follows them through the window walking to the back of the
bus.

6.INT BUS
Tony and Mark are sitting next to each other in the back of
the bus. Both putting up their feet on the chairs opposite.
(Dialogue)

7.EXT STREET

The two boys get off the bus laughing. The street is dirty
and its a grey and dreary morning. Tracks them walking down
the street, both in happy moods, turns the corner then the
shot cuts to the next scene.


8. EXT SCHOOL
Wide shot of the school, not a child   in site and no sign of
the public. Very empty. The two boys   slowly come into the
shot. Goes to a tracking shot of the   boys walking up to the
doors and they are about to open the   doors.
3.


9.INT SCHOOL CORRIDOR
Medium shot of the boys entering the school. They look quite
confused and a bit scared. The corridors are empty. Mark
starts a nervous laughter.

Music comes in.
Turns to tracking shot when they follow the two of them as
they explore round the school. When they have looked around
all of the rooms it follows them back to the main entrance
door, and they find out that its locked.

Sam screenplay

  • 1.
    Screenplay By Sam Mcdowall
  • 2.
    1.INT KITCHEN Tidy cleankitchen. Mother cooking a fry up of bacon and eggs in a frying pan and Tony sitting down next at the table waiting for her. MOTHER Have you worked out what time you are leaving? Tony, average height, slim jeans, shoes and a shirt and styled hair, slowly gets up from the table and walks over next to his mum impatiently waiting for his breakfast and getting irritated about the fact that she is asking him questions. TONY Soon, how long will breakfast be? MOTHER 5 minutes, just sit down and wait for it. 2.INT CORRIDOR OF HOUSE Mark, quite short, large, baggy jeans, trainers, t-shirt and a denim jacket. He has long messy hair and is coming down the stairs and down into the corridor, walks out towards the door MARK Bye dad He leaves the house goes to open the front door. 3.INT CORRIDOR Tony is seen coming out of the kitchen and picks up his bag and makes for the corridor. 4.EXT STREET Wide long shot of this sub-urban street. Tony and Mark both come out of their houses at the same time. Making us understand that they are neighbours and consequently best mates. They are both wearing middle class clothes. They meet on the street and then walk together down the street (CONTINUED)
  • 3.
    CONTINUED: 2. TONY Alright? MARK Yeh,you? TONY just another day of school I suppose. TITLE Main title of film 5.EXT STREET The two boys are walking along to the bus stop and are waiting for the bus. Cuts to the bus coming up and then the bus pulling up in front from of them from the opposite side of the street, then cuts to the two boy getting on, and follows them through the window walking to the back of the bus. 6.INT BUS Tony and Mark are sitting next to each other in the back of the bus. Both putting up their feet on the chairs opposite. (Dialogue) 7.EXT STREET The two boys get off the bus laughing. The street is dirty and its a grey and dreary morning. Tracks them walking down the street, both in happy moods, turns the corner then the shot cuts to the next scene. 8. EXT SCHOOL Wide shot of the school, not a child in site and no sign of the public. Very empty. The two boys slowly come into the shot. Goes to a tracking shot of the boys walking up to the doors and they are about to open the doors.
  • 4.
    3. 9.INT SCHOOL CORRIDOR Mediumshot of the boys entering the school. They look quite confused and a bit scared. The corridors are empty. Mark starts a nervous laughter. Music comes in. Turns to tracking shot when they follow the two of them as they explore round the school. When they have looked around all of the rooms it follows them back to the main entrance door, and they find out that its locked.