This document discusses how to write an effective thesis statement. It advises the reader to ensure the thesis statement clearly defines the scope, intention, and approach of the paper. The document also suggests considering the verbs used in the thesis statement to understand the author's intentions and what the reader can expect. Finally, it notes the thesis statement should demonstrate how the topic fits within the wider academic field and is relevant to readers.

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Reading and Writing for International Studies
Writing ForumQuestions
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Week5
• Discuss the thesis statement (TS).
• Is the TS clearly defined? Does it indicate scope, intention and
approach of the paper? How specificis it atthis point?
• Consider the verbs used in the TS. What do they tell the reader about
the author’s intentions? Canthe reader expect answers or a
discussion?
• How does your TS fit into the wider academic field? How is the topic
addressed inthe paper relevant to the reader?

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• Do I answer the question?
• Have I takena position thatothers might challenge or oppose?
• Is my thesis statement specific enough?
• Does my essay support my thesis specifically and without wandering?
• Does my thesis pass the ‘how and why?’ test?
Discuss the thesis statement

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Discuss the thesis statement
• Consider theverbs used in theTS. What do they tellthe
reader about theauthor’s intentions?Can thereader expect
answers or a discussion?
• How does your TS fit intothe wider academic field? How is
the topic addressed in thepaper relevant to thereader?

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Defend your TS
- In class
- Discuss (only positive criticism please)
- Work on your TS in your group