Emily Davis


Two Idiots and a Lady

In the old black and white setting everything looks so much simpler in the small, happy town of
Terabithia, everyone knew each other. Rival shops Asda and Morrisons were on opposite sides of
the town and always had to be better than each other they always had to have the best, staff,
customers and girls.

George a rich business man proud co owner of the Asda. He’s a charmer and has a way with the
ladies getting them all the flowers and meal deals they could possibly want. Until he lays eyes on a
girl that he just has to have on his arm to show off to everybody in the town. She was his and he had
to let her know just how beautiful he thought she was.

George and Jenny just a few months down the line were smitten. George spoilt his girlfriend Jenny
and made sure he showed her of he took her everywhere, always with his arm around her to show
the other men to back off. Men would run up and beg to know how he did it; he would just push
them with a smug smile on his face and chuckle.

Ben a typical shelf stacker down the road at Morrisons the rival town store had loved Jenny ever
since she had been shopping in Morrisons but never had the courage to talk to her so always used to
hide away, but he was willing to do anything to end up with her eventually.

As George surprised Jenny with a tap on the shoulder and a big smile leaning forward and giving her
a rose Jenny was overwhelmed hugging George tightly. Ben walking down the other side of the road
looking and waving to everyone he sees with his cheeky smile see this and his heart breaks all over
the floor. As he checks George out to see what he has that he doesn’t he decides Jenny is not right
with him and he has to do something about it. He gets an idea and he runs into the next door florist.

George goes inside the shop Jenny stands outside checking her appearance in the window and
redoing her lipstick, Ben walks on over the road too excited to show Jenny what he’s got for her
when clumsily he trips up the step and falls into jenny as she turns around he gestures his apologies
and takes his hat of and bows down to give her the flowers, Jenny throws Georges one rose on the
floor and grabs the bouquet and kisses Ben on the cheek. Ben fans himself with his hat as he blushes
and almost falls to his knees; Jenny bats her eyelashes and stops him from falling. Ben sees George
come back out and says goodbye to Jenny with a kiss on the hand and strolls back over the road with
his head held high.

Ben and George fight it out till the end to see which one will win her heart giving her all sorts of gifts.
She gets bigger and better and more of each of them both. George doesn’t like what Ben is doing
Jenny was his first and he was so much popular now, everyone thought they was perfect, but Ben
really loved her and thought she was beautiful. Will it end up in a fight in this black and white
modernised film between these two idiots or will Jenny truly decide who she loves.

Original Treatment

  • 1.
    Emily Davis Two Idiotsand a Lady In the old black and white setting everything looks so much simpler in the small, happy town of Terabithia, everyone knew each other. Rival shops Asda and Morrisons were on opposite sides of the town and always had to be better than each other they always had to have the best, staff, customers and girls. George a rich business man proud co owner of the Asda. He’s a charmer and has a way with the ladies getting them all the flowers and meal deals they could possibly want. Until he lays eyes on a girl that he just has to have on his arm to show off to everybody in the town. She was his and he had to let her know just how beautiful he thought she was. George and Jenny just a few months down the line were smitten. George spoilt his girlfriend Jenny and made sure he showed her of he took her everywhere, always with his arm around her to show the other men to back off. Men would run up and beg to know how he did it; he would just push them with a smug smile on his face and chuckle. Ben a typical shelf stacker down the road at Morrisons the rival town store had loved Jenny ever since she had been shopping in Morrisons but never had the courage to talk to her so always used to hide away, but he was willing to do anything to end up with her eventually. As George surprised Jenny with a tap on the shoulder and a big smile leaning forward and giving her a rose Jenny was overwhelmed hugging George tightly. Ben walking down the other side of the road looking and waving to everyone he sees with his cheeky smile see this and his heart breaks all over the floor. As he checks George out to see what he has that he doesn’t he decides Jenny is not right with him and he has to do something about it. He gets an idea and he runs into the next door florist. George goes inside the shop Jenny stands outside checking her appearance in the window and redoing her lipstick, Ben walks on over the road too excited to show Jenny what he’s got for her when clumsily he trips up the step and falls into jenny as she turns around he gestures his apologies and takes his hat of and bows down to give her the flowers, Jenny throws Georges one rose on the floor and grabs the bouquet and kisses Ben on the cheek. Ben fans himself with his hat as he blushes and almost falls to his knees; Jenny bats her eyelashes and stops him from falling. Ben sees George come back out and says goodbye to Jenny with a kiss on the hand and strolls back over the road with his head held high. Ben and George fight it out till the end to see which one will win her heart giving her all sorts of gifts. She gets bigger and better and more of each of them both. George doesn’t like what Ben is doing Jenny was his first and he was so much popular now, everyone thought they was perfect, but Ben really loved her and thought she was beautiful. Will it end up in a fight in this black and white modernised film between these two idiots or will Jenny truly decide who she loves.