This document contains information about a student named Rebekha White's advanced production project for OCRG324, including feedback received from test audiences on a trailer created for a soap opera called "The Edge." The feedback indicated that the storylines and editing could be clearer, and suggested improvements like editing the music to hear characters more clearly and improving image quality. The student incorporated feedback to reorder scenes in a more linear fashion for the final trailer cut.

1. NAME: REBEKHA WHITE
CANDIDATENUMBER: 4953
Aquinas College: 33435
OCRG324
Advanced Production

2. BRIEF.

3. Question 3. What have you
learnt from audience feed
back?
I asked 8 people a few questions after sitting them down and watching my
trailer, some adults, some students and some media students.
6/8 people said they would defiantly tune into The
Edge after watching my trailer. The other two only
said no they wouldn’t as they didn’t watch any soap
operas and stated that they were not their “cup of
tea.”

4. Similar Audiences

5. “Juicy storylines
makes you want to
“The Music, how it helps
watch more.”
build the tension, and “How the
lyrics match up to the editing
storylines.” picks up
pace as
the
storyline
builds up”
What is your favourite element of the trailer?
“The Slap”
“The title card matches
the current E4 brand
identity”

6. What could I have done better?
Some of the edits contain surrounding/backgrounds
which in all entirety are not needed. E.g. grids in the
roof of the restaurant.
I changed this for my final cut.

7. “Edit the music more to
allow the characters to be “The sequence of edits
heard more clearly” could be slightly clearer”
What could I have done better?
“The quality of the image/camera could be better as
some of the pictures are not entirely clear, they
maybe be fuzzy or a bit pixelated”

8. Do you understand what is going on within the
storyline and narrative?
Audience feed back from my second rough cut revealed that to a few people the
storyline and narrative wasn’t as clear as they would like, this was due to the
editing. The editing was fast pace and switched between all the different
scenes in a non-linear order, as this did not work I played around with the
order for my final cut and felt a lot happier that my final cut now made much
more sense by keeping the cuts from each scenes closer together.
For example, the relationships between Crystal, Preston and
Pandora are now in my final cut shown mainly all together at the
beginning.

9. Who would sponsor my soap?