Mark Steven is applying for an internship position at L.P. Electronics and has sent his resume to Mr. James. In the letter, he outlines his relevant work experience in both volunteer and employed positions working with social and public companies, and his web development and software skills. He expresses confidence that he could make a creative and successful contribution to the company if hired as an intern beginning on January 23, 2015.

1. English for Active Communication Tue. 1
Grammar First Before Mail
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Paul Edward Aguirre

2. Job Application
Dear Mr. James:
This is Mark Steven from A.S.M. University. I sent my resume to you because I
want to be an intern for your company.
Over the past couple years, I’ve successfully held many positions. Some have
been volunteer, others employed positions. I have worked with social and
public companies. I’ve developed web page development skill and software
management.
With this broad experience, I am confident that I could creatively and
successfully add on to the significance of L.P . Electronics.
I would very much like to discuss the position of Intern with you. I could begin
work on January 23, 2015.
Sincerely,
Mark Steven
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3. Importance of learning how to
write a business e-mail
 Writing in a clear and professional style is important in
business
 You will need to write a lot of business letter once you are
employed in a company
 To show people how professional you are
 A good business letter can give a positive reflection on a
business and individual
 A good business letter can influence other people
 A good business letter can persuade other people
 A good business letter can encourage other people
 A good business letter can attract a lot of clients

4. Importance of learning how to
write a business e-mail
 In order to increase your chance to get in a company,
you will need to be able to write a good business letter
 When communicating with other companies, you have to
write a good business letter to attract their attention
 Effective business communication can shape your
company’s reputation
 Effective business communication can improve
productivity
 Effective business communication can develop clientele
 Effective business communication allow the company to
run more efficiently

5. Importance of learning how to
write a business e-mail
 Most jobs require writing e-mails, letters, reports, etc.
 The ability to write well is essential in obtaining a job
 It is also important for doing a job
 If you can write really well you could be promoted
 Those who do not write well are at a disadvantage in the
corporate world
 It also preserves your professional image

6. HOW TO IMPROVE ENGLISH E-MAIL
WRITING ABILITY
 INCREASE YOUR VOCABULARY
 IMPROVE YOUR GRAMMAR
 IMPROVE YOUR ENGLISH
COMMUNICATING SKILL
 IMPROVE YOUR ENGLISH WRITING SKILL
 READ DIFFERENT KINDS OF LETTERS OR
E-MAILS

7. Anyone can write a good business letter, as long as
they keep on practicing. It depends on you whether
you will improve or not.There are a lot materials
about business e-mails in the internet, library and
some other places. So if you really want to improve
your English skill and be able to write a good business
letter you just have keep on studying.
Conclusion

8. REFERENCES
http://www.writeexpress.com/writing-business.html
http://www.buzzle.com/articles/business-email-sample.html
http://www.ehow.com/about_5068187_parts-business-email.html