Malcolm has psychological difficulties after the death of his sister. Flashbacks show they had a close relationship, with her giving him a framed photo. He is called by the hospital for missing counselling sessions. He begins confronting his trauma through smashing the photo and visiting her grave. He has a vision of his sister who tells him to forget things he can't change and get over her. In his next counselling session, Malcolm feels he has gained closure from this experience.

1. Malcolm
Jake Beare and Ben Bullock

2. 1. SCHOOL SCENE
intention: audience understands that Malcolm has
psychological difficulties after the death of his older
sister. He would be walking down the school and many
people would give him weird looks to represent that he is
crazy.
2. FLASHBACK OF HIS SISTER GIVING HIM THE FRAMED PICTURE
the reason for this scene is to introduce his sister and
to show the audience that they had a close relationship.
ABI
Can I come in?
MALCOLM
Come on in.
Abi is looking awkward, having a small cheeky smile on
her face.
MALCOLM
What?
ABI
You know that picture that we
took in the park a few months
ago. Well, I loved it so much, I
got it framed.
Abi hands the framed picture to him, Malcolm's face
immediately beams.
MALCOLM
Ahh, you're right, it is a nice
photo.
ABI
Well,you look nice, it just looks
like theres something in my eye!
(laughs)
3. HOSPITAL CALL
to tell the audience he is going to counselling and due
to his unstable nature, he isn't going to the sessions.

3. 2
(CONTINUED)
MALCOLM
Hello?
SECRETARY (V/O)
Hi, am I speaking to Malcolm
Thompson.
MALCOLM
Yep
SECRETARY (V/O)
Well, I'm calling from the Capio
Nightingale hospital and it says
here that you haven't turned up
for sessions on over three weeks.
MALCOLM
Yes, I've just had a lot of
things on my plate.
SECRETARY (V/O)
Your mental health is not a
laughing matter Mr Thompson.
MALCOLM
I can assure you that my mental
health is at the top of my
agenda, its just I've had my
hands full.
Malcolm hangs up the phone.
SECRETARY (V/O)
Okay, so we will see you next
week? Hello? Mr Thompson?
Hello?
4. PICTURE BREAK
This would drop onto montage and show his difficulties
when he has to face the trauma that he has been blocking
out. All his emotions swirl up into one incredible
scene.
5. MONTAGE
to show Malcolm finally confronting his demons.
5A. GRAVE YARD
A very depressing clip of his just staring in anger and

4. 3
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: (2)
disgust at the grave stone.
5B. PICTURE SMASHING
this shows that this framed picture meant a lot to
Malcolm as it was his last sentimental object of his
sister that he had.
5C. ABI GIVING HIM THE PICTURE
Same footage as the flash back, showing to the audience
that the particular moment was incredibly meaningful to
him.
5D. CAR CRASH
This would show Malcolm distracting Abi and due to that
distraction she crashed.
5E. ANDY CONCERNED
Same footage from earlier scene.
5F. MALCOLM CRYING (PRESENT)
to show Malcolm's emotion while facing his demons and bad
memories.
MALCOLM
Its not my fault (repeats)
5G. PICTURE SMASHING
5H. THE GRAVEYARD
5I. CAR CRASH
5J. MALCOLM CRYING (PRESENT)
Malcolm is just banging his fists into the floor to show
his frustration.
5K. PICTURE SMASHING
5L. CAR CRASH
5M. THE GRAVEYARD
5N. ABI SMILING
5O. ABI'S FACE SMASHED IN THE PICTURE
5P. MALCOLM CRYING (PRESENT)

5. CONTINUED: (2) 4
6. MALCOLM SEES HIS SISTER
to show his sister is forgiving.
Malcolm is helped up by a familiar hand, he looks up and
is started. he can't believe it at first, but then he
looks angry.
ABI
You never used to clean anything
when I was here.
MALCOLM
What? how? You are dead, how are
you here? Are you here to taunt
me? Or am I just crazy?
ABI
You're not crazy, you're just
severely depressed.
MALCOLM
Why does it have to be so hard,
why did you have to die, how come
I didn't die?
ABI
Don't torture yourself with this.
MALCOLM
Torture myself? I love you, you
were the only person in the world
that i truly cared about, and you
were taken away from me. You
helped me, you clothed me, you
cared for me. without you, I'm
nothing. Its not fair! And its
all my fault, oh God, its all my
fault.
ABI
Malcolm, your mistakes can
control you, or you can control
your mistakes. You have to forget
the things that you can do
nothing about. You have to get
over me.

6. 5
(CONTINUED)
MALCOLM
But how?
ABI
I think you'll find that out in
counselling.
Abi is gone, Malcolm is alone, but this experience has
finally given him closure.
COUNSELLOR SESSION
The counsellor believes he has got better and believes
that he has made a break through
COUNSELLOR
So what did she say? when you
saw her?
MALCOLM
She said that it wasn't my fault
and that I had to get better.
COUNSELLOR
This is very common in people who
have lost someone, I feel that
you have made a break through.
MALCOLM
I hope so.