Lyric Analysis/Initial Ideas for Storyboarding                                Key words/phrases to be
Here is the where the
                                                                                                            emphasised in the video
location for the storyline                      First Verse                                                 through mise-en-scene.
needs to be introduced. A
club environment would be
                                                                                                            Here is the first
the most appropriate.
                                                                                                            opportunity to introduce
                          Working on a puzzle, the pieces of your mind.                                     the actress – location
                                                                                                            needs to be established
                                                                                                            before this.
This could be shown       Your lies are unstoppable, your looks are                                         Here the lyrics create
visually as a woman
whispering into a
                          undefined.                                                                        imagery to the audience,
                                                                                                            when combined with the
mans ear.
                                                                                                            camera this could be the
                          I can’t even talk to you, my friends would kill me                                most powerful part of the
                                                                                                            verse. Also the taboo nature
                          dead.                                                                             of the imagery created
                                                                                                            could actually support the
This could be shown                                                                                         genre conventions and has
to audiences as a         My only vision of you is sprawled across my bed.                                  potential to increase
man arguing or                                                                                              audience appeal when the
telling another man.      A shot of two tablets being swallowed should be at the end of                     target audience is
                          this verse.                                                                       considered.



In the first verse I think that there should be storyline shown to the audience in order to allow them to relate to the lyrics. Also in
support of this idea is the fact that the song only has two verse’s, meaning that there is limited opportunity for storyline style
shots. However due to the audience and product research I feel that an ‘intro’ to the video may be the best option as this would
establish the band and there were no strong objections to music video’s having introductions from the target audience.
Lyric Analysis/Initial Ideas for Storyboarding
                                                   Chorus (1)


                              ‘Cause I am the victor you cannot mess with me,

                              I’ll put you in your place my dear for everyone to                                This should be shot back
                                                                                                                to the storyline in order
Here the actress should
                              see,                                                                              to keep up the audiences
be seen again as the lyrics                                                                                     view of the woman and to
are about her and I feel                                                                                        break up a long
that more emphasis is
                              So keep on talking the talk and I will fight the fight,                           performance shot.
created by the audience
having a visual image of
her, alongside the lyrics
                              So do what you want my love but your coming
being stressed by the         home with me tonight…
song.

                              Coming home with me tonight.




   In this first chorus the lyrics describe the thoughts of an individual. Their are clearly thoughts of lust and maybe even arrogance.
   These enhanced feelings of attraction and confidence are the effect of alcohol and drugs on what are already strong human
   emotions. This chorus should be shot as performance with cuts back to storyline in order to emphasise certain lyrics.
Lyric Analysis/Initial Ideas for Storyboarding                       Key words/phrases
                                                                                                    to be emphasised in
                                                 Chorus (2)                                         the video through
                                                                                                    mise-en-scene.




                                    Trekking over boundaries, into enemy                             Here the lyrics describe
                                                                                                     the man ‘making his
                                    lines.                                                           move’ and approaching
                                                                                                     the woman. From where
                                                                                                     he has been sitting.
Camera spinning/ erratic,
                                    These Gary's are taking effect, I’m
possibly blurred.                   tripping out of my mind.
Enhanced colours in
waves.
In a crowd, walking                 Is this love? Or a little psychosis...
through a club.

                                    I’m on top of my game, I’m the                                   Camera should steady
                                                                                                     and regain focus on the
                                    champion of this.                                                actress.




  This second verse is the verse where the editing and camera really needs to be used to maximum effect to give the video impact.
  The lyrics are of a taboo nature and the way in which the lyrics describe actions and people could be deemed as derogatory
  towards women as the song in some ways objectifies them. However I think that the camera and editing could be used to almost
  lesson the theme of objectifying women and ultimately give appeal to the secondary audience of young women.
Lyric analysis

Lyric analysis

  • 1.
    Lyric Analysis/Initial Ideasfor Storyboarding Key words/phrases to be Here is the where the emphasised in the video location for the storyline First Verse through mise-en-scene. needs to be introduced. A club environment would be Here is the first the most appropriate. opportunity to introduce Working on a puzzle, the pieces of your mind. the actress – location needs to be established before this. This could be shown Your lies are unstoppable, your looks are Here the lyrics create visually as a woman whispering into a undefined. imagery to the audience, when combined with the mans ear. camera this could be the I can’t even talk to you, my friends would kill me most powerful part of the verse. Also the taboo nature dead. of the imagery created could actually support the This could be shown genre conventions and has to audiences as a My only vision of you is sprawled across my bed. potential to increase man arguing or audience appeal when the telling another man. A shot of two tablets being swallowed should be at the end of target audience is this verse. considered. In the first verse I think that there should be storyline shown to the audience in order to allow them to relate to the lyrics. Also in support of this idea is the fact that the song only has two verse’s, meaning that there is limited opportunity for storyline style shots. However due to the audience and product research I feel that an ‘intro’ to the video may be the best option as this would establish the band and there were no strong objections to music video’s having introductions from the target audience.
  • 2.
    Lyric Analysis/Initial Ideasfor Storyboarding Chorus (1) ‘Cause I am the victor you cannot mess with me, I’ll put you in your place my dear for everyone to This should be shot back to the storyline in order Here the actress should see, to keep up the audiences be seen again as the lyrics view of the woman and to are about her and I feel break up a long that more emphasis is So keep on talking the talk and I will fight the fight, performance shot. created by the audience having a visual image of her, alongside the lyrics So do what you want my love but your coming being stressed by the home with me tonight… song. Coming home with me tonight. In this first chorus the lyrics describe the thoughts of an individual. Their are clearly thoughts of lust and maybe even arrogance. These enhanced feelings of attraction and confidence are the effect of alcohol and drugs on what are already strong human emotions. This chorus should be shot as performance with cuts back to storyline in order to emphasise certain lyrics.
  • 3.
    Lyric Analysis/Initial Ideasfor Storyboarding Key words/phrases to be emphasised in Chorus (2) the video through mise-en-scene. Trekking over boundaries, into enemy Here the lyrics describe the man ‘making his lines. move’ and approaching the woman. From where he has been sitting. Camera spinning/ erratic, These Gary's are taking effect, I’m possibly blurred. tripping out of my mind. Enhanced colours in waves. In a crowd, walking Is this love? Or a little psychosis... through a club. I’m on top of my game, I’m the Camera should steady and regain focus on the champion of this. actress. This second verse is the verse where the editing and camera really needs to be used to maximum effect to give the video impact. The lyrics are of a taboo nature and the way in which the lyrics describe actions and people could be deemed as derogatory towards women as the song in some ways objectifies them. However I think that the camera and editing could be used to almost lesson the theme of objectifying women and ultimately give appeal to the secondary audience of young women.