• My understanding of the Redneck and Backwood subgenre was clear
• Not a predictable plot
• Plot is a achievable realistic target
• Film targets were clear and aimed to keep movie to a high quality
• Choice of films were all of the Backwood and Redneck subgenre
• Able to identify the conventions of my chosen subgenre
• Idea of plot may be too long (over 2 minutes)
• Idea has a conclusive ending which means more like a short story
• Too many characters as it will be hard to get that many
• To make the film an opening title sequence not like a short film to do this I will make sure there is no
conclusive ending
• Make sure blood prop is believable and not to over use it
• Use the appropriate costume for the antagonists and to make sure they have suitable murder weapons

Individual pitch feedback

  • 2.
    • My understandingof the Redneck and Backwood subgenre was clear • Not a predictable plot • Plot is a achievable realistic target • Film targets were clear and aimed to keep movie to a high quality • Choice of films were all of the Backwood and Redneck subgenre • Able to identify the conventions of my chosen subgenre
  • 3.
    • Idea ofplot may be too long (over 2 minutes) • Idea has a conclusive ending which means more like a short story • Too many characters as it will be hard to get that many
  • 4.
    • To makethe film an opening title sequence not like a short film to do this I will make sure there is no conclusive ending • Make sure blood prop is believable and not to over use it • Use the appropriate costume for the antagonists and to make sure they have suitable murder weapons