The document summarizes feedback received on a magazine draft from other students. The feedback praised the font of the masthead but suggested making images clearer. While the cover stories' images fit the theme well, their positioning could be improved. The logo image worked with the theme but was too bright. The features appealed to most ages but adding more for younger readers was recommended. A competition was seen as a good way to attract readers. The casual writing helped younger students understand. Receiving feedback helped identify what to improve to better engage the audience.