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E X P A N D
E X P A N D -
have a conversation with Dave
• Why? Where? Who? When?
What?
• What do you mean by _____?
• How do most people see this?
How do you see it differently?
• Are you kidding? I didn’t know
that. What else did you find
out?
• Can you give me an example?
• Did that surprise you?
• What other questions does this
raise?
• Who does this affect, mostly?
• What is being done about this?
• I’m not sure I believe this. Why do
you?
• What do you think we should do
about this?
E X P A N D -
“Begin at the beginning and go on till you come to the end: then stop”
- Lewis Carroll Alice’s Adventures in Wonderland
• Anecdote – story to frame your
paper topic
• Scene – a look at some
revealing aspect of your topic
• Profile – introduction of
someone who’s important to
your topic
• Background – important or
surprising background
information
• Quotation – a great quote that
captures the question your
paper will explore
• Dialogue – conversation
between people involved in your
topic
• Question – ask what you asked
about your research
• Contrast – compare two things
that highlight the problem you
explore
E X P A N D -
getting into the meat of your argument
• Be engaging, not bland
• Show how your topic affects
people AND a specific person
• Use specific, relatable
examples
• Emphasize the lesser known
details about your topic
• Keep returning to the
question/thesis that is driving
the essay
E X P A N D -
coming to an end
• avoid “kicking in the dead horse”
• avoid saying “in conclusion” or “to
conclude”
• avoid endings that trail off onto
different topics
• DO leave with an idea to reflect on
• CONSIDER trying the “snake
bite” technique

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  • 1. E X P A N D
  • 2. E X P A N D - have a conversation with Dave • Why? Where? Who? When? What? • What do you mean by _____? • How do most people see this? How do you see it differently? • Are you kidding? I didn’t know that. What else did you find out? • Can you give me an example? • Did that surprise you? • What other questions does this raise? • Who does this affect, mostly? • What is being done about this? • I’m not sure I believe this. Why do you? • What do you think we should do about this?
  • 3. E X P A N D - “Begin at the beginning and go on till you come to the end: then stop” - Lewis Carroll Alice’s Adventures in Wonderland • Anecdote – story to frame your paper topic • Scene – a look at some revealing aspect of your topic • Profile – introduction of someone who’s important to your topic • Background – important or surprising background information • Quotation – a great quote that captures the question your paper will explore • Dialogue – conversation between people involved in your topic • Question – ask what you asked about your research • Contrast – compare two things that highlight the problem you explore
  • 4. E X P A N D - getting into the meat of your argument • Be engaging, not bland • Show how your topic affects people AND a specific person • Use specific, relatable examples • Emphasize the lesser known details about your topic • Keep returning to the question/thesis that is driving the essay
  • 5. E X P A N D - coming to an end • avoid “kicking in the dead horse” • avoid saying “in conclusion” or “to conclude” • avoid endings that trail off onto different topics • DO leave with an idea to reflect on • CONSIDER trying the “snake bite” technique