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EU Clear English Tips for Translators
Nicolae Sfetcu
Published by MultiMedia Publishing
Copyright 2015 Nicolae Sfetcu
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Published by MultiMedia Publishing, www.telework.ro/en/publishing
ISBN: 978-606-033-560-3
This ebook represents an independent adaptation of the European Commission work 'Clear
English for EU translators', freely available at the official website of the European Union. ©
European Union, 2016. The original work was written and edited by Selim Earls, Directorate-
General for Translation, European Commission
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The author and publisher are providing this book and its contents on an “as is” basis and
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Here are some tips to help translators avoid copying structure and wording from other
languages that would be awkward in English. They should be useful to non-native speakers,
but may serve as handy reminders for native speakers too.
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Contents
EU Clear English Tips for Translators...........................................................................................................1
English prefers to be simple, concise and concrete.................................................................................5
Use simple words where appropriate......................................................................................................5
This means avoiding archaic legalese..................................................................................................6
Leave out unnecessary words.....................................................................................................................6
This includes unnecessary initial phrases.........................................................................................6
Prefer a verb to an abstract noun ..............................................................................................................7
This includes lists........................................................................................................................................7
Particularly avoid chains of abstract nouns......................................................................................8
Prefer a gerund to an abstract noun.........................................................................................................8
Prefer participles to relative clauses........................................................................................................8
And eliminate participles entirely if appropriate...........................................................................8
Use the passive voice sparingly..................................................................................................................9
Inanimate subjects with animate verbs are fine. ............................................................................9
The passive is appropriate in these sentences: ...............................................................................9
Consider replacing negatives with positives.........................................................................................9
Consider short forms and pronouns to avoid repeating full names …..................................... 10
… and instead of foreign or ad hoc abbreviations........................................................................ 10
Express conditions, including hidden ones, with ‘if’ ....................................................................... 10
... entitlement with ‘may’........................................................................................................................ 11
... and exceptions with ‘unless’ or ‘however’ (or ‘subject to’).................................................. 11
In general, cut out extra verbiage. .......................................................................................................... 11
English prefers straightforward syntax .................................................................................................... 13
Keep the subject close to the beginning of the sentence ............................................................... 13
Avoid splitting up subjects, modals, verbs and direct objects..................................................... 13
If a sentence is too long, pull information out into separate sentences................................... 13
But don’t change sentence boundaries in legislation................................................................. 14
Use topic-introducing phrases sparingly............................................................................................. 14
English may use different number, articles, gender or words from other languages............. 15
Keep uncountable nouns in the singular.............................................................................................. 15
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Use ‘a’ rather than ‘the’ for members of a class................................................................................. 15
If appropriate, use the singular for members of a class to avoid confusion...................... 15
Use ‘the’ rather than ‘this’ to refer back to a document. ........................................................... 16
Do not use gender pronouns for entities. ............................................................................................ 16
Consider alternatives to ‘of’. ..................................................................................................................... 16
Finally, avoid ‘false friends’ in translation........................................................................................... 16
Sources................................................................................................................................................................... 18
About the editor.................................................................................................................................................. 19
Nicolae Sfetcu.................................................................................................................................................. 19
Contact.......................................................................................................................................................... 19
Publishing House................................................................................................................................................ 20
MultiMedia Publishing ................................................................................................................................ 20
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English prefers to be simple, concise and
concrete.
Use simple words where appropriate.
• Change > to
• initiate a programme > start a programme
• apply for employment > apply for a job
• activities of a criminal nature > crime
• contribute to constructing Europe > help build Europe
• require assistance > need help
• request remuneration > ask for a fee
• specialised methodologies > special methods
• an agricultural holding with caprine animals > a goat farm
• with a possibility of dissemination to producers > and may be sent to
producers
• in view / light of the fact that fees are high > because / as fees are high
• pursuant to / in accordance with / within the framework of this Law >
under / according to this Law
• for the purpose of protecting consumers > to protect consumers
• for the purpose of its use as a guide > to be used / for use as a guide
• important from the point of view of producers > important for producers
• the Directive concerning / regarding / relating to financial services > the
Directive on financial services / the Financial Services Directive
• despite the fact that resources are limited > although resources are limited
• prior to / subsequent to the Council Decision > before / after the Council
Decision
• at the time when the application is submitted > when the application is
submitted
• until such time as a decision is taken > until a decision is taken
• on the occasion of its accession to the EU > when it joined the EU / on
joining the EU / upon accession to the EU
• Action is needed at the present time. > Action is needed now.
• Help is needed in the near future. > Help is needed soon.
• updated on a daily basis > updated daily
• the study demonstrates / indicates that > the study shows that
• the Commission is aware of the fact that > the Commission knows that
• in the event of an emergency > in an emergency
• in the same context, it is necessary > it is also necessary
• equal or superior to EUR 10 000 > EUR 10 000 or more
• She suffered an armed attack. > She was shot.
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• It is inadvisable to be in control of a moving vehicle when suffering from
fatigue. > Do not drive if you are tired.
This means avoiding archaic legalese.
• Change > to
• The matter was put to the Style Guide Committee (hereinafter ‘the
Committee’). The Committee …. > The matter was put to the Style Guide
Committee. The Committee …
• Contract between the County of Needham (hereinafter referred to as ‘the
County’) and Acme Imports (hereinafter referred to as ‘Acme’). > Contract
between the County of Needham (‘the County’) and Acme Imports (‘Acme’)
• the aforementioned professions. > these / the above professions
Leave out unnecessary words
• Change > to
• Article 1 of the present Regulation / hereof > Article 1 (of this Regulation)
• the matter / question / subject of state aid > state aid
• under the provisions / terms of the Directive > under the Directive
• the Commission’s services > the Commission
• the Hungarian authorities > Hungary
• the decision by the management of Acme > the decision by Acme / Acme’s
decision
• the training process > training
• a period of five years > five years
• the / an amount of EUR 10 000 > EUR 10 000
• increase funding levels > increase funding
• under the conditions encountered in practice > in practice
• actually implemented the reform package > implemented the reform package
• including, but not limited to, the following: > including:
• a person designated as responsible team leader > a designated team leader
• The Board decided to suspend her mandate. > The Board suspended her
mandate.
• High prices harm consumers’ interests. > High prices harm consumers.
• For the operation of any lifting equipment it is absolutely required for the
operator to be equipped with the corresponding licence. > A licence is
required for the operation of any lifting equipment.
This includes unnecessary initial phrases.
• Change > to
• It must be noted that high prices harm consumers. > High prices harm
consumers.
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• The Commission notes that the deal was unlawful. > The deal was unlawful.
• In this respect, I should like to recall the consistent rulings of the Court,
according to which ... > The Court has consistently ruled that ...
Prefer a verb to an abstract noun
• Change > to
• carry out an evaluation of performance > evaluate performance
• conduct an investigation into fraud > investigate fraud
• perform an audit of operations > audit operations
• give consideration to consumers’ concerns > consider consumers’ concerns
• secure the involvement / participation of students > involve students
• upon the expiration of the time period > when the time period expires
• within 30 days following notification to farmers > within 30 days after
farmers are notified
• make a/the recommendation that > recommend that
• contains a discussion of results > discusses results
• effect payment of EUR 10 000 > pay EUR 10 000
• bring about an improvement in quality > improve quality
• come to an agreement to the effect that > agree that
• Law 485/2010 on the amendment of Law 22/2006 > Law 485/2010
amending Law 22/2006
• after the setting up of the Institute > after the Institute was set up
• introduce a ban on smoking > ban smoking
• cause harm to consumers > harm consumers
• bring about an increase in funding > increase funding
• proceed to the counting of the votes > count the votes
• provide a response to the complaint > respond to the complaint
• The funding of projects takes place centrally. > Projects are funded centrally.
• Changes to the Law did not come about. > The Law was not changed.
• The project will be subject to an evaluation. > The project will be evaluated.
• The practice of crop rotation is regular. > Crops are regularly rotated.
This includes lists.
• The project will achieve the following results: > The project will:
o creation of contacts … > create contacts …
o preparation of recommendations … > prepare recommendations …
• Officers are responsible for tasks including: > Officers:
o supervision of work ... > supervise work ...
o monitoring of progress ... > monitor progress ...
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Particularly avoid chains of abstract nouns.
• This will create the possibility of modifications of the methods of
implementation of the project. > This will make it possible to change how
the project is implemented.
• The aim of the programme is the improvement of the effectiveness of the
work of customs authorities for the purpose of the protection of EU interests.
> The programme aims to help customs authorities protect EU interests.
Prefer a gerund to an abstract noun
• Change > to
• the preservation of public health > preserving public health
• by the introduction of a speed limit > by introducing a speed limit
• the cost of the provision of a service > the cost of providing a service
• through the acquisition of new skills > by acquiring new skills
Note that the gerund makes a noun phrase from an entire clause, not just a verb.
• the taking of a decision > taking a decision
• the building of an area of justice > building an area of justice
Thus, a simple gerund can often replace a pair of abstract nouns.
• the submission of an application for a job > applying for a job
• the development of a design for a project > designing a project
Prefer participles to relative clauses
• Change > to
• a project which is funded by the EU > a project funded by the EU / an EU-
funded project
• a plan which has been approved by the Committee > a plan approved by the
Committee
• the team which is planning the project > the team planning the project
• a staff member who is working part-time > a staff member working part-tim
And eliminate participles entirely if appropriate.
• a report prepared / drawn up / written / submitted / issued / published by
our firm > a report by our firm
• a decision taken / issued by the Board > a decision by the Board / a Board
decision
• a plan made / proposed / formulated by the EU > a plan by the EU / an EU
plan
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• a study conducted by the UN > a study by the UN / a UN study
• a letter sent / addressed to Member States > a letter to Member States
• a factory located in Warsaw > a factory in Warsaw
• staff working at / employed by the Commission > staff at the Commission /
Commission staff
• an article published / appearing in a journal > an article in a journal
• a company producing / manufacturing clothing > a clothing company
• a table containing / showing / listing results > a table of results
• a report discussing / presenting progress made > a report on progress / a
progress report
• a programme aimed at / serving / helping children > a programme for
children
• methods used in planning aid > ways of planning aid / how aid is planned
• reasons underlying crime > reasons for crime / why crime is committed
Use the passive voice sparingly
• Change > to
• An extension may be requested by any party. > Any party may request an
extension.
• This project was rejected at Commission level. > The Commission rejected the
project.
• A meeting was held in Paris between A and B. > A and B met in Paris.
Inanimate subjects with animate verbs are fine.
• In Article 20 it is stated … > Article 20 states …
• Institutional reform is advocated in the report. > The report advocates
institutional reform.
The passive is appropriate in these sentences:
• > The team’s findings are detailed on page 8.
• > These provisions may be amended by a decision of the Minister for Finance.
Consider replacing negatives with positives
• Change > to
• It is not uncommon for requests to be rejected. > It is common for requests to
be rejected.
• It is not excluded / not impossible that we will fail. > It is (entirely) possible
that we will fail. / We may (well) fail.
• The penalty shall be not less than EUR 10 000. > The penalty shall be at least
EUR 10 000.
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• Failure to observe the rules is subject to a penalty. > Breach of the rules is
subject to a penalty.
• The realisation of road work by workers who are not certified is prohibited. >
Road work may be performed only by certified road workers.
• The Comission never acts without consulting stakeholders. > The Commission
always consults stakeholders before acting.
Consider short forms and pronouns to avoid repeating
full names …
• Change > to
• The Startup Financing Scheme grants loans to new businesses. In this way,
the Startup Financing Scheme stimulates competition. > The Scheme grants
loans to new businesses. In this way, it stimulates competition.
• The Special Investigations Department of the Ministry of Labour, Social
Security and Welfare has investigated the allegations. > We have investigated
the allegations.
… and instead of foreign or ad hoc abbreviations.
• the National Institute for Quality and Organisational Development of Health
Care and Medicines (GYEMSZI) … GYEMSZI … > the National Institute for
Quality and Organisational Development of Health Care and Medicines … the
Institute / it …
• the Financial Control Methodology and Internal Audit Department (FCMIAD) of
the Ministry of Finance (MF) of the Slovak Republic (SR) … the FCMIAD MF SR
… > the Financial Control Methodology and Internal Audit Department of the
Ministry of Finance of the Slovak Republic … the Department / it …
Express conditions, including hidden ones, with ‘if’ ...
• Change > to
• in the event / case of a successful application > if your application is accepted
• when / where a beneficiary fails to comply > if a beneficiary fails to comply
• provided that the application is received in time > if the application is received
in time
• in the event of a sale or transfer of the holding > if the holding is sold or
transferred
• should you need more information > if you need more information
• A manufacturer who does not have a place of business in a Member State shall
designate an authorised representative. > A manufacturer shall designate an
authorised representative if it does not have a place of business in a Member
State.
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• A proposal which does not comply with applicable legislation may be excluded.
> A proposal may be excluded if it does not comply with applicable legislation.
... entitlement with ‘may’...
• Each owner shall be entitled to grant a licence to a third party to exploit the
jointly owned results. > Each owner may grant a licence to a third party to
exploit the jointly owned results.
• A beneficiary is allowed to use a simplified method for calculating eligible
costs. > A beneficiary may use a simplified method for calculating eligible costs.
• The negotiating body shall have the right to meet without the central
management. > The negotiating body may meet without the central
management.
... and exceptions with ‘unless’ or ‘however’ (or ‘subject to’).
• except where expressly authorised in this Annex > unless expressly authorised
in this Annex
• without prejudice to Article 2 (1) > subject to / unless otherwise provided
for in / without prejudice to Article 2
• Without prejudice to the aforementioned provisions, a licence is not
required for … > (However,) A licence is not required for …
(1) ‘Without prejudice to …’ does exist in legal English, including EU law, but is used less
than in other languages. Consider alternatives if uncertain.
In general, cut out extra verbiage.
• Change > to
• dockworkers who have obtained the relevant authorisation to practise the
profession of dockworker > authorised dockworkers
• ensure the suitability of the equipment used for the performance of work
and its safety for use > ensure that equipment is suitable and safe
• The cartel’s purpose was to maintain prices at their prevailing, elevated
level. > The cartel aimed to keep prices high.
• Further to the letter by which the Commission asked our authorities to
provide clarification of this matter, we would like to provide the following
opinion. > Please find enclosed our response to your request for more
information on this matter.
• It is not necessary that the Commission provide evidence of
implementation of the agreement between the participants to fix prices, but
only that it prove the existence of such an agreement. > The Commission
must show that the participants agreed to fix prices, not that they actually
did so.
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• Part of the responsibility of the responsible team leader is also the
confirmation that the totality of the workers who compose the team are
wearing a work uniform which ensures their safety at work. > The team
leader must ensure that each worker on the team is wearing a safety uniform.
• The notice seeks to increase understanding of the Commission’s investigation
process and thereby enhance the efficiency of investigations and ensure a
high degree of transparency and predictability in the process. > The notice
explains the Commission’s investigation process to ensure that it is efficient,
transparent and predictable.
• The compositions of the teams for the performance of every type of
construction work may not deviate from those provided for in the legislation
on the branch of construction workers. > Construction teams must be
composed as provided for in relevant legislation.
• ‘Cargo work’ means loading any good or item for transport or movement
from the point of storage onto any means of transport or unloading from the
means of transport to the point of storage. > ‘Cargo work’ means moving
cargo from a place where it is stored onto a means of transport or vice versa.
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English prefers straightforward syntax
Keep the subject close to the beginning of the sentence
• Change > to
• Under the agreement and subject to the call for proposals, the Commission
shall fund the project. > The Commission shall fund the project under the
agreement and subject to the call for proposals.
• If a party does not respond in time or if no agreement is reached within the
maximum time period, the Contracting Party will consider the procedure to
have failed. > The Contracting Party will consider the procedure to have failed
if a party does not respond in time or if no agreement is reached within the
maximum time period.
• As the provision which gave rise to the Commission’s objections ceased to apply
before the deadline for response, the Commission’s objections are obsolete. >
The provision which gave rise to the Commission’s objections ceased to apply
before the deadline for response. Those objections are therefore obsolete.
Avoid splitting up subjects, modals, verbs and direct
objects
• Change > to
• The team reported to the Board its findings. > The team reported its findings
to the Board.
• An applicant may, within 14 days, contest in writing the Committee’s
decision. > An applicant may contest the Committee’s decision in writing
within 14 days.
• The Commission shall, if the proposal is approved, fund the project. > If the
proposal is approved, the Commission shall fund the project.
• The judicial council may, by means of an order setting out the grounds for its
decision, extend the investigation period. > The judicial council may extend the
investigation period by means of an order setting out the grounds for its
decision.
• The guidelines, from which the Commission may not depart without giving
reasons, lay down the criteria for setting the amount of a fine. > The guidelines
lay down the criteria for setting the amount of a fine. The Commission must
give reasons if it departs from the guidelines.
If a sentence is too long, pull information out into
separate sentences.
• Change > to
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• Under the current system, if a manufacturer does not comply with the
Regulation, the Ministry may, taking account of the principle of
proportionality, withdraw the manufacturer’s licence unless it takes
measures to ensure its compliance within a reasonable time. > Under the
current system, the Ministry may withdraw the licence of a manufacturer if it
does not comply with the Regulation. The Ministry must act proportionally.
It need not act if the manufacturer takes measures to ensure its
compliance within a reasonable time.
But don’t change sentence boundaries in legislation.
As a work-around, split with references and semicolons.
• All documents must be sent, once evidence has been taken, to the prosecutor,
who, within a period of one month, shall submit them to the court, which,
within a period of one month, shall either reject the case or issue a court order,
even for related offences, regardless of how serious they are, when it considers
that there is no indication of one of the crimes in Article 1. > Once evidence has
been taken, all documents must be sent to the prosecutor; the prosecutor has
one month to submit the documents to the court; the court then has one month
either to reject the case or to issue a court order; this also applies to related
offences, regardless of how serious they are; this provision does not apply if
the court considers that the case involves one of the crimes in Article 1.
Use topic-introducing phrases sparingly.
• Change > to
• Concerning / When it comes to state aid, the speaker outlined his proposals. >
The speaker outlined his proposals on state aid.
• As far as these goals are concerned, the report states that progress is being
made. > The report states that progress is being made towards achieving these
goals.
• When it comes to fighting disease, lives may depend on it. > Lives may depend
on fighting disease.
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English may use different number,
articles, gender or words from other
languages
Keep uncountable nouns in the singular.
• Change > to
• informations on EU policy > information on EU policy
• trainings for staff > training for staff
• aids to farmers > aid to farmers
• actions (1) to help students > action to help students
• the impacts (1) on health > the impact on health
• professional competences (1) > professional competence
• EU agricultural policies (2) > EU agricultural policy
• best agricultural practices (2) > best agricultural practice
• training materials (2) > training material(s)
• crimes (2( against EU interests > crime(s) against EU interests
(1) Words like 'actions', 'impacts' and 'competences' do appear in EU English, under
influence from other languages.
(2) Some nouns, like 'policy', 'practice', 'material' and 'crime', can be countable or
uncountable. Though the line is not always clear, they are countable referring to an
individual concept and uncountable referring to a collective one.
Use ‘a’ rather than ‘the’ for members of a class.
• Change > to
• The worker on the site should wear the uniform. > A worker on a site should
wear a uniform.
• The application for the child to attend the school activity must be signed by the
parent. > An application for a child to attend a school activity must be signed by
a parent.
If appropriate, use the singular for members of a class to avoid
confusion.
• Workers will receive computers. > Each worker will receive a computer.
• Plumbers with professional licences may: > A plumber with a professional
licence may:
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Use ‘the’ rather than ‘this’ to refer back to a document.
• Change > to
• Regulation 23/2000 … this Regulation … > Regulation 23/2000 … the
Regulation …
(Use ‘this’ for the present document.) >
Do not use gender pronouns for entities.
• Change > to
• The contractor has announced his decision. > The contractor has announced its
decision.
• Any inaccuracies found in a producer’s file will disqualify him or her. > Any
inaccuracies in a producer’s file will disqualify the / that producer.
Consider alternatives to ‘of’.
• Change > to
• the largest lake of Italy > the largest lake in Italy / Italy's largest lake
• support of young people > support for young people
• officers of the crime division > officers in the crime division
• a decision of the Court > a decision by the Court / a Court decision
• participants of projects > participants in projects / project participants
• staff of the company > staff at the company / company staff
Finally, avoid ‘false friends’ in translation.
• Change > to
• adequate mechanisms > suitable / appropriate mechanisms
• an attestation of registration > a letter certifying / certificate of registration
• in the case of Greece > for Greece
• ordinary citizens > ordinary people / consumers / users
• projects coherent with sectoral priorities > projects consistent with sectoral
priorities
• The Commission communicated its decision to the national authorities. > The
Commission notified the national authorities of its decision.
• respect for national competences > respect for national powers / jurisdiction
• This Regulation completes Regulation … > This Regulation supplements
Regulation …
• consequent policy > consistent policy
• Consumption is stable. > Consumer spending is stable.
• to control imports > to check / verify / inspect / monitor imports
• to carry out a control > to carry out a(n) audit / check / inspection
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• Criminality is on the rise. > Crime is on the rise.
• to deepen relations > to expand / improve relations
• The dossier is closed. > The issue / matter is closed.
• Many economic operators have been hurt. > Many businesses / traders have
been hurt.
• to elaborate / formulate / establish a plan > to draft / draw up / develop /
produce a plan
• to have a positive effect on production > to help / boost production
• to have a negative effect on consumers > to hurt / harm / be detrimental to
consumers
• all elements of the process > all aspects / items / stages of the process
• to exercise a profession > to practise a profession
• to exercise the profession of lawyer > to work as a lawyer
• to exploit a farm > to run / operate a farm
• to foresee a ban > to provide for / impose a ban
• to foresee action > to envisage / plan / contemplate action
• in the framework of the plan > as part of / under the plan
• heterogeneous conditions > uneven / disparate conditions
• illegal state aid > unlawful state aid
• an important amount > a large / significant amount
• informatics experts > IT / ICT / computer experts
• an information note > a memo / letter
• to intervene at a meeting > to speak / take the floor at a meeting
• EU intervention > EU activity / projects / action / involvement
• to introduce a demand for aid > to apply for aid
• to provide justification > to provide evidence / an explanation
• agricultural material > agricultural supplies / equipment
• modalities for payment > arrangements for payment
• a negative evolution in trade > a downturn / decrease / drop in trade
• the economic perspective > the economic prospects / outlook
• to realise a project > to implement, carry out, complete a project
• to invite reflection > to invite discussion / debate / thought
• to reinforce transparency > to enhance / improve / increase / heighten
transparency
• to represent an actor for change > to help bring about change
• to respect / adhere to conditions > to comply with / fulfil / meet conditions
• sickness insurance > health insurance
• to transmit a report > to send a report
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Sources
• Cansdale, G., Tips for Slovak translators translating from Slovak into English
• European Commission, How to Write Clearly
• Agerbeek, F., The Essential Guide to Drafting Commission Documents on EU
Competition Law
• Gardner, J., A Brief List of Misused English Terminology in EU Publications
• Russsell, Gayl and Mills, Louise, Clear Legal Writing [unpublished presentation]
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About the editor
Nicolae Sfetcu
Owner and manager with MultiMedia SRL and MultiMedia Publishing House.
Project Coordinator for European Teleworking Development Romania (ETD)
Member of Rotary Club Bucuresti Atheneum
Cofounder and ex-president of the Mehedinti Branch of Romanian Association for
Electronic Industry and Software
Initiator, cofounder and president of Romanian Association for Telework and Teleactivities
Member of Internet Society
Initiator, cofounder and ex-president of Romanian Teleworking Society
Cofounder and ex-president of the Mehedinti Branch of the General Association of
Engineers in Romania
Physicist engineer - Bachelor of Physics, Major Nuclear Physics. Master of Philosophy.
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EU Clear English Tips for Translators - eBook

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  • 2. EU Clear English Tips for Translators Nicolae Sfetcu Published by MultiMedia Publishing Copyright 2015 Nicolae Sfetcu
  • 3. NICOLAE SFETCU: EU CLEAR ENGLISH TIPS FOR TRANSLATORS 2 Published by MultiMedia Publishing, www.telework.ro/en/publishing ISBN: 978-606-033-560-3 This ebook represents an independent adaptation of the European Commission work 'Clear English for EU translators', freely available at the official website of the European Union. © European Union, 2016. The original work was written and edited by Selim Earls, Directorate- General for Translation, European Commission DISCLAIMER: The author and publisher are providing this book and its contents on an “as is” basis and make no representations or warranties of any kind with respect to this book or its contents. The author and publisher disclaim all such representations and warranties for a particular purpose. In addition, the author and publisher do not represent or warrant that the information accessible via this book is accurate, complete or current. Except as specifically stated in this book, neither the author or publisher, nor any authors, contributors, or other representatives will be liable for damages arising out of or in connection with the use of this book. This is a comprehensive limitation of liability that applies to all damages of any kind, including (without limitation) compensatory; direct, indirect or consequential damages, including for third parties. You understand that this book is not intended as a substitute for consultation with a licensed, educational, legal or finance professional. Before you use it in any way, you will consult a licensed professional to ensure that you are doing what’s best for your situation. This book provides content related to educational topics. As such, use of this book implies your acceptance of this disclaimer. Here are some tips to help translators avoid copying structure and wording from other languages that would be awkward in English. They should be useful to non-native speakers, but may serve as handy reminders for native speakers too.
  • 4. NICOLAE SFETCU: EU CLEAR ENGLISH TIPS FOR TRANSLATORS 3 Contents EU Clear English Tips for Translators...........................................................................................................1 English prefers to be simple, concise and concrete.................................................................................5 Use simple words where appropriate......................................................................................................5 This means avoiding archaic legalese..................................................................................................6 Leave out unnecessary words.....................................................................................................................6 This includes unnecessary initial phrases.........................................................................................6 Prefer a verb to an abstract noun ..............................................................................................................7 This includes lists........................................................................................................................................7 Particularly avoid chains of abstract nouns......................................................................................8 Prefer a gerund to an abstract noun.........................................................................................................8 Prefer participles to relative clauses........................................................................................................8 And eliminate participles entirely if appropriate...........................................................................8 Use the passive voice sparingly..................................................................................................................9 Inanimate subjects with animate verbs are fine. ............................................................................9 The passive is appropriate in these sentences: ...............................................................................9 Consider replacing negatives with positives.........................................................................................9 Consider short forms and pronouns to avoid repeating full names …..................................... 10 … and instead of foreign or ad hoc abbreviations........................................................................ 10 Express conditions, including hidden ones, with ‘if’ ....................................................................... 10 ... entitlement with ‘may’........................................................................................................................ 11 ... and exceptions with ‘unless’ or ‘however’ (or ‘subject to’).................................................. 11 In general, cut out extra verbiage. .......................................................................................................... 11 English prefers straightforward syntax .................................................................................................... 13 Keep the subject close to the beginning of the sentence ............................................................... 13 Avoid splitting up subjects, modals, verbs and direct objects..................................................... 13 If a sentence is too long, pull information out into separate sentences................................... 13 But don’t change sentence boundaries in legislation................................................................. 14 Use topic-introducing phrases sparingly............................................................................................. 14 English may use different number, articles, gender or words from other languages............. 15 Keep uncountable nouns in the singular.............................................................................................. 15
  • 5. NICOLAE SFETCU: EU CLEAR ENGLISH TIPS FOR TRANSLATORS 4 Use ‘a’ rather than ‘the’ for members of a class................................................................................. 15 If appropriate, use the singular for members of a class to avoid confusion...................... 15 Use ‘the’ rather than ‘this’ to refer back to a document. ........................................................... 16 Do not use gender pronouns for entities. ............................................................................................ 16 Consider alternatives to ‘of’. ..................................................................................................................... 16 Finally, avoid ‘false friends’ in translation........................................................................................... 16 Sources................................................................................................................................................................... 18 About the editor.................................................................................................................................................. 19 Nicolae Sfetcu.................................................................................................................................................. 19 Contact.......................................................................................................................................................... 19 Publishing House................................................................................................................................................ 20 MultiMedia Publishing ................................................................................................................................ 20
  • 6. NICOLAE SFETCU: EU CLEAR ENGLISH TIPS FOR TRANSLATORS 5 English prefers to be simple, concise and concrete. Use simple words where appropriate. • Change > to • initiate a programme > start a programme • apply for employment > apply for a job • activities of a criminal nature > crime • contribute to constructing Europe > help build Europe • require assistance > need help • request remuneration > ask for a fee • specialised methodologies > special methods • an agricultural holding with caprine animals > a goat farm • with a possibility of dissemination to producers > and may be sent to producers • in view / light of the fact that fees are high > because / as fees are high • pursuant to / in accordance with / within the framework of this Law > under / according to this Law • for the purpose of protecting consumers > to protect consumers • for the purpose of its use as a guide > to be used / for use as a guide • important from the point of view of producers > important for producers • the Directive concerning / regarding / relating to financial services > the Directive on financial services / the Financial Services Directive • despite the fact that resources are limited > although resources are limited • prior to / subsequent to the Council Decision > before / after the Council Decision • at the time when the application is submitted > when the application is submitted • until such time as a decision is taken > until a decision is taken • on the occasion of its accession to the EU > when it joined the EU / on joining the EU / upon accession to the EU • Action is needed at the present time. > Action is needed now. • Help is needed in the near future. > Help is needed soon. • updated on a daily basis > updated daily • the study demonstrates / indicates that > the study shows that • the Commission is aware of the fact that > the Commission knows that • in the event of an emergency > in an emergency • in the same context, it is necessary > it is also necessary • equal or superior to EUR 10 000 > EUR 10 000 or more • She suffered an armed attack. > She was shot.
  • 7. NICOLAE SFETCU: EU CLEAR ENGLISH TIPS FOR TRANSLATORS 6 • It is inadvisable to be in control of a moving vehicle when suffering from fatigue. > Do not drive if you are tired. This means avoiding archaic legalese. • Change > to • The matter was put to the Style Guide Committee (hereinafter ‘the Committee’). The Committee …. > The matter was put to the Style Guide Committee. The Committee … • Contract between the County of Needham (hereinafter referred to as ‘the County’) and Acme Imports (hereinafter referred to as ‘Acme’). > Contract between the County of Needham (‘the County’) and Acme Imports (‘Acme’) • the aforementioned professions. > these / the above professions Leave out unnecessary words • Change > to • Article 1 of the present Regulation / hereof > Article 1 (of this Regulation) • the matter / question / subject of state aid > state aid • under the provisions / terms of the Directive > under the Directive • the Commission’s services > the Commission • the Hungarian authorities > Hungary • the decision by the management of Acme > the decision by Acme / Acme’s decision • the training process > training • a period of five years > five years • the / an amount of EUR 10 000 > EUR 10 000 • increase funding levels > increase funding • under the conditions encountered in practice > in practice • actually implemented the reform package > implemented the reform package • including, but not limited to, the following: > including: • a person designated as responsible team leader > a designated team leader • The Board decided to suspend her mandate. > The Board suspended her mandate. • High prices harm consumers’ interests. > High prices harm consumers. • For the operation of any lifting equipment it is absolutely required for the operator to be equipped with the corresponding licence. > A licence is required for the operation of any lifting equipment. This includes unnecessary initial phrases. • Change > to • It must be noted that high prices harm consumers. > High prices harm consumers.
  • 8. NICOLAE SFETCU: EU CLEAR ENGLISH TIPS FOR TRANSLATORS 7 • The Commission notes that the deal was unlawful. > The deal was unlawful. • In this respect, I should like to recall the consistent rulings of the Court, according to which ... > The Court has consistently ruled that ... Prefer a verb to an abstract noun • Change > to • carry out an evaluation of performance > evaluate performance • conduct an investigation into fraud > investigate fraud • perform an audit of operations > audit operations • give consideration to consumers’ concerns > consider consumers’ concerns • secure the involvement / participation of students > involve students • upon the expiration of the time period > when the time period expires • within 30 days following notification to farmers > within 30 days after farmers are notified • make a/the recommendation that > recommend that • contains a discussion of results > discusses results • effect payment of EUR 10 000 > pay EUR 10 000 • bring about an improvement in quality > improve quality • come to an agreement to the effect that > agree that • Law 485/2010 on the amendment of Law 22/2006 > Law 485/2010 amending Law 22/2006 • after the setting up of the Institute > after the Institute was set up • introduce a ban on smoking > ban smoking • cause harm to consumers > harm consumers • bring about an increase in funding > increase funding • proceed to the counting of the votes > count the votes • provide a response to the complaint > respond to the complaint • The funding of projects takes place centrally. > Projects are funded centrally. • Changes to the Law did not come about. > The Law was not changed. • The project will be subject to an evaluation. > The project will be evaluated. • The practice of crop rotation is regular. > Crops are regularly rotated. This includes lists. • The project will achieve the following results: > The project will: o creation of contacts … > create contacts … o preparation of recommendations … > prepare recommendations … • Officers are responsible for tasks including: > Officers: o supervision of work ... > supervise work ... o monitoring of progress ... > monitor progress ...
  • 9. NICOLAE SFETCU: EU CLEAR ENGLISH TIPS FOR TRANSLATORS 8 Particularly avoid chains of abstract nouns. • This will create the possibility of modifications of the methods of implementation of the project. > This will make it possible to change how the project is implemented. • The aim of the programme is the improvement of the effectiveness of the work of customs authorities for the purpose of the protection of EU interests. > The programme aims to help customs authorities protect EU interests. Prefer a gerund to an abstract noun • Change > to • the preservation of public health > preserving public health • by the introduction of a speed limit > by introducing a speed limit • the cost of the provision of a service > the cost of providing a service • through the acquisition of new skills > by acquiring new skills Note that the gerund makes a noun phrase from an entire clause, not just a verb. • the taking of a decision > taking a decision • the building of an area of justice > building an area of justice Thus, a simple gerund can often replace a pair of abstract nouns. • the submission of an application for a job > applying for a job • the development of a design for a project > designing a project Prefer participles to relative clauses • Change > to • a project which is funded by the EU > a project funded by the EU / an EU- funded project • a plan which has been approved by the Committee > a plan approved by the Committee • the team which is planning the project > the team planning the project • a staff member who is working part-time > a staff member working part-tim And eliminate participles entirely if appropriate. • a report prepared / drawn up / written / submitted / issued / published by our firm > a report by our firm • a decision taken / issued by the Board > a decision by the Board / a Board decision • a plan made / proposed / formulated by the EU > a plan by the EU / an EU plan
  • 10. NICOLAE SFETCU: EU CLEAR ENGLISH TIPS FOR TRANSLATORS 9 • a study conducted by the UN > a study by the UN / a UN study • a letter sent / addressed to Member States > a letter to Member States • a factory located in Warsaw > a factory in Warsaw • staff working at / employed by the Commission > staff at the Commission / Commission staff • an article published / appearing in a journal > an article in a journal • a company producing / manufacturing clothing > a clothing company • a table containing / showing / listing results > a table of results • a report discussing / presenting progress made > a report on progress / a progress report • a programme aimed at / serving / helping children > a programme for children • methods used in planning aid > ways of planning aid / how aid is planned • reasons underlying crime > reasons for crime / why crime is committed Use the passive voice sparingly • Change > to • An extension may be requested by any party. > Any party may request an extension. • This project was rejected at Commission level. > The Commission rejected the project. • A meeting was held in Paris between A and B. > A and B met in Paris. Inanimate subjects with animate verbs are fine. • In Article 20 it is stated … > Article 20 states … • Institutional reform is advocated in the report. > The report advocates institutional reform. The passive is appropriate in these sentences: • > The team’s findings are detailed on page 8. • > These provisions may be amended by a decision of the Minister for Finance. Consider replacing negatives with positives • Change > to • It is not uncommon for requests to be rejected. > It is common for requests to be rejected. • It is not excluded / not impossible that we will fail. > It is (entirely) possible that we will fail. / We may (well) fail. • The penalty shall be not less than EUR 10 000. > The penalty shall be at least EUR 10 000.
  • 11. NICOLAE SFETCU: EU CLEAR ENGLISH TIPS FOR TRANSLATORS 10 • Failure to observe the rules is subject to a penalty. > Breach of the rules is subject to a penalty. • The realisation of road work by workers who are not certified is prohibited. > Road work may be performed only by certified road workers. • The Comission never acts without consulting stakeholders. > The Commission always consults stakeholders before acting. Consider short forms and pronouns to avoid repeating full names … • Change > to • The Startup Financing Scheme grants loans to new businesses. In this way, the Startup Financing Scheme stimulates competition. > The Scheme grants loans to new businesses. In this way, it stimulates competition. • The Special Investigations Department of the Ministry of Labour, Social Security and Welfare has investigated the allegations. > We have investigated the allegations. … and instead of foreign or ad hoc abbreviations. • the National Institute for Quality and Organisational Development of Health Care and Medicines (GYEMSZI) … GYEMSZI … > the National Institute for Quality and Organisational Development of Health Care and Medicines … the Institute / it … • the Financial Control Methodology and Internal Audit Department (FCMIAD) of the Ministry of Finance (MF) of the Slovak Republic (SR) … the FCMIAD MF SR … > the Financial Control Methodology and Internal Audit Department of the Ministry of Finance of the Slovak Republic … the Department / it … Express conditions, including hidden ones, with ‘if’ ... • Change > to • in the event / case of a successful application > if your application is accepted • when / where a beneficiary fails to comply > if a beneficiary fails to comply • provided that the application is received in time > if the application is received in time • in the event of a sale or transfer of the holding > if the holding is sold or transferred • should you need more information > if you need more information • A manufacturer who does not have a place of business in a Member State shall designate an authorised representative. > A manufacturer shall designate an authorised representative if it does not have a place of business in a Member State.
  • 12. NICOLAE SFETCU: EU CLEAR ENGLISH TIPS FOR TRANSLATORS 11 • A proposal which does not comply with applicable legislation may be excluded. > A proposal may be excluded if it does not comply with applicable legislation. ... entitlement with ‘may’... • Each owner shall be entitled to grant a licence to a third party to exploit the jointly owned results. > Each owner may grant a licence to a third party to exploit the jointly owned results. • A beneficiary is allowed to use a simplified method for calculating eligible costs. > A beneficiary may use a simplified method for calculating eligible costs. • The negotiating body shall have the right to meet without the central management. > The negotiating body may meet without the central management. ... and exceptions with ‘unless’ or ‘however’ (or ‘subject to’). • except where expressly authorised in this Annex > unless expressly authorised in this Annex • without prejudice to Article 2 (1) > subject to / unless otherwise provided for in / without prejudice to Article 2 • Without prejudice to the aforementioned provisions, a licence is not required for … > (However,) A licence is not required for … (1) ‘Without prejudice to …’ does exist in legal English, including EU law, but is used less than in other languages. Consider alternatives if uncertain. In general, cut out extra verbiage. • Change > to • dockworkers who have obtained the relevant authorisation to practise the profession of dockworker > authorised dockworkers • ensure the suitability of the equipment used for the performance of work and its safety for use > ensure that equipment is suitable and safe • The cartel’s purpose was to maintain prices at their prevailing, elevated level. > The cartel aimed to keep prices high. • Further to the letter by which the Commission asked our authorities to provide clarification of this matter, we would like to provide the following opinion. > Please find enclosed our response to your request for more information on this matter. • It is not necessary that the Commission provide evidence of implementation of the agreement between the participants to fix prices, but only that it prove the existence of such an agreement. > The Commission must show that the participants agreed to fix prices, not that they actually did so.
  • 13. NICOLAE SFETCU: EU CLEAR ENGLISH TIPS FOR TRANSLATORS 12 • Part of the responsibility of the responsible team leader is also the confirmation that the totality of the workers who compose the team are wearing a work uniform which ensures their safety at work. > The team leader must ensure that each worker on the team is wearing a safety uniform. • The notice seeks to increase understanding of the Commission’s investigation process and thereby enhance the efficiency of investigations and ensure a high degree of transparency and predictability in the process. > The notice explains the Commission’s investigation process to ensure that it is efficient, transparent and predictable. • The compositions of the teams for the performance of every type of construction work may not deviate from those provided for in the legislation on the branch of construction workers. > Construction teams must be composed as provided for in relevant legislation. • ‘Cargo work’ means loading any good or item for transport or movement from the point of storage onto any means of transport or unloading from the means of transport to the point of storage. > ‘Cargo work’ means moving cargo from a place where it is stored onto a means of transport or vice versa.
  • 14. NICOLAE SFETCU: EU CLEAR ENGLISH TIPS FOR TRANSLATORS 13 English prefers straightforward syntax Keep the subject close to the beginning of the sentence • Change > to • Under the agreement and subject to the call for proposals, the Commission shall fund the project. > The Commission shall fund the project under the agreement and subject to the call for proposals. • If a party does not respond in time or if no agreement is reached within the maximum time period, the Contracting Party will consider the procedure to have failed. > The Contracting Party will consider the procedure to have failed if a party does not respond in time or if no agreement is reached within the maximum time period. • As the provision which gave rise to the Commission’s objections ceased to apply before the deadline for response, the Commission’s objections are obsolete. > The provision which gave rise to the Commission’s objections ceased to apply before the deadline for response. Those objections are therefore obsolete. Avoid splitting up subjects, modals, verbs and direct objects • Change > to • The team reported to the Board its findings. > The team reported its findings to the Board. • An applicant may, within 14 days, contest in writing the Committee’s decision. > An applicant may contest the Committee’s decision in writing within 14 days. • The Commission shall, if the proposal is approved, fund the project. > If the proposal is approved, the Commission shall fund the project. • The judicial council may, by means of an order setting out the grounds for its decision, extend the investigation period. > The judicial council may extend the investigation period by means of an order setting out the grounds for its decision. • The guidelines, from which the Commission may not depart without giving reasons, lay down the criteria for setting the amount of a fine. > The guidelines lay down the criteria for setting the amount of a fine. The Commission must give reasons if it departs from the guidelines. If a sentence is too long, pull information out into separate sentences. • Change > to
  • 15. NICOLAE SFETCU: EU CLEAR ENGLISH TIPS FOR TRANSLATORS 14 • Under the current system, if a manufacturer does not comply with the Regulation, the Ministry may, taking account of the principle of proportionality, withdraw the manufacturer’s licence unless it takes measures to ensure its compliance within a reasonable time. > Under the current system, the Ministry may withdraw the licence of a manufacturer if it does not comply with the Regulation. The Ministry must act proportionally. It need not act if the manufacturer takes measures to ensure its compliance within a reasonable time. But don’t change sentence boundaries in legislation. As a work-around, split with references and semicolons. • All documents must be sent, once evidence has been taken, to the prosecutor, who, within a period of one month, shall submit them to the court, which, within a period of one month, shall either reject the case or issue a court order, even for related offences, regardless of how serious they are, when it considers that there is no indication of one of the crimes in Article 1. > Once evidence has been taken, all documents must be sent to the prosecutor; the prosecutor has one month to submit the documents to the court; the court then has one month either to reject the case or to issue a court order; this also applies to related offences, regardless of how serious they are; this provision does not apply if the court considers that the case involves one of the crimes in Article 1. Use topic-introducing phrases sparingly. • Change > to • Concerning / When it comes to state aid, the speaker outlined his proposals. > The speaker outlined his proposals on state aid. • As far as these goals are concerned, the report states that progress is being made. > The report states that progress is being made towards achieving these goals. • When it comes to fighting disease, lives may depend on it. > Lives may depend on fighting disease.
  • 16. NICOLAE SFETCU: EU CLEAR ENGLISH TIPS FOR TRANSLATORS 15 English may use different number, articles, gender or words from other languages Keep uncountable nouns in the singular. • Change > to • informations on EU policy > information on EU policy • trainings for staff > training for staff • aids to farmers > aid to farmers • actions (1) to help students > action to help students • the impacts (1) on health > the impact on health • professional competences (1) > professional competence • EU agricultural policies (2) > EU agricultural policy • best agricultural practices (2) > best agricultural practice • training materials (2) > training material(s) • crimes (2( against EU interests > crime(s) against EU interests (1) Words like 'actions', 'impacts' and 'competences' do appear in EU English, under influence from other languages. (2) Some nouns, like 'policy', 'practice', 'material' and 'crime', can be countable or uncountable. Though the line is not always clear, they are countable referring to an individual concept and uncountable referring to a collective one. Use ‘a’ rather than ‘the’ for members of a class. • Change > to • The worker on the site should wear the uniform. > A worker on a site should wear a uniform. • The application for the child to attend the school activity must be signed by the parent. > An application for a child to attend a school activity must be signed by a parent. If appropriate, use the singular for members of a class to avoid confusion. • Workers will receive computers. > Each worker will receive a computer. • Plumbers with professional licences may: > A plumber with a professional licence may:
  • 17. NICOLAE SFETCU: EU CLEAR ENGLISH TIPS FOR TRANSLATORS 16 Use ‘the’ rather than ‘this’ to refer back to a document. • Change > to • Regulation 23/2000 … this Regulation … > Regulation 23/2000 … the Regulation … (Use ‘this’ for the present document.) > Do not use gender pronouns for entities. • Change > to • The contractor has announced his decision. > The contractor has announced its decision. • Any inaccuracies found in a producer’s file will disqualify him or her. > Any inaccuracies in a producer’s file will disqualify the / that producer. Consider alternatives to ‘of’. • Change > to • the largest lake of Italy > the largest lake in Italy / Italy's largest lake • support of young people > support for young people • officers of the crime division > officers in the crime division • a decision of the Court > a decision by the Court / a Court decision • participants of projects > participants in projects / project participants • staff of the company > staff at the company / company staff Finally, avoid ‘false friends’ in translation. • Change > to • adequate mechanisms > suitable / appropriate mechanisms • an attestation of registration > a letter certifying / certificate of registration • in the case of Greece > for Greece • ordinary citizens > ordinary people / consumers / users • projects coherent with sectoral priorities > projects consistent with sectoral priorities • The Commission communicated its decision to the national authorities. > The Commission notified the national authorities of its decision. • respect for national competences > respect for national powers / jurisdiction • This Regulation completes Regulation … > This Regulation supplements Regulation … • consequent policy > consistent policy • Consumption is stable. > Consumer spending is stable. • to control imports > to check / verify / inspect / monitor imports • to carry out a control > to carry out a(n) audit / check / inspection
  • 18. NICOLAE SFETCU: EU CLEAR ENGLISH TIPS FOR TRANSLATORS 17 • Criminality is on the rise. > Crime is on the rise. • to deepen relations > to expand / improve relations • The dossier is closed. > The issue / matter is closed. • Many economic operators have been hurt. > Many businesses / traders have been hurt. • to elaborate / formulate / establish a plan > to draft / draw up / develop / produce a plan • to have a positive effect on production > to help / boost production • to have a negative effect on consumers > to hurt / harm / be detrimental to consumers • all elements of the process > all aspects / items / stages of the process • to exercise a profession > to practise a profession • to exercise the profession of lawyer > to work as a lawyer • to exploit a farm > to run / operate a farm • to foresee a ban > to provide for / impose a ban • to foresee action > to envisage / plan / contemplate action • in the framework of the plan > as part of / under the plan • heterogeneous conditions > uneven / disparate conditions • illegal state aid > unlawful state aid • an important amount > a large / significant amount • informatics experts > IT / ICT / computer experts • an information note > a memo / letter • to intervene at a meeting > to speak / take the floor at a meeting • EU intervention > EU activity / projects / action / involvement • to introduce a demand for aid > to apply for aid • to provide justification > to provide evidence / an explanation • agricultural material > agricultural supplies / equipment • modalities for payment > arrangements for payment • a negative evolution in trade > a downturn / decrease / drop in trade • the economic perspective > the economic prospects / outlook • to realise a project > to implement, carry out, complete a project • to invite reflection > to invite discussion / debate / thought • to reinforce transparency > to enhance / improve / increase / heighten transparency • to represent an actor for change > to help bring about change • to respect / adhere to conditions > to comply with / fulfil / meet conditions • sickness insurance > health insurance • to transmit a report > to send a report
  • 19. NICOLAE SFETCU: EU CLEAR ENGLISH TIPS FOR TRANSLATORS 18 Sources • Cansdale, G., Tips for Slovak translators translating from Slovak into English • European Commission, How to Write Clearly • Agerbeek, F., The Essential Guide to Drafting Commission Documents on EU Competition Law • Gardner, J., A Brief List of Misused English Terminology in EU Publications • Russsell, Gayl and Mills, Louise, Clear Legal Writing [unpublished presentation]
  • 20. NICOLAE SFETCU: EU CLEAR ENGLISH TIPS FOR TRANSLATORS 19 About the editor Nicolae Sfetcu Owner and manager with MultiMedia SRL and MultiMedia Publishing House. Project Coordinator for European Teleworking Development Romania (ETD) Member of Rotary Club Bucuresti Atheneum Cofounder and ex-president of the Mehedinti Branch of Romanian Association for Electronic Industry and Software Initiator, cofounder and president of Romanian Association for Telework and Teleactivities Member of Internet Society Initiator, cofounder and ex-president of Romanian Teleworking Society Cofounder and ex-president of the Mehedinti Branch of the General Association of Engineers in Romania Physicist engineer - Bachelor of Physics, Major Nuclear Physics. Master of Philosophy. Contact Email: nicolae@sfetcu.com Facebook/Messenger: https://www.facebook.com/nicolae.sfetcu Twitter: http://twitter.com/nicolae LinkedIn: http://www.linkedin.com/in/nicolaesfetcu YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/c/NicolaeSfetcu
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