In the author's ideal world, there is magic, no sadness, free life without hunger, happy animals, crazy but accepted people, impossible things, an underground world, and sea monsters that are good instead of evil. The story presents a fanciful vision of a world without problems where magic and impossible things are possible.

1. In my ideal
world...

2. ... There is magic...

3. ... There is no sad person...

4. ... There is free life...

5. ... There aren’t
hungry people...

6. ... There are happy
animals...

7. ... There are crazy
people...

8. ... There are impossible
things...

9. ... There is an
underground world...

10. There are sea
monsters that are not
evil, they are good...
THE END

11. THE END
Author: Mateus Florentino Barbosa
Editorial Supervisor: Teacher: Gerson A. Moura
Illustrator: Bitskoff
Publisher: www.storybird.com
Date: II Semester - Summer 2014
A project from ‘Cilc’s Writing Club’: “Café Literário”
CILC: Centro Interescolar de Línguas de Ceilândia

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