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The ideal 
world...
... The ideal world 
for me, would be a 
world with no war, 
so all the people of 
the world world 
would be happy.
... In this world there 
would be no weapons 
and we all would live 
in a place without 
drugs and without 
injustice. We ...
... The world would 
only be an ideal 
world for me, when it 
becomes a better 
world not only for me, 
but for all the pe...
THE END 
Author: Josue 
Editorial Supervisor: Teacher: Gerson A. Moura 
Illustrator: Jaminstill 
Publisher: www.storybird....
Page line Where it says... It should have said... 
How would you grade this story from 10 to 100? - Grade: ( ) Why? 
What ...
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E1 book 16

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E1 book 16

  1. 1. The ideal world...
  2. 2. ... The ideal world for me, would be a world with no war, so all the people of the world world would be happy.
  3. 3. ... In this world there would be no weapons and we all would live in a place without drugs and without injustice. We all would live in harmony with each other and only then this would be a better world...
  4. 4. ... The world would only be an ideal world for me, when it becomes a better world not only for me, but for all the people in the world!!!
  5. 5. THE END Author: Josue Editorial Supervisor: Teacher: Gerson A. Moura Illustrator: Jaminstill Publisher: www.storybird.com Date: II Semester - Summer 2014 A project from ‘Cilc’s Writing Club’: “Café Literário” CILC: Centro Interescolar de Línguas de Ceilândia
  6. 6. Page line Where it says... It should have said... How would you grade this story from 10 to 100? - Grade: ( ) Why? What did you think about this story? Did you like it? Why? SUGESTIONS TO IMPROVE THE STORY...

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