DISASTER ON HALLOWEEN
A REAL WORLD PROBLEM
BY: DEAN BERRY, ED. D.
1
THE PROBLEM
ITS 9:30 PM ON HALLOWEEN AND THREE TEENAGERS ARE IN THE
NEIGHBORHOOD COMMITTING HARMLESS PRANKS. THEY ARE
DRESSED IN DARK CLOTHING AND LOOK LIKE BUMS AND BEASTS.
AS THEY COME UP THE DRIVEWAY TO A HOME, ONE OF THEM
KICKS A PUMPKIN AND BREAKS IT. THE HOMEOWNER POKES A
RIFLE OUT THE FRONT DOOR AND FIRES. ONE OF THE YOUNG
TEENAGERS IS STRUCK IN THE HEAD AND DIES BEFORE HELP
ARRIVES. THE MAN WITH THE GUN FEELS TERRIBLE BUT IT’S TOO
LATE.
2
PAIR SHARE
MEET IN PAIRS
OR SMALL
GROUPS AND
DISCUSS THE 3
THINK&DISCUSS
• DOES A HOMEOWNER HAVE A
RIGHT TO PROTECT HIS FAMILY
AND PROPERTY?
• WERE THE TEENAGERS AT FAULT
FOR ANY OF THEIR BEHAVIOR?
• WHEN SOMEONE SHOOTS A GUN
ARE THEY RESPONSIBLE FOR THE
RESULT?
• SHOULD THE SHOOTER BE
PUNISHED?
4
REPORT BACK TO CLASS
SHARE YOUR IDEAS
.
1. LET’S SUMMARIZE POSSIBLE
ANSWERS TO OUR QUESTIONS.
2. INCLUDE THESE IDEAS IN YOUR
NOTES.
3. YOU MAY CHOOSE TO USE A
GRAPHIC ORGANIZER.
5
PREPARE TO RESEARCH THE ISSUES
•NOW IT IS TIME TO RESEARCH VARIOUS
POINTS OF VIEW AND LEGAL POSITIONS.
INCLUDE ANY COURT CASES OR RULINGS
THAT MAY LEND SUPPORT TO YOUR
POSITION.
QUESTIONS TO GUIDE RESEARCH
• 1. UNDER WHAT CONDITIONS CAN YOU
LEGALLY SHOOT SOMEONE?
• 2. CAN A HOMEOWNER SHOOT ANYONE WHO IS
TRESPASSING ON THEIR PROPERTY?
• CAN YOU CITE PRIOR CASES THAT PROVIDE
GOOD EXAMPLES OF HOW THE LAW WAS
APPLIED?
• WOULD YOU HAVE SHOT IN THE SAME
SITUATION? WHY?
• IF IT WAS YOUR BROTHER WHO WAS KILLED
WHEN THE BOYS WERE TRICK OR TREATING,
WOULD YOU FEEL DIFFERENTLY ABOUT
SHOOTING A TRESPASSER?
USE THE FOLLOWING INTERNET SOURCES TO
GATHER INFORMATION ON YOUR RESEARCH
TOPIC.
SEE THE
POWERPOINT
VERSION OF THIS
UNIT IN ORDER TO
QUICKLY ACCESS
WOMEN SEEKING HELP SHOT A KILLED ON
THE PORCH BY HOMEOWNER WHO IS
ARRESTED
•HTTPS://WWW.YOUTUBE.COM/W
ATCH?V=UHV1AZK1LTG
HOMEOWNER SHOOTS SUSPECT THIEF AND
NEIGHBORS COME TO HIS DEFENSE 3 MIN
•HTTPS://WWW.YOUTUBE.COM/W
ATCH?V=W1-Z4JI8EUA
92 YEAR OLD KILLS INTRUDER 3 MIN
•HTTPS://WWW.YOUTUBE.COM/W
ATCH?V=RMWVZNZF9KE
HOMEOWNER CONVICTED OF SHOOTING
BURGLARS
2 MIN
•HTTPS://WWW.YOUTUBE.COM/W
ATCH?V=AITB-VGMUSI
THREE SCARY HALLOWEEN STORIES
•HTTPS://WWW.YOUTUBE.COM/WAT
CH?V=TQD2NVGOE5O
POLICE ENTERS WRONG HOME SHOOTS ONE
OF THEIR OWN OFFICERS 2 MIN
•HTTPS://WWW.YOUTUBE.COM/W
ATCH?V=W3PJNCXLVBE
POLICE SHOOT HUSBAND AT HOME IN HIS
OWN HOUSE DURING ILLEGAL RAID 3 MIN
•HTTPS://WWW.YOUTUBE.COM/W
ATCH?V=RNGF2KS3DHS
MAN SHOOT AND KILLS BURGLAR IN HIS
HOUSE
ACCOMPLICES CHARGED WITH MURDER 2
MIN
•
HTTPS://WWW.YOUTUBE.COM/WAT
CH?V=FB1CPEWVPLI
HOME OWNER ARRESTED FOR SHOOTING
INTRUDER
1 MIN
•HTTPS://WWW.YOUTUBE.COM/WAT
CH?V=PQSUAL_72C8
HORRIBLE HALLOWEEN DEATHS
10 MIN
•HTTPS://WWW.YOUTUBE.COM/WAT
CH?V=IF9YTT00FTG
RESEARCH NOTES
• COLLECT A MINIMUM OF 2-3 PAGES OF NOTES
• GATHER INFORMATION THAT WILL ENABLE YOU
TO WRITE A SHORT TWO PAGE ESSAY
DOOR TO DOOR SALESMAN SHOT
DEAD
•HTTP://RT.COM/USA/FLORIDA-
DOOR-TO-DOOR-HOUSE-ROOP-
265/
HALLOWEEN PARTY GOER SHOT DEAD FOR
TRESPASSING
•HTTP://EN.WIKIPEDIA.ORG/WIKI/DE
ATH_OF_YOSHIHIRO_HATTORI
DRUNK LADY SHOT FOR WANDERING INTO
THE WRONG HOUSE
•HTTP://ARTICLES.LATIMES.COM/
2012/MAY/26/NATION/LA-NA-
NN-COLORADO-TRESPASSER-
SHOT-20120526
LAWS: WHEN CAN YOU LEGALLY SHOOT
SOMENE
•HTTP://WWW.HPE.COM/X143569
7162/WHEN-CAN-YOU-SHOOT-
POLICE-CHIEF-SHEDS-LIGHT-
ON-SOMETIMES-CONFUSING-
SELF-DEFENSE-LAW
SHOT AND KILLED WHILE TRICK OR
TREATING
•HTTP://USATODAY30.USATODAY
.COM/NEWS/NATION/2008-11-
03-HALLOWEEN-SLAYING_N.HTM
CASTLE LAW: WHEN TO SHOOT
LEGALLY
•HTTP://WWW.MSNEWSNOW.COM
/STORY/7841201/CASTLE-LAW-
SHOOT-OR-DONT-SHOOT
MAY I SHOOT AN INTRUDER?
•HTTP://CRIMINAL.FINDLAW.COM
/CRIMINAL-CHARGES/MAY-I-
SHOOT-AN-INTRUDER.HTML
12 YEAR OLD SHOT WHILE TRICK OR
TREATING
•HTTP://WWW.FOXNEWS.COM/STORY
/2008/11/01/SOUTH-CAROLINA-
BOY-SHOT-KILLED-WHILE-TRICK-
OR-TREATING-SUSPECT-FEARED-
ROBBERY/
COMMON CORE STANDARDS
AS YOU CONDUCT YOUR
RESEARCH, USE THE FOLLOWING
TO REVIEW AND ANALYZE YOUR
SOURCES.
EVALUATE AND VERIFY
RESEARCH SOURCES
• INTERNET SOURCES WILL VARY GREATLY IN ACCURACY AND
RELIABILITY
• CONSIDER THE EXPERTISE AND REPUTATION OF EACH WEBSITE
• COMPARE FACTS AND INFORMATION OF DIFFERENT INTERNET
SOURCES
• SELECT INFORMATION THAT IS SUPPORTED ON SEVERAL
RELIABLE WEBSITES
• QUESTION OR REFUTE INFORMATION THAT LACKS CONSISTENT
SUPPORT
REVIEW YOUR RESEARCH NOTES
WRITE AN ESSAY
ON THE TOPIC
PREPARE TO WRITE
•WHAT SHOULD HAPPEN TO
A PROPERTY OWNER WHO
ACCIDENTALLY SHOOTS AN
INTRUDER?
•WHAT SHOULD THE
PENALTY BE?
•EXPLAIN YOUR ARGUMENT
BY GIVING REASONS WITH
31
ORGANIZE
• REVIEW ALL OF YOUR NOTES
FROM THE GROUP DISCUSSION
AND RESEARCH.
• SELECT THE MOST IMPORTANT
IDEAS.
• CHOOSE FACTS AND EXAMPLES
TO SUPPORT EACH IMPORTANT
32
DEVELOP A WRITING
PLAN
• DETERMINE WHAT YOUR MAIN POINT
WILL BE, AND WRITE A TOPIC
SENTENCE THAT PROVIDES FOCUS FOR
YOUR ESSAY.
• CHOOSE SEVERAL MAIN IDEAS THAT
SUPPORT YOUR TOPIC SENTENCE.
• SORT YOUR INFORMATION INTO
SUPPORTING DETAILS WITH FACTS AND
EXAMPLES. 33
ORGANIZE
YOUR IDEAS
AND PREPARE
TO WRITE AN
ESSAY ABOUT
THE ISSUE.
DETAILS MUST
SUPPORT THE MAIN
IDEAS
PROVIDE SPECIFIC
FACTS, EXAMPLES, AND
REASONS FOR EACH
MAIN IDEA IN THE BODY
OF YOUR ESSAY
WRITE THE ROUGH
DRAFT
USE THE FIVE
PARAGRAPH FORMAT
THAT INCLUDES AN
INTRODUCTORY
PARAGRAPH, BODY,
AND CONCLUSION
37
Five Paragraph Essay
Outline
Introduction
What is my topic
sentence?
Body-Main Ideas
With supporting
details
Conclusion
How can I summarize
my paragraph?
How can I rephrase my
topic sentence?
PREPARE TO WRITE
• WRITE A FIVE PARAGRAPH ESSAY ABOUT THE
ISSUE.
• AS YOU WRITE YOUR ROUGH DRAFT, IT WILL BE
VERY IMPORTANT TO USE SPECIAL WORDS
THAT ENABLE YOU TO TRANSITION SMOOTHLY
FROM ONE IDEA TO THE NEXT.
38
TRANSITION WORDS
AS YOU VIEW THESE
WORDS, SELECT THE
WORDS THAT HELP YOU
MAKE TRANSITIONS
SMOOTHLY FROM ONE
IDEA TO THE NEXT.
• AS A RESULT
• SUCH AS
• FOR EXAMPLE
• NEVERTHELESS
• FOR THAT
REASON
• FINALLY
• AT THIS TIME
• THEREFORE
• FURTHERMORE
• IN ADDITION
• IN CONCLUSION
• AS WELL AS
39
PAIR SHARE
EDITING
WORK IN PAIRS TO
EDIT AND IMPROVE
YOUR ESSAY. READ
EACH OTHER’S
ESSAYS “OUT
LOUD” AND OFFER
SPECIFIC
SUGGESTIONS FOR
REVIEW, EDIT, AND REWRITE
1. RE-READ YOUR ESSAY SEVERAL TIMES.
2. HOW CAN YOU IMPROVE YOUR SENTENCES TO
COMMUNICATE MORE CLEARLY?
3. ARE YOUR MAIN IDEAS SUPPORTED BY EXAMPLES AND
DETAILS?
4. EXCHANGE PAPERS WITH ANOTHER STUDENT AND READ
EACH OTHER’S ESSAY OUT LOUD.
5. MAKE FINAL CORRECTIONS AND WRITE A FINAL DRAFT OF
YOUR POLISHED ESSAY.
41
FINAL
DRAFT
USE WHAT YOU
HAVE LEARNED
FROM YOUR REVIEW
PROCESS AND
WRITE YOUR FINAL
DRAFT.
BRING YOUR COMPLETED PAPER
TO THE NEXT CLASS SESSION.
THE NEXT STEP
WILL BE TO
PRESENT YOUR
IDEAS TO YOUR
SMALL GROUP FOR 43
MEET IN SMALL GROUPS TO CROSS EXAMINE STUDENTS AS THEY
PRESENT THEIR PAPERS
• ANALYZE SOLUTIONS AND EVIDENCE PRESENTED BY GROUP
MEMBERS.
• ASK CHALLENGING QUESTIONS WHEN GROUP MEMBERS PRESENT THEIR
POSITIONS. LOOK FOR EVIDENCE THAT IS SUFFICIENT TO SUPPORT
CLEAR, LOGICAL ARGUMENTS.
• ASK GROUP MEMBERS TO DEFEND THE CREDIBILITY AND
RELIABILITY OF THEIR SOURCES.
SHARE YOUR IDEAS
WITH THE GROUP
DURING THIS EVALUATION PHASE, CLASS
MEMBERS WILL SHARE IDEAS, ANALYZE
ARGUMENTS, AND REVIEW THE MAIN ISSUES OF
THE PROBLEM. STUDENTS WILL BE PREPARED TO
PARTICIPATE BY CONTRIBUTING THEIR IDEAS AND
SUPPORTING EVIDENCE. 45
DEFEND YOUR POSITION
AS YOU PRESENT YOUR PAPER TO YOUR GROUP,
CLEARLY STATE YOUR POSITION ON THE ISSUE
AND REVIEW THE MAIN POINTS OF YOUR
ARGUMENT. BE SURE TO CITE SPECIFIC FACTS
AND EXAMPLES THAT SUPPORT EACH POINT
YOU ARE MAKING. INCLUDE EVIDENCE THAT
SUBSTANTIATES ALL CLAIMS.
46

Dean r berry real life problems halloween disaster

  • 1.
    DISASTER ON HALLOWEEN AREAL WORLD PROBLEM BY: DEAN BERRY, ED. D. 1
  • 2.
    THE PROBLEM ITS 9:30PM ON HALLOWEEN AND THREE TEENAGERS ARE IN THE NEIGHBORHOOD COMMITTING HARMLESS PRANKS. THEY ARE DRESSED IN DARK CLOTHING AND LOOK LIKE BUMS AND BEASTS. AS THEY COME UP THE DRIVEWAY TO A HOME, ONE OF THEM KICKS A PUMPKIN AND BREAKS IT. THE HOMEOWNER POKES A RIFLE OUT THE FRONT DOOR AND FIRES. ONE OF THE YOUNG TEENAGERS IS STRUCK IN THE HEAD AND DIES BEFORE HELP ARRIVES. THE MAN WITH THE GUN FEELS TERRIBLE BUT IT’S TOO LATE. 2
  • 3.
    PAIR SHARE MEET INPAIRS OR SMALL GROUPS AND DISCUSS THE 3
  • 4.
    THINK&DISCUSS • DOES AHOMEOWNER HAVE A RIGHT TO PROTECT HIS FAMILY AND PROPERTY? • WERE THE TEENAGERS AT FAULT FOR ANY OF THEIR BEHAVIOR? • WHEN SOMEONE SHOOTS A GUN ARE THEY RESPONSIBLE FOR THE RESULT? • SHOULD THE SHOOTER BE PUNISHED? 4
  • 5.
    REPORT BACK TOCLASS SHARE YOUR IDEAS . 1. LET’S SUMMARIZE POSSIBLE ANSWERS TO OUR QUESTIONS. 2. INCLUDE THESE IDEAS IN YOUR NOTES. 3. YOU MAY CHOOSE TO USE A GRAPHIC ORGANIZER. 5
  • 6.
    PREPARE TO RESEARCHTHE ISSUES •NOW IT IS TIME TO RESEARCH VARIOUS POINTS OF VIEW AND LEGAL POSITIONS. INCLUDE ANY COURT CASES OR RULINGS THAT MAY LEND SUPPORT TO YOUR POSITION.
  • 7.
    QUESTIONS TO GUIDERESEARCH • 1. UNDER WHAT CONDITIONS CAN YOU LEGALLY SHOOT SOMEONE? • 2. CAN A HOMEOWNER SHOOT ANYONE WHO IS TRESPASSING ON THEIR PROPERTY? • CAN YOU CITE PRIOR CASES THAT PROVIDE GOOD EXAMPLES OF HOW THE LAW WAS APPLIED? • WOULD YOU HAVE SHOT IN THE SAME SITUATION? WHY? • IF IT WAS YOUR BROTHER WHO WAS KILLED WHEN THE BOYS WERE TRICK OR TREATING, WOULD YOU FEEL DIFFERENTLY ABOUT SHOOTING A TRESPASSER?
  • 8.
    USE THE FOLLOWINGINTERNET SOURCES TO GATHER INFORMATION ON YOUR RESEARCH TOPIC. SEE THE POWERPOINT VERSION OF THIS UNIT IN ORDER TO QUICKLY ACCESS
  • 9.
    WOMEN SEEKING HELPSHOT A KILLED ON THE PORCH BY HOMEOWNER WHO IS ARRESTED •HTTPS://WWW.YOUTUBE.COM/W ATCH?V=UHV1AZK1LTG
  • 10.
    HOMEOWNER SHOOTS SUSPECTTHIEF AND NEIGHBORS COME TO HIS DEFENSE 3 MIN •HTTPS://WWW.YOUTUBE.COM/W ATCH?V=W1-Z4JI8EUA
  • 11.
    92 YEAR OLDKILLS INTRUDER 3 MIN •HTTPS://WWW.YOUTUBE.COM/W ATCH?V=RMWVZNZF9KE
  • 12.
    HOMEOWNER CONVICTED OFSHOOTING BURGLARS 2 MIN •HTTPS://WWW.YOUTUBE.COM/W ATCH?V=AITB-VGMUSI
  • 13.
    THREE SCARY HALLOWEENSTORIES •HTTPS://WWW.YOUTUBE.COM/WAT CH?V=TQD2NVGOE5O
  • 14.
    POLICE ENTERS WRONGHOME SHOOTS ONE OF THEIR OWN OFFICERS 2 MIN •HTTPS://WWW.YOUTUBE.COM/W ATCH?V=W3PJNCXLVBE
  • 15.
    POLICE SHOOT HUSBANDAT HOME IN HIS OWN HOUSE DURING ILLEGAL RAID 3 MIN •HTTPS://WWW.YOUTUBE.COM/W ATCH?V=RNGF2KS3DHS
  • 16.
    MAN SHOOT ANDKILLS BURGLAR IN HIS HOUSE ACCOMPLICES CHARGED WITH MURDER 2 MIN • HTTPS://WWW.YOUTUBE.COM/WAT CH?V=FB1CPEWVPLI
  • 17.
    HOME OWNER ARRESTEDFOR SHOOTING INTRUDER 1 MIN •HTTPS://WWW.YOUTUBE.COM/WAT CH?V=PQSUAL_72C8
  • 18.
    HORRIBLE HALLOWEEN DEATHS 10MIN •HTTPS://WWW.YOUTUBE.COM/WAT CH?V=IF9YTT00FTG
  • 19.
    RESEARCH NOTES • COLLECTA MINIMUM OF 2-3 PAGES OF NOTES • GATHER INFORMATION THAT WILL ENABLE YOU TO WRITE A SHORT TWO PAGE ESSAY
  • 20.
    DOOR TO DOORSALESMAN SHOT DEAD •HTTP://RT.COM/USA/FLORIDA- DOOR-TO-DOOR-HOUSE-ROOP- 265/
  • 21.
    HALLOWEEN PARTY GOERSHOT DEAD FOR TRESPASSING •HTTP://EN.WIKIPEDIA.ORG/WIKI/DE ATH_OF_YOSHIHIRO_HATTORI
  • 22.
    DRUNK LADY SHOTFOR WANDERING INTO THE WRONG HOUSE •HTTP://ARTICLES.LATIMES.COM/ 2012/MAY/26/NATION/LA-NA- NN-COLORADO-TRESPASSER- SHOT-20120526
  • 23.
    LAWS: WHEN CANYOU LEGALLY SHOOT SOMENE •HTTP://WWW.HPE.COM/X143569 7162/WHEN-CAN-YOU-SHOOT- POLICE-CHIEF-SHEDS-LIGHT- ON-SOMETIMES-CONFUSING- SELF-DEFENSE-LAW
  • 24.
    SHOT AND KILLEDWHILE TRICK OR TREATING •HTTP://USATODAY30.USATODAY .COM/NEWS/NATION/2008-11- 03-HALLOWEEN-SLAYING_N.HTM
  • 25.
    CASTLE LAW: WHENTO SHOOT LEGALLY •HTTP://WWW.MSNEWSNOW.COM /STORY/7841201/CASTLE-LAW- SHOOT-OR-DONT-SHOOT
  • 26.
    MAY I SHOOTAN INTRUDER? •HTTP://CRIMINAL.FINDLAW.COM /CRIMINAL-CHARGES/MAY-I- SHOOT-AN-INTRUDER.HTML
  • 27.
    12 YEAR OLDSHOT WHILE TRICK OR TREATING •HTTP://WWW.FOXNEWS.COM/STORY /2008/11/01/SOUTH-CAROLINA- BOY-SHOT-KILLED-WHILE-TRICK- OR-TREATING-SUSPECT-FEARED- ROBBERY/
  • 28.
    COMMON CORE STANDARDS ASYOU CONDUCT YOUR RESEARCH, USE THE FOLLOWING TO REVIEW AND ANALYZE YOUR SOURCES.
  • 29.
    EVALUATE AND VERIFY RESEARCHSOURCES • INTERNET SOURCES WILL VARY GREATLY IN ACCURACY AND RELIABILITY • CONSIDER THE EXPERTISE AND REPUTATION OF EACH WEBSITE • COMPARE FACTS AND INFORMATION OF DIFFERENT INTERNET SOURCES • SELECT INFORMATION THAT IS SUPPORTED ON SEVERAL RELIABLE WEBSITES • QUESTION OR REFUTE INFORMATION THAT LACKS CONSISTENT SUPPORT
  • 30.
    REVIEW YOUR RESEARCHNOTES WRITE AN ESSAY ON THE TOPIC
  • 31.
    PREPARE TO WRITE •WHATSHOULD HAPPEN TO A PROPERTY OWNER WHO ACCIDENTALLY SHOOTS AN INTRUDER? •WHAT SHOULD THE PENALTY BE? •EXPLAIN YOUR ARGUMENT BY GIVING REASONS WITH 31
  • 32.
    ORGANIZE • REVIEW ALLOF YOUR NOTES FROM THE GROUP DISCUSSION AND RESEARCH. • SELECT THE MOST IMPORTANT IDEAS. • CHOOSE FACTS AND EXAMPLES TO SUPPORT EACH IMPORTANT 32
  • 33.
    DEVELOP A WRITING PLAN •DETERMINE WHAT YOUR MAIN POINT WILL BE, AND WRITE A TOPIC SENTENCE THAT PROVIDES FOCUS FOR YOUR ESSAY. • CHOOSE SEVERAL MAIN IDEAS THAT SUPPORT YOUR TOPIC SENTENCE. • SORT YOUR INFORMATION INTO SUPPORTING DETAILS WITH FACTS AND EXAMPLES. 33
  • 34.
    ORGANIZE YOUR IDEAS AND PREPARE TOWRITE AN ESSAY ABOUT THE ISSUE.
  • 35.
    DETAILS MUST SUPPORT THEMAIN IDEAS PROVIDE SPECIFIC FACTS, EXAMPLES, AND REASONS FOR EACH MAIN IDEA IN THE BODY OF YOUR ESSAY
  • 36.
    WRITE THE ROUGH DRAFT USETHE FIVE PARAGRAPH FORMAT THAT INCLUDES AN INTRODUCTORY PARAGRAPH, BODY, AND CONCLUSION
  • 37.
    37 Five Paragraph Essay Outline Introduction Whatis my topic sentence? Body-Main Ideas With supporting details Conclusion How can I summarize my paragraph? How can I rephrase my topic sentence?
  • 38.
    PREPARE TO WRITE •WRITE A FIVE PARAGRAPH ESSAY ABOUT THE ISSUE. • AS YOU WRITE YOUR ROUGH DRAFT, IT WILL BE VERY IMPORTANT TO USE SPECIAL WORDS THAT ENABLE YOU TO TRANSITION SMOOTHLY FROM ONE IDEA TO THE NEXT. 38
  • 39.
    TRANSITION WORDS AS YOUVIEW THESE WORDS, SELECT THE WORDS THAT HELP YOU MAKE TRANSITIONS SMOOTHLY FROM ONE IDEA TO THE NEXT. • AS A RESULT • SUCH AS • FOR EXAMPLE • NEVERTHELESS • FOR THAT REASON • FINALLY • AT THIS TIME • THEREFORE • FURTHERMORE • IN ADDITION • IN CONCLUSION • AS WELL AS 39
  • 40.
    PAIR SHARE EDITING WORK INPAIRS TO EDIT AND IMPROVE YOUR ESSAY. READ EACH OTHER’S ESSAYS “OUT LOUD” AND OFFER SPECIFIC SUGGESTIONS FOR
  • 41.
    REVIEW, EDIT, ANDREWRITE 1. RE-READ YOUR ESSAY SEVERAL TIMES. 2. HOW CAN YOU IMPROVE YOUR SENTENCES TO COMMUNICATE MORE CLEARLY? 3. ARE YOUR MAIN IDEAS SUPPORTED BY EXAMPLES AND DETAILS? 4. EXCHANGE PAPERS WITH ANOTHER STUDENT AND READ EACH OTHER’S ESSAY OUT LOUD. 5. MAKE FINAL CORRECTIONS AND WRITE A FINAL DRAFT OF YOUR POLISHED ESSAY. 41
  • 42.
    FINAL DRAFT USE WHAT YOU HAVELEARNED FROM YOUR REVIEW PROCESS AND WRITE YOUR FINAL DRAFT.
  • 43.
    BRING YOUR COMPLETEDPAPER TO THE NEXT CLASS SESSION. THE NEXT STEP WILL BE TO PRESENT YOUR IDEAS TO YOUR SMALL GROUP FOR 43
  • 44.
    MEET IN SMALLGROUPS TO CROSS EXAMINE STUDENTS AS THEY PRESENT THEIR PAPERS • ANALYZE SOLUTIONS AND EVIDENCE PRESENTED BY GROUP MEMBERS. • ASK CHALLENGING QUESTIONS WHEN GROUP MEMBERS PRESENT THEIR POSITIONS. LOOK FOR EVIDENCE THAT IS SUFFICIENT TO SUPPORT CLEAR, LOGICAL ARGUMENTS. • ASK GROUP MEMBERS TO DEFEND THE CREDIBILITY AND RELIABILITY OF THEIR SOURCES.
  • 45.
    SHARE YOUR IDEAS WITHTHE GROUP DURING THIS EVALUATION PHASE, CLASS MEMBERS WILL SHARE IDEAS, ANALYZE ARGUMENTS, AND REVIEW THE MAIN ISSUES OF THE PROBLEM. STUDENTS WILL BE PREPARED TO PARTICIPATE BY CONTRIBUTING THEIR IDEAS AND SUPPORTING EVIDENCE. 45
  • 46.
    DEFEND YOUR POSITION ASYOU PRESENT YOUR PAPER TO YOUR GROUP, CLEARLY STATE YOUR POSITION ON THE ISSUE AND REVIEW THE MAIN POINTS OF YOUR ARGUMENT. BE SURE TO CITE SPECIFIC FACTS AND EXAMPLES THAT SUPPORT EACH POINT YOU ARE MAKING. INCLUDE EVIDENCE THAT SUBSTANTIATES ALL CLAIMS. 46