Shrestha, 220118916,
HSNS566, Ethical decision
making.pdf
by Ranju Shrestha
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will
of
of an ACD
been
servicethe
esss
therefore what principle was
applied here by the
paramedics?
I would have liked to have seen these discussions
linked more closely to the case throughout this
section rather than just linked here at the end
some good references Ranju
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FINAL GRADE
23/30
Shrestha, 220118916, HSNS566, Ethical decision making.pdf
GRADEMARK REPORT
GENERAL COMMENTS
Instructor
Ranju,
a good assignment-you write clearly and have
demonstrated a good understanding of the
principles that apply in the case. Good use of
current ref erences to support your work. I would
have liked to have seen your discussion in the
last section on teamwork more closely linked
specif ically to the scenario and how things could
have been improved f or this patient and the staf f
and the f amily.
I have moderated this paper and agree with the
overall comments and grade - sally
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why -explain why this is the case
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that is assuming that the ACD was lodged with the health service -it may not have been
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how could this have been achieved-provide a strategy to illustrate
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so apply this discussion above more specif ically to the case?
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good point but make the relevance to this case
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shared decision making, f amily conf rences
Text Comment. I would have liked to have seen these discussions linked more closely
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Text Comment. some good ref erences Ranju
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    Shrestha, 220118916, HSNS566, Ethicaldecision making.pdf by Ranju Shrestha FILE TIME SUBMITTED 22-AUG-2016 11:16PM SUBMISSION ID 697251824 WORD COUNT 3231 CHARACTER COUNT 18811 80721_RANJU_SHRESTHA_SHRESTHA__220118916__HSNS566__ET HICAL_DECISION_MAKING_959183_382355938.PDF (275.57K)
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    servicethe esss therefore what principlewas applied here by the paramedics?
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    I would haveliked to have seen these discussions linked more closely to the case throughout this section rather than just linked here at the end
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    QM QM QM FINAL GRADE 23/30 Shrestha, 220118916,HSNS566, Ethical decision making.pdf GRADEMARK REPORT GENERAL COMMENTS Instructor Ranju, a good assignment-you write clearly and have demonstrated a good understanding of the principles that apply in the case. Good use of current ref erences to support your work. I would have liked to have seen your discussion in the last section on teamwork more closely linked specif ically to the scenario and how things could have been improved f or this patient and the staf f and the f amily. I have moderated this paper and agree with the overall comments and grade - sally PAGE 1 PAGE 2 Expression Expression Text Comment. will Strikethrough. Awk. Awkward: The expression or construction is cumbersome or dif f icult to read. Consider rewriting. Text Comment. of Comment 2 why -explain why this is the case Text Comment. of an ACD Good Good point
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    QM QM QM QM QM QM QM QM QM Text Comment. been PAGE3 Text Comment. service Text Comment. the Good Good point Text Comment. ess Text Comment. s Text Comment. theref ore what principle was applied here by the paramedics? Good Good point Good Good point Good Good point Comment 3 that is assuming that the ACD was lodged with the health service -it may not have been PAGE 4 Good Good point Good Good point Good Good point Good Good point Good Good point
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    QM QM QM PAGE 5 Good Good point Comment4 how could this have been achieved-provide a strategy to illustrate PAGE 6 Comment 5 so apply this discussion above more specif ically to the case? Comment 6 good point but make the relevance to this case Good Good point PAGE 7 Good Good point Comment 7 shared decision making, f amily conf rences Text Comment. I would have liked to have seen these discussions linked more closely to the case throughout this section rather than just linked here at the end PAGE 8 Text Comment. some good ref erences Ranju PAGE 9 PAGE 10 PAGE 11