👋 Hello, Confab
Andrew Schmidt, Slack
WRITING FOR BUTTONS
WRITING FOR BUTTONS
WRITING FOR BUTTONS
WRITING FOR BUTTONS
and everything else
Working with designers
Crafting user flows
Establishing your team
Writing microcopy
Working with designers
Establishing your team
Crafting user flows
Writing microcopy
Mostly, writing microcopy is like
writing anything else.
WRITING MICROCOPY
A few key differences:
• Users ≠ audience. They’re here to accomplish a task.
• You’re working on a cross-functional team.
• It’s weirder. There’s jargon.
WRITING MICROCOPY
Four handy rules for writing microcopy
WRITING MICROCOPY
1. Be radically human "
• You have to choose to do this, actively, every day.
• And it gets harder over time.
WRITING MICROCOPY
2. Look for emotional moments,
and just be part of them
• This is the opposite of “making a moment happen.”
• Don’t do that.
• Instead, this is about finding the moments that are
already there.
WRITING MICROCOPY
WRITING MICROCOPY
3. Get fresh eyes on it
• Editing someone else’s work
makes you feel like a genius.
• Be that genius for your
teammates.
• Ask your teammates to be
that for you.
WRITING MICROCOPY
4. Be the expert
• Taste & instincts come from time & experience.
• Yours is the judgment we’re following.
• But matters of taste can be hard to defend.
WRITING MICROCOPY
WRITING MICROCOPY
1. Be radically human
2. Look for emotional moments
3. Get fresh eyes on it
4. Be the expert
Writing microcopy
Writing microcopy
Establishing your team
Crafting user flows
Working with designers
Crafting user flows
Writing microcopy
Establishing your team
Working with designers
This is your most important relationship,
your partner on that Chicago picnic.
WORKING WITH DESIGNERS
Because…
• You’re facing the same problems…
• …and balancing the same feedback.
• And, of course: you’re going to make things together.
WORKING WITH DESIGNERS
Most designers have never worked with a writer.
It’s up to you to make this work.
WORKING WITH DESIGNERS
1. Trust each other’s instincts
WORKING WITH DESIGNERS
WORKING WITH DESIGNERS
2. Have fuzzy conversations
WORKING WITH DESIGNERS
WORKING WITH DESIGNERS
Writer’s skillset Designer’s skillset
WORKING WITH DESIGNERS
WORKING WITH DESIGNERS
3. Play by improv rules
• You’re going to be asking your designer to try a lot of
things that sound silly.
• You need to be willing to try silly things, too.
• Never give an immediate “no.” Start with “yes, and…”
WORKING WITH DESIGNERS
A quick note about humans…
WORKING WITH DESIGNERS
Trust each other’s instincts
Have fuzzy conversations
Play by improv rules
Working with designers
Writing microcopy
Establishing your team
Working with designers
Crafting user flows
Working with designers
Writing microcopy
Establishing your team
Crafting user flows
This is the heart of it, 

where UX writing comes into its own.
CRAFTING USER FLOWS
This is where you do your best work
• You keep the product conceptually simple…
• But also appropriately complicated.
• And, yeah: you choose the very best words.
CRAFTING USER FLOWS
Keep the product conceptually simple
• Only add nouns as a last resort.
• Because: each new noun is just one more thing your
users have to learn.
CRAFTING USER FLOWS
But also appropriately complicated
• Don’t just write better words. 

Create the space for better language.
• By: rethinking, reworking, and redesigning.
• That’s the difference between UX writing & copywriting.
CRAFTING USER FLOWS
CRAFTING USER FLOWS
Don’t write for a single screen.
Write for the whole flow.
CRAFTING USER FLOWS
CRAFTING USER FLOWS
Example flow:
“The free trial offer”
Example flow:
“The free trial offer”
CRAFTING USER FLOWS
User can accept offer →
✓
User can’t, but someone else can →
✓
User can’t accept offer →
X
Don’t start with the simplest path.
Start with the most common.
CRAFTING USER FLOWS
Example flow:
“The free trial offer”
CRAFTING USER FLOWS
User can accept offer →
✓
User can’t, but someone else can →
✓
User can’t accept offer →
X
✓
User can’t, but someone else can →
Keep the product conceptually simple.
But also appropriately complicated.
Don’t write for a screen. Write for the whole flow.
Start with the most common path.
Crafting user flows
Writing microcopy
Working with designers
Crafting user flows
Establishing your team
Working with designers
Crafting user flows
Writing microcopy
Establishing your team
There are many ways to establish a team.
Here’s what we did.
ESTABLISHING YOUR TEAM
1. We started by taking requests
ESTABLISHING YOUR TEAM
Downsides?
ESTABLISHING YOUR TEAM
🏁
ESTABLISHING YOUR TEAM
Kickoff
Project manager
Designer
Engineers
UX writer
Life of a project
2. We paired up with designers
• We started working as an embedded member of cross-
functional teams.
• This gets us involved earlier.
• And it’s a good way to work. We found our groove.
ESTABLISHING YOUR TEAM
🏁
ESTABLISHING YOUR TEAM
Kickoff
Project manager
Designer
Engineers
UX writer
Life of a project
Downsides?
• Lots of context switching.
• As the workload increases, we’ve wound up shipping
rougher and rougher drafts.
ESTABLISHING YOUR TEAM
3. What’s next?
• We’re getting more choosey, covering just the projects
we think we can contribute to most.
• And we’re going to try a menu of services for the
projects we aren’t covering.
ESTABLISHING YOUR TEAM
We’re making this up as we go along,
but we’re making it up together.
ESTABLISHING YOUR TEAM
1. Start by taking requests
2. Next, pair up with designers
3. Finally, get choosey
Establishing your team
• Trust each other’s instincts
• Have fuzzy conversations
• Play by improv rules
WORKING WITH DESIGNERS
CRAFTING USER FLOWS
• Keep the product conceptually simple
• But appropriately complicated
• Start with the most common path
ESTABLISHING YOUR TEAM
• Start by taking requests
• Next, pair up with designers
• Finally, get choosey
WRITING MICROCOPY
• Be radically human
• Look for emotional moments
• Get fresh eyes on it
• Be the expert
🙏 Thanks!
Andrew Schmidt, Slack

Writing for buttons (and everything else): How UX teams can craft stronger copy

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    WRITING FOR BUTTONS WRITINGFOR BUTTONS WRITING FOR BUTTONS WRITING FOR BUTTONS and everything else
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    Working with designers Craftinguser flows Establishing your team Writing microcopy
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    Working with designers Establishingyour team Crafting user flows Writing microcopy
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    Mostly, writing microcopyis like writing anything else. WRITING MICROCOPY
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    A few keydifferences: • Users ≠ audience. They’re here to accomplish a task. • You’re working on a cross-functional team. • It’s weirder. There’s jargon. WRITING MICROCOPY
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    Four handy rulesfor writing microcopy WRITING MICROCOPY
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    1. Be radicallyhuman " • You have to choose to do this, actively, every day. • And it gets harder over time. WRITING MICROCOPY
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    2. Look foremotional moments, and just be part of them • This is the opposite of “making a moment happen.” • Don’t do that. • Instead, this is about finding the moments that are already there. WRITING MICROCOPY
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    3. Get fresheyes on it • Editing someone else’s work makes you feel like a genius. • Be that genius for your teammates. • Ask your teammates to be that for you. WRITING MICROCOPY
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    4. Be theexpert • Taste & instincts come from time & experience. • Yours is the judgment we’re following. • But matters of taste can be hard to defend. WRITING MICROCOPY
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    1. Be radicallyhuman 2. Look for emotional moments 3. Get fresh eyes on it 4. Be the expert Writing microcopy
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    Writing microcopy Establishing yourteam Crafting user flows Working with designers
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    Crafting user flows Writingmicrocopy Establishing your team Working with designers
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    This is yourmost important relationship, your partner on that Chicago picnic. WORKING WITH DESIGNERS
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    Because… • You’re facingthe same problems… • …and balancing the same feedback. • And, of course: you’re going to make things together. WORKING WITH DESIGNERS
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    Most designers havenever worked with a writer. It’s up to you to make this work. WORKING WITH DESIGNERS
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    1. Trust eachother’s instincts WORKING WITH DESIGNERS
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    2. Have fuzzyconversations WORKING WITH DESIGNERS
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    WORKING WITH DESIGNERS Writer’sskillset Designer’s skillset
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    3. Play byimprov rules • You’re going to be asking your designer to try a lot of things that sound silly. • You need to be willing to try silly things, too. • Never give an immediate “no.” Start with “yes, and…” WORKING WITH DESIGNERS
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    A quick noteabout humans… WORKING WITH DESIGNERS
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    Trust each other’sinstincts Have fuzzy conversations Play by improv rules Working with designers
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    Writing microcopy Establishing yourteam Working with designers Crafting user flows
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    Working with designers Writingmicrocopy Establishing your team Crafting user flows
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    This is theheart of it, 
 where UX writing comes into its own. CRAFTING USER FLOWS
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    This is whereyou do your best work • You keep the product conceptually simple… • But also appropriately complicated. • And, yeah: you choose the very best words. CRAFTING USER FLOWS
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    Keep the productconceptually simple • Only add nouns as a last resort. • Because: each new noun is just one more thing your users have to learn. CRAFTING USER FLOWS
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    But also appropriatelycomplicated • Don’t just write better words. 
 Create the space for better language. • By: rethinking, reworking, and redesigning. • That’s the difference between UX writing & copywriting. CRAFTING USER FLOWS
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    Don’t write fora single screen. Write for the whole flow. CRAFTING USER FLOWS
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    CRAFTING USER FLOWS Exampleflow: “The free trial offer”
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    Example flow: “The freetrial offer” CRAFTING USER FLOWS User can accept offer → ✓ User can’t, but someone else can → ✓ User can’t accept offer → X
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    Don’t start withthe simplest path. Start with the most common. CRAFTING USER FLOWS
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    Example flow: “The freetrial offer” CRAFTING USER FLOWS User can accept offer → ✓ User can’t, but someone else can → ✓ User can’t accept offer → X ✓ User can’t, but someone else can →
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    Keep the productconceptually simple. But also appropriately complicated. Don’t write for a screen. Write for the whole flow. Start with the most common path. Crafting user flows
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    Writing microcopy Working withdesigners Crafting user flows Establishing your team
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    Working with designers Craftinguser flows Writing microcopy Establishing your team
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    There are manyways to establish a team. Here’s what we did. ESTABLISHING YOUR TEAM
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    1. We startedby taking requests ESTABLISHING YOUR TEAM
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    🏁 ESTABLISHING YOUR TEAM Kickoff Projectmanager Designer Engineers UX writer Life of a project
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    2. We pairedup with designers • We started working as an embedded member of cross- functional teams. • This gets us involved earlier. • And it’s a good way to work. We found our groove. ESTABLISHING YOUR TEAM
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    🏁 ESTABLISHING YOUR TEAM Kickoff Projectmanager Designer Engineers UX writer Life of a project
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    Downsides? • Lots ofcontext switching. • As the workload increases, we’ve wound up shipping rougher and rougher drafts. ESTABLISHING YOUR TEAM
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    3. What’s next? •We’re getting more choosey, covering just the projects we think we can contribute to most. • And we’re going to try a menu of services for the projects we aren’t covering. ESTABLISHING YOUR TEAM
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    We’re making thisup as we go along, but we’re making it up together. ESTABLISHING YOUR TEAM
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    1. Start bytaking requests 2. Next, pair up with designers 3. Finally, get choosey Establishing your team
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    • Trust eachother’s instincts • Have fuzzy conversations • Play by improv rules WORKING WITH DESIGNERS CRAFTING USER FLOWS • Keep the product conceptually simple • But appropriately complicated • Start with the most common path ESTABLISHING YOUR TEAM • Start by taking requests • Next, pair up with designers • Finally, get choosey WRITING MICROCOPY • Be radically human • Look for emotional moments • Get fresh eyes on it • Be the expert
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