Error correction article c2.1 2020 key

1. Erroneous: Nevertheless, this capitalist and individualist system can be harmful, not
only for the environment, but also for our health
Correct: Nevertheless, this capitalist and individualistic system can be harmful, not
only for the environment, but also for our health
Erroneous: Camper considered the possibility of using plastic waste to fabricate their
shoes.
Correct: Camper considered the possibility of using plastic waste to fabricate careful
it is normally pejorative  manufacture / make their shoes.
Erroneous: The second partnership is with Ecoalf, who is wildly known in Spain for the
usage of recycled plastic in the production of their clothes, and it is called Together.
Correct: The second partnership is with Ecoalf, who is wildly known in Spain for the
use (usage is only for languages) of recycled plastic in the production of their
clothes, and it is called Together.
Erroneous: a project destined to collect all of the plastic residues found in the sea,
which counts with the collaboration of different fishers from Spain and Thailand.
Correct: a project destined to collect all of the plastic residues found in the sea, which
benefits from the collaboration of different fishermen from Spain and Thailand.
Erroneous: Nowadays it is one of the three largest electricity companies in the world
by market capitalisation, as well as being the world leader in renewable energy.
Correct: Nowadays it is one of the three largest electricity companies in the world by
market capitalisation, as well as being the world leader in renewable energy.
Erroneous: The most important effort and decision that turned Iberdrola in one of the
largests electricity companies in the world, was the internacional expansion
Correct: The most important effort and decision that turned Iberdrola into one of the
largest electricity companies in the world, was its international expansion
Erroneous: Also, they needed to have a balance between open-concept design
and more personal space to please the necessities from those that benefited the
most from and open office but also those who were a bit more introvert

2. Correct: Also, they needed to have a balance between an open-concept design
and more personal space to please the necessities from meet the needs of those
that / who benefited the most from an open office / space but also of those who
were a bit more introvert introverted.
Erroneous: Samsung’s facility on Silicon Valley
Correct: Samsung’s facility in Silicon Valley
Erroneous: Fairphone is a Benefit corporation that has won several prices for its fair
labor conditions
Correct: Fairphone is a Benefit corporation that has won several prizes for its fair
labor conditions
Erroneous: They do a really hard work tracking the supply chain in order to ensure
that the materials come for fair treat mines and not from those governed by war lords
exploiting people in conflict areas
Correct: They do a really hard work work hard at tracking the supply chain in order
to ensure that the materials come for fair treat trade mines and not from those
governed by war lords exploiting people in conflict areas.
Erroneous: All mentioned, it is everything about consumers mindset what would have
to change to the better in order to lead into more responsible consumption behavior to
help those who are just not able to get a $500 phone every two years
Correct: All mentioned, it is everything all about the consumers’ mindset what that
would have to change to for the better in order to lead into to more responsible
consumption behavior to help those who are just not able unable to get a $500 phone
every two years
Erroneous: In order to help them, Nespresso founded the AAA Academy in Sidamo,
where farmers are equipped with the newest agricultural practices
Correct: In order to help them, Nespresso founded the AAA Academy in Sidamo,
where farmers are equipped with the newest agricultural practices (you are not
equipped with practices  machinery / devices)
Erroneous: First of all, the general image of our brand has experimented a great
improvement, receiving amazing critics from newspapers, celebrities and experts.

3. Correct: First of all, the general image of our brand has experimented experienced a
great improvement, receiving amazing critics critiques / reviews from newspapers,
celebrities and experts.