The document discusses how a store selling sporting goods at cheap prices can increase participation in sports. By making equipment more accessible, more people are able to enjoy sports, raising their popularity. The store is able to give many opportunities to people to engage in different sports activities. The document also conveys the business model of the store clearly.

1. 1.
About the business of the inside of a store sales sporting goods. The
company can give a lot of people chances to enjoy various sports by
selling good sporting goods cheap player, and is useful for people. And,
the popularity of sports is raised. In addition, a lot of people come to enjoy
doing sports.
2.
I think that the individual section and headings of the document were
conveyed definitely. Of each is firmly answered, and our opinions are
made firmly. Moreover, they think how to act by the inside of a store sales
sporting goods. And, they think what effect you can expect.
3.
No, I wasn't. I didn't confused reading these sentences.
4.
I think that the point that the point is plainly written was good. Because
former sentences can be understood only from reading this.
5.
I think that it is good that the content of the business of the company is
clear.
6.
There is unnecessary space in the contents of the email.
7.
They should have written more detail to explain their will.
8.
1. We read extra information, and make it less mistake.
2. The word they use to write is too easy, it doesn’t like a student of
university.
3.We discussed and thought a lot before we finished it.