1. General Comments: To improve try to develop a better focus within your
discussion. You could set out clear objectives within the introduction to help
you to do this. Agree with the assessor comments. A tendency to focus
upon Marketing rather than Business Strategy as specified
Areas for Commendation:
Systematic application of analytical models.
Areas for Improvement:
Interpretation and application of academic theories to develop skills in
critical evaluation .
Please try to do as better as u can,i got less mark on exam which have to
cover by the assignment.
thank u