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1.<br />I think the primary idea of the content in the document explain that a way to duplicate DVD movies.<br />This article explains the way that a reproduction of the DVD for a user of this DVD copy software; moreover, this article explains the operation method with the PC of this software.<br />2.<br />I think that the individual sections and headings in the document clearly represent the idea that was communicated can learly represent the idea; because, the individual sections and headings are written to be able to understand the contents of the document at first sight.<br />Therefore, when we make the document, I think the individual sections and headings become very important role.<br />3.<br />This document includes some details of contents.<br />This document explain that Ripping a DVD from the disc onto your computer allows you to use the video footage from the DVD in multiple computer programs, such as media players and video editor. If you just want to create a duplicate of the movie for backup, you can rip the movie file to your computer and burn the file straight to disc.<br />4.<br /> I felt that the following sentence was confusing expression.<br />“Choose the folder in which you want the file to be saved on the hard drive by clicking the folder by quot;
Destination,quot;
 navigating to the folder in the window that pops up and clicking quot;
OK.quot;
 Click the quot;
Decryptquot;
 button to rip the ISO file from the DVD and save it to the folder.”<br />5.<br />How to use DVD was written in detail. I thought there to be a good part. <br />Because there are the methods of the download a lot of people whom I do not know. I think that I am easy for such people. <br />I want to follow such a style, too. <br />6.<br />I felt that there was not the error in particular. The mistakes such as the grammar were not found, too. <br />When I write a sentence, a probationer thinks such a sentence to have been it. <br />However, I am sorry that I have many paragraphs. I think that I should reduce a paragraph a little more.<br />7.<br />This sentence felt that there were many paragraphs. I think that I should summarize a sentence a little more.<br />I will become a better sentence if I do so it. However, I think that I had better write the place to write finely.<br />Even if anyone looks, you must aim for a plain sentence.<br />8.<br />・I was different from other groups in the thing with many paragraphs greatly. I think that there is very much it, and there is it.<br />・It was written considerably from other groups finely. It was written in detail, and even a beginner was plain.<br />・Various technical knowledge was written in this prose. I can get a lot of knowledge.<br /> <br />
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Portfolio contents11(week6-2)

  • 1. 1.<br />I think the primary idea of the content in the document explain that a way to duplicate DVD movies.<br />This article explains the way that a reproduction of the DVD for a user of this DVD copy software; moreover, this article explains the operation method with the PC of this software.<br />2.<br />I think that the individual sections and headings in the document clearly represent the idea that was communicated can learly represent the idea; because, the individual sections and headings are written to be able to understand the contents of the document at first sight.<br />Therefore, when we make the document, I think the individual sections and headings become very important role.<br />3.<br />This document includes some details of contents.<br />This document explain that Ripping a DVD from the disc onto your computer allows you to use the video footage from the DVD in multiple computer programs, such as media players and video editor. If you just want to create a duplicate of the movie for backup, you can rip the movie file to your computer and burn the file straight to disc.<br />4.<br /> I felt that the following sentence was confusing expression.<br />“Choose the folder in which you want the file to be saved on the hard drive by clicking the folder by quot; Destination,quot; navigating to the folder in the window that pops up and clicking quot; OK.quot; Click the quot; Decryptquot; button to rip the ISO file from the DVD and save it to the folder.”<br />5.<br />How to use DVD was written in detail. I thought there to be a good part. <br />Because there are the methods of the download a lot of people whom I do not know. I think that I am easy for such people. <br />I want to follow such a style, too. <br />6.<br />I felt that there was not the error in particular. The mistakes such as the grammar were not found, too. <br />When I write a sentence, a probationer thinks such a sentence to have been it. <br />However, I am sorry that I have many paragraphs. I think that I should reduce a paragraph a little more.<br />7.<br />This sentence felt that there were many paragraphs. I think that I should summarize a sentence a little more.<br />I will become a better sentence if I do so it. However, I think that I had better write the place to write finely.<br />Even if anyone looks, you must aim for a plain sentence.<br />8.<br />・I was different from other groups in the thing with many paragraphs greatly. I think that there is very much it, and there is it.<br />・It was written considerably from other groups finely. It was written in detail, and even a beginner was plain.<br />・Various technical knowledge was written in this prose. I can get a lot of knowledge.<br /> <br />