Portfolio contents10(week4-2)

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Portfolio contents10(week4-2)

  1. 1. 1. <br />I read Group A documents, and I thought organization of the content in this document is as follows. <br />First, the beginning of this sentence is e-mail to Dr. roy that was written this group thinking on the process of setting up the company. <br />Second, The middle of this sentence is explaining the process of setting up their company. <br />Third, The last of this sentence is explaining the current situation and the need for this start-up their company in details. <br /> <br />2. <br />I think the individual sections and headings in the document can clearly represent the idea; because, the individual sections and headings are written to be able to understand the contents of the document at first sight. <br />Therefore, when we make the document, I think the individual sections and headings become very important role. <br /> <br />3. <br />This group document includes some details of contents. <br />First, this document is written the reason in detail why this group started their company. <br />Second, this document is written mission statement of this company. I think idea is indispensable to manage a healthy company. <br />Lastly, this document is written a future of this company and this company’s policy in detail. <br /> <br />4. <br /> I felt that the following sentence was confusing expression. <br />“There are many people who coming Aizu to commute from other town or city. It is a burden to student who live in out of Aizu. However, they can't live here because Aizu don't have weekly or monthly condo near University of Aizu.” <br />When I read this document, I think this sentence make a mistake in grammar here and there, so this sentence becomes incomprehensible. <br /> <br />

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