2. Story In 10 Bullet Points
1.
The girl is walking on a pavement, which is a low angle of her feet in slow
motion, then shows her point of view, then shows match on action
2. Then shows her walking toward a canal/alleyway where it’s quiet, then
shows the characters distressed face before her flashback
3. First flashback- Putting down trophy dripping of blood
4. Before next flashback, shows her splatter of blood marks on her face
5. Second flashback- Cleaning up mess of blood in the bathroom
6. The character is still walking, acting off edge, then shows her face before
the third flashback- Girl is in the shower washing blood off her
clothes/body
7. Fourth flashback- Shows her wrapping up evidence
8. Fifth flashback- Shows her walking out of her house with a black bag
9. Shows her point of view looking at the canal/road where she will throw
the bag
10. Shows her walking and throwing bag away
3. Linear, Chronological Time
Timeline
Non-Linear (Flashbacks)
Titles/Credits (On black)
Camera Shots & Effects
0 Secs
Match on action, Slow
paced editing, POV and
Low angle
Shows character walking
on the pavement
Wide shot, POV,
Extreme close-up and
Close-up
Shows her cleaning up
mess of blood in
bathroom
Extreme close-up
and close-up
Shows her holding
trophy dripping of
blood
30 Secs
T
Close-up, Wide shot and
Mid shot
Then shows her walking
toward canal/alleyway
and shows her
distressed face
Close-up shot
Shows blood
splatter all over
her face
4. Linear, Chronological Time
Timeline
Non-Linear (Flashbacks)
Titles/Credits (On black)
T
Camera Shots & Effects
Wide shot, Close-up
and Extreme closeup
Girl is in the shower
washing blood off
her clothes/body
Wide shot, Close up,
Tracking and Extreme
close-up
Girl is still walking
rapidly, looking behind
her, then shows her
face
Extreme close-up ,
Wide shot and close
up
Shows her wrapping
up evidence
POV, Wide shot and
Close up
Shows the road where
she will throw the
black bag in her
perspective
Close-up and
Wide shot
Shows her
walking out of her
house with a
black bag
Wide shot and
Close up
Shows her
throwing
black bag
away
5. Changes From Timelines
The previous timeline was
fairly vague with little detail
and information.
Detail of five flashbacks
We were then able to explore
the different special effects,
props and camera shots would
be appropriate for each scene.
This timeline didn’t specify
how many flashbacks we had
or have a clear explanation
of the flashbacks.
When we were able to
describe what would happen
within each flashback, it
became easier for us to
understand where to place
them.
