1. Audience Feedback
Person A The text on the female edition needs to stand out more,
the font and colour makes it quite difficult to read. The
actual photo is very good and has a professional look.
On the Male edition I like how you have replaced the the
Mona Lisa with a model as it helps to portray a message
that fashion is first of all influenced by art but it also
replacing it.
Person B Your webpage seems to be very messy and there is too
much, however the content and photos used are very
good,you just need to have less of it.
Person C The Masthead on Both of yourmagazines should be
larger But apart from that I really like both of them.
Person D I like your website but it is too busy and can be confusing
to read.
Person E The editing of the model on the male edition is very good
and looks very professionaland the photo you took for
the female edition is spot on with the message it is
portraying.
