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Screenplay Coverage Report
Title: TokyoMetHumane
Author: Jojo Date: 20/11/18
Read by: Unjuli Page Length: 3
Genre: Action Time Period: 3minutes
Budget: N/A Rating: 4star
Logline: A notorious armedb robber manages to flee from Spain
and enter the gates of central city only to be hit by the
storm which changes her massively to the point that she is now
a MetaHumane.
Excellent Good Fair Poor
Concept/Originality -
Plot/Storyline -
Characters -
Dialogue -
Structure -
Cinematic Value -
Recommend Consider Pass
Script -
Writer -
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Overall: The script overall was a good effort but was lacking a
bit of action. It was also needed way more detail to make the
story way more exciting.
3. 3
Synopsis: (Tokyo decides to use her money fromthe heist to flee fromSpain
to the US. Just as she arrives into Central City, she’s comes across a bright light
which causes her to lose control of the car which tips down the side of the road
down the hill. She gets out of the car with scratches and bruises and at this
moment is very confused. Shemakes her way back to the highway and once she
gets there, she starts signalling for help but every car drives pasther. She drops
and loses consciousness and then when shewakes up shefinds herself in a lab.
She wakes up and she sees Caitlin who she starts talking to. Barry Allen
(Detective) then walks in to the room which she then starts processing
flashbacks of previous events of him shooting Moscow. Shethen tells Caitlin she
needs to leave but Caitlin and Barry are refusing to let her leave which then
build her anger which turns her red and makes her voice change deeper. Caitlin
tries to calm her down but Tokyo then pushes Caitlin which makes her go flying
which she then leaves. Barry then rushes to Caitlin to see if she’s ok.
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Specific Comments: A few sentences on each of
the following topics:
Concept/Originality The concept was okay but there were
certain things that were not original such
as the characthers and the
settings.However the powers were good.
Plot/Storyline The storyline is very original and could
be very exciting if put into action. But
would be extremely hard to pull of.
Characters The characters are not original at all and
are from a real tv series.
5. 5
Dialogue The dialougue was a bit dull a times. It
needed way more action and suspence to
make it more interesting.
Structure
Cinematic Value
