The document summarizes changes made to a magazine in response to feedback from a media expert. The magazine designer desaturated photos to make them less bright for their target 16+ audience. They also changed the font and added an outline to cover text to make it stand out more. Finally, a button promoting a free download was removed to make the magazine seem less like a pop magazine.

1. PRINT SCREENS AFTER FEEDBACK

2. DESATURATING IT
I got feedback on my magazine from a professional media expert from media hub, and he said my magazine was too
bright for my 16+ independent audience. I therefore responded to his feedback by pressing Ctrl + U, which brought
up this Hue/saturation widget. After which I decreased the Saturation in order to grey my photo and make it look less
poppy.

3. Changing font and adding stroke
I was also given feedback to change the font and positioning of my cover lines. I scrolled through the
fonts until I found the font “Agency FB” which fits looks better on my front cover than my previous font.
Then I went to the FX option on the layer, and added a white stroke, whilst the font is black so it creates
an interesting font that stands out.

4. Deleting button
Finally I deleted the button which read “Free EP download inside” as it was too much
like a pop magazine rather than a music magazine