My teacher reviewed my draft double page article and suggested some changes and additions. She corrected parts of the article and told me to include some information that was missing. I will now revise my article, making all the changes recommended by my teacher to produce an excellent final version.

1. Double Page Article Draft
I began to write up my draft article for my
double page spread, I then got it checked by
my teacher and she made a few corrections
and told me to add a few things that my
article was missing, this is what I handed in
and further on I will make all the changes and
make my article excellent