Running head: MILESTONE THREE 1
AFTERCARE PLANS FOR NON VIOLENT, VIOLENT AND TRAUMA VICTIMS 2
Aftercare Plans For Non Violent, Violent and Trauma Victims Comment by Jones, Rachell L (Ph.D.) CIV USA MCCOE: Clarify that these are offenders.
Matthew Rosario
Southern New Hampshire University
Aftercare Plans For Non Violent, Violent and Trauma Victims
Individuals are faced with different challenges when adapting to their new surrounding after certain activity or events in their lives. It is very difficult to integrate effectively with the society without significantly considering important issues that are involved. Therefore, there is need to formulate a better plan, which ensures that there is a better engagement, and individuals can adapt to their surrounding effectively. Development of an aftercare plan is very important as it puts into consideration different strategies and components that need to be considered while focusing on the condition of an individual at hand. Thus every condition has different aftercare plan, which is developed in a strategic manner to ensure that there, is an easy adaptation to the new changes. This paper, therefore, provides a detailed analysis of aftercare plan focusing on offenders both violent and nonviolent as well as trauma victims. Comment by Jones, Rachell L (Ph.D.) CIV USA MCCOE: This is too vague…remember you are talking specifically about offenders and their victims. Comment by Jones, Rachell L (Ph.D.) CIV USA MCCOE: Also too vague…this could be talking about anything as it’s currently written. Consider each sentence in your paper. Is it impactful? Does it clearly convey your intent? Is it clearly addressing rubric requirements? Etc… Comment by Jones, Rachell L (Ph.D.) CIV USA MCCOE: APA style: your entire paper should be left aligned, not justified, never justified. Comment by Jones, Rachell L (Ph.D.) CIV USA MCCOE: Really? Comment by Jones, Rachell L (Ph.D.) CIV USA MCCOE: Watch your subject/verb agreement and use of plural/singular/etc.
In all of the cases considered an individual is psychological influenced which makes it a complicated process to ensure that they conform to a certain way of life with much ease as it would have been expected. Thus, development of aftercare plans in these cases provides a strategic engagement where these individuals can be able to be integrated into the society with much ease through the consideration of respective aftercare plans (James et.al, 2013). Comment by Jones, Rachell L (Ph.D.) CIV USA MCCOE: Grammar issues make many of your sentences very difficult to understand, and their relevance is suspect. So continue to work on this to improve. Comment by Jones, Rachell L (Ph.D.) CIV USA MCCOE: Overall comment: Continue to work on improving the clarity, conciseness, and grammar issues with your writing. Also work on your APA formatting througho ...
1. Running head: MILESTONE THREE
1
AFTERCARE PLANS FOR NON VIOLENT, VIOLENT AND
TRAUMA VICTIMS 2
Aftercare Plans For Non Violent, Violent and Trauma Victims
Comment by Jones, Rachell L (Ph.D.) CIV USA MCCOE:
Clarify that these are offenders.
Matthew Rosario
Southern New Hampshire University
2. Aftercare Plans For Non Violent, Violent and Trauma Victims
Individuals are faced with different challenges when adapting to
their new surrounding after certain activity or events in their
lives. It is very difficult to integrate effectively with the society
without significantly considering important issues that are
involved. Therefore, there is need to formulate a better plan,
which ensures that there is a better engagement, and individuals
can adapt to their surrounding effectively. Development of an
aftercare plan is very important as it puts into consideration
different strategies and components that need to be considered
while focusing on the condition of an individual at hand. Thus
every condition has different aftercare plan, which is developed
in a strategic manner to ensure that there, is an easy adaptation
to the new changes. This paper, therefore, provides a detailed
analysis of aftercare plan focusing on offenders both violent and
nonviolent as well as trauma victims. Comment by Jones,
Rachell L (Ph.D.) CIV USA MCCOE: This is too
vague…remember you are talking specifically about offenders
and their victims. Comment by Jones, Rachell L (Ph.D.) CIV
USA MCCOE: Also too vague…this could be talking about
anything as it’s currently written. Consider each sentence in
your paper. Is it impactful? Does it clearly convey your intent?
Is it clearly addressing rubric requirements? Etc… Comment by
Jones, Rachell L (Ph.D.) CIV USA MCCOE: APA style: your
entire paper should be left aligned, not justified, never justified.
Comment by Jones, Rachell L (Ph.D.) CIV USA MCCOE:
Really? Comment by Jones, Rachell L (Ph.D.) CIV USA
MCCOE: Watch your subject/verb agreement and use of
plural/singular/etc.
In all of the cases considered an individual is psychological
influenced which makes it a complicated process to ensure that
they conform to a certain way of life with much ease as it would
have been expected. Thus, development of aftercare plans in
these cases provides a strategic engagement where these
individuals can be able to be integrated into the society with
3. much ease through the consideration of respective aftercare
plans (James et.al, 2013). Comment by Jones, Rachell L (Ph.D.)
CIV USA MCCOE: Grammar issues make many of your
sentences very difficult to understand, and their relevance is
suspect. So continue to work on this to improve. Comment by
Jones, Rachell L (Ph.D.) CIV USA MCCOE: Overall comment:
Continue to work on improving the clarity, conciseness, and
grammar issues with your writing. Also work on your APA
formatting throughout.
Provide support for your statements throughout as well, cite if
they came from a source, cite to provide support based on
research etc. for your given statements/choices of aftercare
plans, etc.
Components of an effective aftercare plan
Therefore the aftercare plan will include some components
which need to be considered for development of a better plan.
Aftercare plan consists of five critical components, which must
be considered to create a better aftercare plan. An important
component of aftercare plan includes triggers. This includes
anything that could lead to the previous conditions. Thus, it is
important to list all the factors that are considered as triggers to
develop a better plan on how to avoid the situation. This may
also include friends. Cravings also form part of the components
to include in aftercare plan. This is a feeling of being addicted
to a certain way or things (James et .al., 2013). Comment by
Jones, Rachell L (Ph.D.) CIV USA MCCOE: New section, so
this transition is not applicable. Comment by Jones, Rachell
L (Ph.D.) CIV USA MCCOE: Which are what? Cite where you
got this from and why? Comment by Jones, Rachell L (Ph.D.)
CIV USA MCCOE: See your APA manual for how to properly
format citations in text and fix all.
Healthy tools include a list of important tools that have played a
significant role in the recovery process and thus it is important
to include them in an aftercare plan because of their sheer
importance. Recovery program tools are also important in the
4. development of the plan since it involves some steps to
consider. Damage control is an important component, which
includes various ways, which can be put in place to amend the
damages of addiction. These damages should be clearly
separated from critical areas in lives of individuals. Thus,
occasionally it is important for a patient to revisit their
aftercare plan to have a view on some of the important
components that are included in the plan (Holdsworth et. al.Al,
2014).
Aftercare plan for non-violent offenders
Nonviolent offenders are individuals who are convicted on
minor charges, such as property, drug and public order offenses,
which do not involve a threat to harm. Most of these crimes
involve addiction and thus even though they may have had their
time in correctional facilities or rehabilitation centers, there is a
high chance of getting back to the previous ways, and thus there
is need to develop a better aftercare plan to ensure that they are
effectively monitored. Therefore the aftercare plan will include
some components which need to be considered for development
of a better plan (Holdsworth et.al, 2014).Comment by Jones,
Rachell L (Ph.D.) CIV USA MCCOE: Support for these
statements? Comment by Jones, Rachell L (Ph.D.) CIV USA
MCCOE: This doesn’t really state anything substantive..
Therefore, in this case, the aftercare plan will outline the
reasons that led to previous conditions. This would consider in
order understanding these factors to develop better strategies to
avert the situation. An individual should admit her condition
and show a willingness to change his or her ways effectively.
Counseling is a very important aspect of aftercare plan for
nonviolent offenders since they do not require any significant
consideration but rather a reassurance that they are important
within the society if they consider the better ways of living.
Considering spiritual guidance is also an important part of
aftercare plan in non-violent offenders since these are
individuals who need to be shown total love through better
engagement. Thus, these are important components of the
5. aftercare plan for nonviolent offenders as it focuses on key
aspects of their lives (Duwe, 2015). Comment by Jones, Rachell
L (Ph.D.) CIV USA MCCOE: Same general comments. Work on
grammar to make your statements clear and to just make general
sense because many do not throughout.
Work on providing support from research for your choices and
ensure to cite when using info from sources.
Aftercare plan for violent offenders
Violent offenders require significant consideration since they
are capable of extreme actions. The first aspect to consider in
developing an aftercare plan for violent offenders is their
psychological composition. It is important to understand these
individuals are of sound mind before any engagement. The
psychological consideration will provide the required
understanding of their characteristics and why they are violent
in nature. There is the need for intense counseling once they are
found to be of sound mind. The intense counseling will seek at
creating a new understanding of these individuals personality
since a violent offender will always receive negative
consideration from the society, which is most likely to influence
their return to previous violent ways. Therefore, it is important
to ensure that these individuals understand themselves and help
them to develop their fragile personality until they are strong
enough (Gossner et.al, 2016). Comment by Jones, Rachell L
(Ph.D.) CIV USA MCCOE: Maybe, maybe not. Comment by
Jones, Rachell L (Ph.D.) CIV USA MCCOE: Maybe, maybe
not…
Integration into community development programs is an
important consideration, which is important in an aftercare plan
since being engaged ensures that an individual is not focusing
on doing any harm but rather of promoting developmental
agendas within their communities. Most of these violent
offenders have specific reasons as to why they resort to
violence. These reasons must be significantly identified to
create a better engagement environment where they can be able
6. to learn and adapt to new way of life (Duwe, 2015).
Comment by Jones, Rachell L (Ph.D.) CIV USA MCCOE:
How do you know this? Comment by Jones, Rachell L (Ph.D.)
CIV USA MCCOE: What does this mean? Significantly
identified? Comment by Jones, Rachell L (Ph.D.) CIV USA
MCCOE: Same comments as above on this section.
Aftercare plan for Trauma victim
A trauma victim is an individual who has serious psychological
issues, which leave them very weak and terrified. Aftercare plan
for such individuals involves counseling. The counseling’s
process aims at identifying the reasons of the trauma and
develop better strategies to engage the victim to help them to
regain their initial condition. A trauma victim takes the time to
heal since their memory is always engrossed in the traumatic
action that occurred. Thus unless the bad memory is erased, it is
difficult to engage such victims (Doherty and Morley, 2016).
Comment by Jones, Rachell L (Ph.D.) CIV USA MCCOE:
This is not true at all. Some trauma victims may have these
issues, but some cope just fine. You must write more clearly.
Therefore, the best and most significant plan is to consider
each case differently and help them in undergoing the different
counseling stages, which are aimed at improving the wellbeing
of the victim. A trauma victim cannot heal at once but it is a
process which is systematic, and any omission of one-step
prevents the effectiveness of the whole process; thus they are
very delicate individuals to deal with, but with proper care and
attention it is much easy to manage their conditions (Muraya
and Fry, 2016).Comment by Jones, Rachell L (Ph.D.) CIV USA
MCCOE: Same comments. Work on improving the clarity of
your writing, making sure each sentence says what it is
supposed to (many of your sentences do not convey intended
message). Weave support for your choices throughout, and cite,
cite, cite…
It’s hard to say given your grammar issues, but you do have
some good content, and a good start. Work on issues and
7. resubmit before final project for another round of feedback.
References
Doherty, S., & Morley, R. (2016). 8 Promoting Psychological
Recovery in Victims of Human Trafficking. Human Trafficking,
121. Comment by Jones, Rachell L (Ph.D.) CIV USA MCCOE:
References are NOT in APA format. Break out your manual, and
see how each piece of a reference is formatting. Correct all.
Duwe, G. (2015). Does Release Planning for Serious and
Persistent Mental Illness Offenders Reduce Recidivism? Results
From an Outcome Evaluation. Journal of Offender
Rehabilitation, 54(1), 19-36.
Gossner, D., Simon, T., Rector, B., & Ruddell, R. (2016). Case
planning and recidivism of high risk and violent adult
probationers. Journal of Community Safety and Well-Being,
1(2), 32-43.
Holdsworth, E., Bowen, E., Brown, S., & Howat, D. (2014).
Offender engagement in group programs and associations with
offender characteristics and treatment factors: A review.
Aggression and violent behavior, 19(2), 102-121.
James, C., Stams, G. J. J., Asscher, J. J., De Roo, A. K., & van
der Laan, P. H. (2013). Aftercare programs for reducing
recidivism among juvenile and young adult offenders: A meta-
analytic review. Clinical Psychology Review, 33(2), 263-274.
Muraya, D. N., & Fry, D. (2016). Aftercare services for child
victims of sex trafficking: a systematic review of policy and
8. practice. Trauma, Violence, & Abuse, 17(2), 204-220.
Running head: MILESTONE THREE
Running head: FINAL PROJECT 2
Put A Title Here and Get Creative Comment by Jones, Rachell
L (Ph.D.) CIV USA MCCOE: Title page is centered on the page.
First M. Last Comment by Jones, Rachell L (Ph.D.) CIV USA
MCCOE: E.g., Rachell L. Jones
Southern New Hampshire University Comment by Jones,
Rachell L (Ph.D.) CIV USA MCCOE: The entire font of your
paper (including the header, which many overlook) should be
Times New Roman, 12 pt font, double spaced, with NO extra
spacing anywhere, even between paragraphs, etc.
Same Title Goes Here and is Formatted the Same, Nothing Extra
Fancy or Different Comment by Rachell: Okay, my version of
Word is NOT cooperating. The header should start on page 1. I
can’t get it to do so, but it should be page 1.
Introduction to your paper begins here. Make sure to have an
9. impactful first paragraph that sets the stage for the rest of your
paper. Many students introduce a brief summary of aftercare
plans here, before diving into the individual populations. Not a
requirement, but an option. Comment by Jones, Rachell L
(Ph.D.) CIV USA MCCOE: Always tab your paragraphs.
Comment by Jones, Rachell L (Ph.D.) CIV USA MCCOE:
APA rules are 2 spaces in between each sentence.
I am requiring the use of headers for you guys, as many
struggle with covering everything, and it also makes grading
easier for me, so thank you for your patience and
understanding! So you can use these as examples below, and
modify wording accordingly to whatever/however detailed down
you need them.
Aftercare PlansComment by Rachell: Milestone 3
3-4 PAGES REQUIRED
Non-violent Offenders Comment by Rachell: FOR EACH
TARGET POPULATION, ADDRESS THE FOLLOWING:
Now that you have had a chance to evaluate various treatment
plans for their efficacy and feasibility, recommend appropriate
aftercare plans for each of the target populations. In other
words, discuss where the subject will be going and what the
subject will be doing upon discharge, release, or completion of
care. Be sure to justify your recommendations with specific
research
Violent Offenders
Trauma Victims
References Comment by Jones, Rachell L (Ph.D.) CIV USA
MCCOE: A tip that I always follow:
10. AS A FINAL CHECK: go through your paper up above, and
ensure that if you have a reference here, you have a
corresponding citation up above, AND VICE VERSA, if you
have a citation up above, you must have a reference for it here.
Jones, R. L. (2016). Make sure you use your APA manuals to
format your references Comment by Jones, Rachell L (Ph.D.)
CIV USA MCCOE: Unlike the main body of APA papers, there
is only one space in between each punctuation mark in the
reference list.
There is a space in between each period of a person’s initials as
well. Comment by Jones, Rachell L (Ph.D.) CIV USA MCCOE:
Title of the article is not all capitalized (even though it may be
on the article you read).
appropriately: Which I know are required for many courses in
your degree program. Journal of Dr. Jones, 3(1), 1-31.
Comment by Jones, Rachell L (Ph.D.) CIV USA MCCOE:
2nd lines and so on are always tabbed over.
A trick: press enter in front of the second line, then press tab.
Comment by Jones, Rachell L (Ph.D.) CIV USA MCCOE:
Journal is always italicized, and capitalized.
Zebra, M. R. (2000). Your reference list should be alphabetized
as well. Journal of Super
Awesome Zoos, 6(23), 34-89.
PSY 624 Milestone Three Guidelines and Rubric: Draft of
Aftercare Plan
The development of an aftercare plan can often make or break
an offender’s success upon release from prison or a program.
Setting up your client with the best
11. possible aftercare program is vital. Knowing the resources,
having the connections, and knowing the procedures for getting
an individual involved in programs is
important. As with the previous two milestones, research is a
vital component of your everyday job. You must know where to
look for the most recent research
on a topic, and you must be aware of the laws and/or resources
pertaining to your clients in order to prepare the most effective
aftercare plan possible.
Prompt: Submit a draft of the aftercare plan (Section III) of
your final project, including all critical elements as listed
below. In this section you will use what you
have learned throughout the course and recommend an
appropriate aftercare plan for each of the target populations.
You may conduct and include research on
services in your area that you can recommend for your client.
Specifically the following critical elements must be addressed:
III. Aftercare Plan: Now that you have had a chance to evaluate
various treatment plans for their efficacy and feasibility,
recommend appropriate aftercare
plans for each of the target populations. In other words, discuss
where the subject will be going and what the subject will be
doing upon discharge,
release, or completion of care. Be sure to justify your
recommendations with specific research.
a) Non-violent offenders
b) Violent offenders
c) Trauma victims
Guidelines for Submission: Your draft of the aftercare plan
12. (Section III) must be submitted as a three- to four-page
Microsoft Word document with double
spacing, 12-point T imes New Roman font, one-inch margins,
and sources cited in APA format.
Instructor Feedback: This activity uses an integrated rubric in
Blackboard. Students can view instructor feedback in the Grade
Center. For more information,
review these instructions.
Critical Elements Proficient (100%) Needs Improvement (75%)
Not Evident (0%) Value
Aftercare Plan: Non-
Violent
Recommends appropriate aftercare
plans for non-violent offenders and
justifies recommendations with
research
Recommends aftercare plans that are
not appropriate for non-violent
offenders, or does not justify
recommendations with research
Does not recommend aftercare plans 30
Aftercare Plan: Violent Recommends appropriate aftercare
plans for violent offenders and justifies
recommendations with research
Recommends aftercare plans that are
not appropriate for violent offenders,
or does not justify recommendations
13. with research
Does not recommend aftercare plans 30
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media.snhu.edu/files/production_documentation/formatting/rubr
ic_feedback_instructions_student.pdf
Aftercare Plan: Victims Recommends appropriate aftercare
plans for trauma victims and justifies
recommendations with research
Recommends aftercare plans that are
not appropriate for trauma victims, or
does not justify recommendations
with research
Does not recommend aftercare plans 30
Articulation of Response Submission has no major errors related
to citations, grammar, spelling, syntax,
or organization
Submission has major errors related to
citations, grammar, spelling, syntax, or
organization that negatively impact
readability and articulation of main
ideas
Submission has critical errors related
to citations, grammar, spelling, syntax,
or organization that prevent
understanding of ideas