This presentation contains all the Alterations Along The Way that I did even a conclusion of how I explain that what was produced was much better.

1. Alterations Along The Way
Bridget Cardenas Pazmiño

2. Draft 1
In draft 1 I included various shots such as aerial
shots, and movements like tilt. My storyline was
about a girl called Destiny that suffered a plane
crash in which she was the only survivor. After that
day she started to see a strange shadow figure
creature that’s chasing her, in which she doesn’t
know why. Apart from this I added voice over which
gave the audience an idea of what the trailer is
about.

3. Final draft
For my final Draft I decided to slightly change some
aspects to my trailer such as the music ending and
add some scenes which I believe were needed in
order to tell the audience what the trailer is about, I
changed the name of the Actress to Ashley and I
also changed the plot very slightly like the instead
of not knowing why she is being chased it changed
to that she knows that the creature which is called
Destiny wants to kill her but through out of the
movie she will know why. The music ending ends
with quite dramatically and another scene added
would be when Ashley talks and the jump scare.

4. Conclusion
I feel happy with the changes done to my final
draft. I feel confident that all the changes
suggested by my target audience has helped me
to develop my final draft which thanks to them I
couldn’t have improved it.