1. Constructive criticism for Shades of grey
Need to lose the sound of voices from the cast behind the
camera.
Wind issues need to be re thought about to make it more
professional.
A voice over needs to be added to covey the typical
conventions of a film noir.
Avoid eye contact with the camera to make it look professional.
More shots need, a variety of different shots and continuity
editing is needed.
There is no soundtrack so it needs to be added into the final cut
to make it more realistic.
It was a bit confusing so adding more continuous shots will
make it less confusing.