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1. Zeel Sanatkumar
EXT.BLANK SCREEN
REPORTER (VOICE OVER)
The tragic deaths of several members of the
Bloom family has sparked a rage within the
small community. Though not the first family
to suffer this fate let us hope it's the
last. The twins-twin are the only one left.
ELIZA and IVY Bloom were so close before-
FADE IN
EXT. DAY. STREET.
IVY, an eccentrically dressed girl with brown hair who is
average height walks past ELIZA, IVY'S twins house shaking a
tub of pills.
INT. DAY. THE BLOOM HOUSEHOLD.
ELIZA a professional girl with brown hair and average
height, inside the house also shaking a tub of pills
creating a synchronous rhythmic sound to clash with the
music in the background.
TITLE: FRACTURE
ELIZA stands in front of a mirror dressed in smart casual
clothing, she turns to the left.ELIZA looks down at her
wrist showing her watch.
FLASHBACK TO:
INT. DAY. THE BLOOM HOUSEHOLD.
IVY stands in front of the mirror laughing and smiling at
her appearance.She wears casual clothes and leaves quickly
when she hears something in the house.
PRESENT
ELIZA looks on the ground at a loose pair of handcuffs,then
at a clear glistening knife nearby, her eyes go to family
photos then back to the knife and looks down at the floor.
Radio turns on.
REPORTER (VOICE OVER)
The murderous serial killer responsible for
the deaths of many is yet to be found. Who
will she strike next?Should we be losing
faith in our police?
Foreshadowing
events engages the
audience and creates
a mysterious surreal
experience.
Reoccurring motifs create enigmas within the audience
Repetition may
create a distinct
persuasive effect on
the audience
drawing attention to
the bottle of pills
strengthening the
end effects.
Scene
Transition
Action hooks
the audience
so that they
are paying
attention and
are on the
edge of their
seats.
All these items must have a
link and clearly apply to the
conventions of a crime thriller
attracting the audience as this
counterpoint is drastic and
poses juxtaposition as there is
a voice over of a reporter it
may connote that justice is
trying be heard and fought
for.
The clashing
sounds may
represent
Strauss theory
of Binary
opposites
showing us
that there is a
fight between
justice and
injustice.

2. Zeel Sanatkumar
ELIZA stares down at the knife that is in her hand
confused.
The sound of the pills shaking starts again and she drops
the knife causing a clanging sound to fill the space. She
picks up the knife places it back where it was and leaves
the house.
The shaking pills stops.
ELIZA runs her hands through her hair and leaves.
EXT. DAY. STREET.
ELIZA makes her way to work passing the graveyard on the way
there, her eyes drift to the gravestones lingering on one
longer than the others,she shakes her head and continues
walking. Enters the police station.
ELIZA walks past the police station with MASON a dark haired
tall police detective her colleague,having an inaudible
conversation as the pill shaking grows louder.ELIZA looks
behind her feeling eyes on her.
IVY watches from the distance resting on a tree. She pours
some pills onto the floor and walks away leaving them in the
grass.
ELIZA leaves MASON with a brisk goodbye and walks away
clasping her hands together.
On her street again she looks around before entering her
house again.
Repetition/
Reoccurring
themes may
create an
enigma within
the audience
This lacks clarity
of information
as the audience
may not be able
to follow what
is going on
without
watching
further
Pathetic fallacy can
be used to increase
verisimilitude.
Increasing the
familiarity of
the pills in the
past may
create a
pattern and
increase
understanding
for the
audience. Change in the pattern may be unusual.
Abstract actions for abstract
views
The purpose of pathetic
fallacy could be identified
once she enters the house.
At this point the audience
should be left at a cliff-
hanger.
May
foreshadow
death and as
she is shaking
her head she
may be in
denial.
Contrasting life
and death as
well as justice
and injustice.