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- 9. Scene 1 Duration 07:02 Panel 2 Duration 02:04 Dialog It is an extremely common mistake - Action Notes Author starts to speak.
- 10. Scene 1 Duration 07:02 Panel 3 Duration 00:10 Dialog People think the writer’s imagination is always at work -
- 11. Scene 1 Duration 07:02 Panel 4 Duration 00:10 Dialog People think the writer’s imagination is always at work -
- 12. Scene 1 Duration 07:02 Panel 5 Duration 00:10 Dialog People think the writer’s imagination is always at work -
- 13. Scene 1 Duration 07:02 Panel 6 Duration 01:15 Action Notes The author looks blankly at his empty document.
- 14. Scene 1 Duration 05:06 Panel 1 Duration 01:14 Dialog That he is constantly inventing - Action Notes Child peeks out from behind a wall.
- 15. Scene 1 Duration 05:06 Panel 2 Duration 01:12 Dialog - an endless supply - Action Notes The author and woman are yelling frantically in an argument.
- 17. Scene 1 Duration 05:06 Panel 4 Duration 01:16 Dialog - episodes! Action Notes The woman holds up a paper of their bills.
- 19. Scene 1 Duration 03:07 Panel 1 Duration 02:07 Dialog That he simply dreams-up his stories,
- 20. Action Notes The woman is leaving the author, their child in tow.
- 21. Scene 1 Duration 03:07 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog - out of thin air! Action Notes The door closes, and the author clutches his head.
- 22. Scene 1 Duration 03:03 Panel 1 Duration 00:14 Action Notes The author's tears start to fall towards the camera.
- 24. Scene 1 Duration 03:03 Panel 3 Duration 01:06 Dialog The opposite is true. Action Notes The author is filled with sudden rage.
- 26. Scene 1 Duration 06:06 Panel 1 Duration 01:10 Action Notes The man walks down the sidewalk.
- 27. Scene 1 Duration 06:06 Panel 2 Duration 00:12 Action Notes He looks to the side.
- 28. Scene 1 Duration 06:06 Panel 3 Duration 01:07 Dialog Once the public knows you are a writer... Action Notes He notices his ex-wife in a building across the street.
- 29. Scene 1 Duration 06:06 Panel 4 Duration 01:00 Dialog They bring the characters -
- 31. Scene 1 Duration 06:06 Panel 6 Duration 00:08 Action Notes The author crosses the street.
- 33. Scene 1 Duration 06:06 Panel 8 Duration 00:08 Action Notes He hides in an alleyway.
- 34. Scene 1 Duration 06:06 Panel 9 Duration 00:16 Action Notes He stays hidden, waiting for the woman.
- 37. Scene 1 Duration 15:21 Panel 2 Duration 01:02 Action Notes The woman leaves the cafe.
- 38. Scene 1 Duration 15:21 Panel 3 Duration 00:21 Dialog And as long as you maintain your ability to look - Action Notes She looks up at the moon, revealing it nighttime.
- 39. Scene 1 Duration 15:21 Panel 4 Duration 00:16 Action Notes She walks down the sidewalk.
- 40. Scene 1 Duration 15:21 Panel 5 Duration 00:23 Dialog and carefully listen - Action Notes The author continues to watch and listen for her.
- 42. Scene 1 Duration 15:21 Panel 7 Duration 00:11 Action Notes The author reaches his hand out of the alley.
- 43. Scene 1 Duration 15:21 Panel 8 Duration 00:11 Action Notes He yanks the woman into the alley.
- 44. Scene 1 Duration 15:21 Panel 9 Duration 01:00 Dialog These...stories - Action Notes The author pulls the woman forcefully towards him.
- 45. Scene 1 Duration 15:21 Panel 10 Duration 00:19 Dialog - will continue - Action Notes He reveals a knife and prepares to stab her.
- 46. Scene 1 Duration 15:21 Panel 11 Duration 00:06 Dialog to - [stops mid sentence]
- 49. Scene 1 Duration 15:21 Panel 14 Duration 00:12 Dialog STOP IT!! Action Notes and uses his hand to muffle her screams.
- 53. Scene 1 Duration 15:21 Panel 18 Duration 02:10 Dialog Will continue to seek you out - Action Notes The author writes in a small notebook.
- 56. Scene 1 Duration 07:14 Panel 2 Duration 00:13 Action Notes The author returns home, walking towards his desk.
- 58. Scene 1 Duration 07:14 Panel 4 Duration 00:11 Dialog ...who has often told the tales of others... Action Notes He starts to type.
- 60. Scene 1 Duration 07:14 Panel 6 Duration 00:11 Action Notes Time passes, and the tree's leaves fall until it's bare.
- 65. Scene 1 Duration 07:14 Panel 11 Duration 00:12 Action Notes The author smiles menacingly.
- 67. Scene 1 Duration 11:12 Panel 1 Duration 00:15 Action Notes The victim looks frightened of something.
- 68. Scene 1 Duration 11:12 Panel 2 Duration 00:10 Dialog The incidents.... Action Notes He turns around and resumes running frantically.
- 69. Scene 1 Duration 11:12 Panel 3 Duration 00:10 Dialog ...that follow... Action Notes The victim runs past the camera as the man/killer is revealed.
- 72. Scene 1 Duration 11:12 Panel 6 Duration 00:07 Dialog - EXACTLY as I present them here. Action Notes The author writes in his notebook.
- 74. Scene 1 Duration 11:12 Panel 8 Duration 00:22 Action Notes The author moves closer.
- 76. Scene 1 Duration 11:12 Panel 10 Duration 01:05 Action Notes He chases after the victim.
- 77. Scene 1 Duration 11:12 Panel 11 Duration 02:09 Dialog And in a wholly... Action Notes The victim looks behind himself, checking if he is still being pursued.
- 78. Scene 1 Duration 11:12 Panel 12 Duration 01:00 Action Notes The author appears in front of him.