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Jessica Wood <jwood@lakelandcc.edu> Oct 1 (1 day
ago)
to me, Aurora, Christine
Hi Thomas,
A few quick suggestions on the resume:
1. Develop an objective which is a target/goal for the resume.
2. Create a summary section-see attached Resume Writing Guide.
3. List degree at Lakeland and flip order of entries in education. You could remove high school.
4. Use past-tense action verbs under past positions.
Given the short notice for the critique, these are the suggestions we can provide. Please view the
attached guide for more specifics.
Also, let us know if you have any questions.
Jessica Wood, M.Ed., LPC
Employment Services Coordinator
Career Services Center
(p)440.525.7454
jwood@lakelandcc.edu
careers.lakelandcc.edu
Thomas E. Stuber Jr
6378 Chapel Road, Madison, OH 44057
Cell Phone: 440-622-0954
Home Phone: 440-428-0959
Email: OfficialStuber@gmail.com
OBJECTIVE
Supervisory position
SUMMARY OF QUALIFICATIONS
 Three years of customer service experience in a retail field.
 Good verbal and technological skills.
 Pursuing a bachelor’s degree in business administration.
 Dependable, adaptable and willing to learn.
 Takes initiative in order to complete tasks in a timely manner.
EDUCATION HISTORY
Current Student
Business Administration.
Lakeland Community College, Kirtland, OH
GPA: 3.11
EMPLOYMENT HISTORY
Wal-Mart Supercenter #3608, Madison, OH
Tire & Lube Express Service Technician (February 2014-Present)
 Greet customers and recommend services based on their needs.
 Make sales and interact with various distributors.
 Provide quick and correct service to customer vehicles.
Courtesy Associate (February 2012-February 2014)
 Collected shopping carts and assisted customers in loading their vehicles.
 Assisted customers in finding the items that they needed.
 Promoted within company due to hard work ethic and consistent attendance.
Critiqued Resume

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Critiqued Resume

  • 1. Jessica Wood <jwood@lakelandcc.edu> Oct 1 (1 day ago) to me, Aurora, Christine Hi Thomas, A few quick suggestions on the resume: 1. Develop an objective which is a target/goal for the resume. 2. Create a summary section-see attached Resume Writing Guide. 3. List degree at Lakeland and flip order of entries in education. You could remove high school. 4. Use past-tense action verbs under past positions. Given the short notice for the critique, these are the suggestions we can provide. Please view the attached guide for more specifics. Also, let us know if you have any questions. Jessica Wood, M.Ed., LPC Employment Services Coordinator Career Services Center (p)440.525.7454 jwood@lakelandcc.edu careers.lakelandcc.edu
  • 2. Thomas E. Stuber Jr 6378 Chapel Road, Madison, OH 44057 Cell Phone: 440-622-0954 Home Phone: 440-428-0959 Email: OfficialStuber@gmail.com OBJECTIVE Supervisory position SUMMARY OF QUALIFICATIONS  Three years of customer service experience in a retail field.  Good verbal and technological skills.  Pursuing a bachelor’s degree in business administration.  Dependable, adaptable and willing to learn.  Takes initiative in order to complete tasks in a timely manner. EDUCATION HISTORY Current Student Business Administration. Lakeland Community College, Kirtland, OH GPA: 3.11 EMPLOYMENT HISTORY Wal-Mart Supercenter #3608, Madison, OH Tire & Lube Express Service Technician (February 2014-Present)  Greet customers and recommend services based on their needs.  Make sales and interact with various distributors.  Provide quick and correct service to customer vehicles. Courtesy Associate (February 2012-February 2014)  Collected shopping carts and assisted customers in loading their vehicles.  Assisted customers in finding the items that they needed.  Promoted within company due to hard work ethic and consistent attendance.