5. PROGNOSIS MANUSKRIP
• Beberapa alasan mengapa manuskrip kita
ditolak:
1.
2.
3.
4.
5.
6.
7.
Tidak sesuai dengan visi jurnal.
Latar belakang penelitian tidak jelas.
Masalah penelitian tidak urgent.
Pertanyaan penelitian ambigu.
Metode tidak bisa diterima.
Data tidak jelas.
Suspect plagiat.
7. email editor
•
•
•
•
•
•
From: editorinchief@internationalwoundjournal.com
To: saldy_yusuf@yahoo.co.id, junkosgm@mhs.mp.kanazawa-u.ac.jp
Subject:
International Wound Journal - Decision on Manuscript ID IWJ-12-092 [email ref: DL-SW-3-a]
Body:
@@date to be populated upon sending@@
Dear Mr. yusuf:
Manuscript ID IWJ-12-092 entitled "MICROCLIMATE AND DEVELOPMENT OF PRESSURE
ULCERS AND SUPERFICIAL SKIN CHANGES" which you submitted to International Wound
Journal, has been reviewed. The comments of the reviewer(s) are included at the bottom of
this letter.
Once again, thank you for submitting your manuscript to International Wound Journal and I
look forward to receiving your revision.
Sincerely,
Prof. Keith Harding
Editor in Chief, International Wound Journal
editorinchief@internationalwoundjournal.com
Editor-in-Chief Comments to Author:
8. email reviewer 1
This is a very interesting article which holds potential for publication but
needs revision. Please consider the following:
There is a missed opportunity here to clearly explain and develop the background
information about why this research is important.
“A number of contributing or confounding factors are also associated with pressure
ulcers, the significance of these factors has yet to be elucidated.” The author(s) should
build on this, that even two important pressure ulcer organizations agree that the
contributing or confounding factors are still unknown.
This is why this research is important- we are still looking at WHY pressure ulcers
occur and their research is trying to provide evidence to support that microclimate (skin
temperature and moisture) are important contributing or confounding factors.
9. email reviewer 2
Microclimate is developing as a factor in pressure ulcer incidence and this
manuscript represents one of the very few clinical studies that have
reported temperature changes as predictors of skin changes.
However the manuscript would be strengthened by adding more details of
the investigation of the sheet used to control microclimate - this only
appears in the discussion section and the experimental design and results
should be placed in the appropriate sections of the paper.
10. email reviewer 3
Do you have a photo of the ulcers on teh lower sacrum?
Are you describing the buttocks?
The sacrum is a bony prominence and your conclusion about the superficial
ulcers not on bony prominences does not follow.
Examine the influence of the synthetic sheet on moisture, temp, Braden
subscales. This is an important component and needs more attention in the
paper.
Also describe the underpad, was it plastic? rubber? and correlate it to the
outcomes.
12. Discussion: Reviewer 1
• Comments to the Author
This interesting manuscript reports microclimate changes and
superficial skin damage. The manuscript could be
strengthened through providing greater detail of the support
surface and special sheet used in the study.
Answer:
• Thank you very much for your suggestions,These beds
dimensionsare 190 x 90 x 13 cm (length, wide, and thick)
construct from foam matress and covered by plastic. The
hospital bed was covered by 100 % cotton sheet. In this study
we also introduced synthetic fiber sheet randomly, theses
sheet made by cotton 42 % and polyester 58 %.
13. Discussion: Reviewer 2
• Comments to the Author
Discuss how turning the patient was avoided during the data
collection, turning would alter microclimate and your data
was collected over 4 hours.
Answer:
• Thank you very much for your review. In this study we didnt
avoid turning position for patient during the data collection,
patient allowed to turning naturally or pasively by family or
nursing. But if patient had been turned lateral we delay the
measurement for two hours after supine position. Average
collecting data for each patients about 30 minutes not 4
hours. 08.00 am until 12.00 am was our measurement
interval time to avoid circadian rhytm.
14. Executive License Form
From: rvaswani@rogers.com
To: saldy_yusuf@yahoo.co.id, junkosgm@mhs.mp.kanazawa-u.ac.jp
CC:
Subject:
International Wound Journal - message regarding IWJ-12-196.R1
[email ref: HE-1-a]
Body: Dear Mr. yusuf:
Thank you for your submission. We have received your manuscript and
title page. However, we still require the Exclusive License Form to be
completed. Also required are key points. Kindly send these to us at
your earliest.
Sincerely,
Ms. Rajan Vaswani
International Wound Journal
15.
16. From Editor to Publisher
Setelah vonis Acceptance diketuk oleh
editor, hubungan selanjutnya beralih
ke Publisher
22. Research Assistant
1. Tay A., Ong Ce., Saldy Yusuf (2012) Management of
a complex mandibular wound: A case study. Wound
researh and practice 19(3).
2. Mayumi Okuwa., Saldy Yusuf., Supriadi., et al.
Reliability and validity of a new multi-pad pressure
evaluator in the clinical setting. Japan Journal of
Pressure Ulcers. 2012 (12)2:129-133
3. Yoshie Shigeta, Junko Sugama, Gojiro Nakagami,
Saldy Yusuf, Supriadi ., Takeo Minematsu, Yuko
Yamamoto, Hiromi Sanada (2011). La Relation Entre
La Morphologie De La Peau Macérée Et Les États
D’hydratation De La Stratum Corneum Et Du Derme
Du Fessier Dans Le Cas De Personnes Agées
Souffrant D’incontinence. EWMA 2011
Congress.,Brussels-Belgium.
23. Tangkap Peluang “Call for author”
• Saldy Yusuf (2011) I am proud to be ET Nurse.
WCET Journal 31(3):16-18.
24. DEVELOPMENT PRIVATE WOUND CLINIC
CHANCE AND CHALLENGES,
an experience of Indonesian ET Nurse
Saldy Yusuf1,2 Sukmawati2, Mayumi Okuwa1,
Junko Sugama1
1,2Clinical
Nursing Department, Kanazawa University-Japan
2Griya Afiat, Wound Care and Home Care Clinic, Makassar-Indonesia
27. International Congress
• Saldy Yusuf., Sukmawati., Yusuf HM., et al
(2012), effectiveness of cutisorb ultra as super
absorbent dressing in pressure ulcer category
IV. World Union of Wound Healing Society
Congress. Yokohama-Japan.
• Saldy Yusuf., Mayumi Okuwa., Terumi Iuchi.,
et al (2012). Microclimate and development of
pressure ulcers and superficial skin changes.
World Union of Wound Healing Society
Congress. Yokohama-Japan.