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Copywriting Secrets of the Masters:




                   Don Mahoney




This special report is brought to you free courtesy of
          www.ProCopyWritingTactics.com



          www.ProCopyWritingTactics.com
"For more great free information on how to take your copywriting career to
          the next level please visit www.ProCopyWritingTactics.com
  and don't forget to collect your free Pro Copywriting Tactics Reports
                              while you're there."



                              Empty Pages

OK – anyone remember Traffic (the rock and roll group)?
And if, by chance, you do, do you remember ―Empty Pages‖?
Either way, it was a hit rock song in the early ‗70s.


You can read a lot of theories about what the song means, but I think one
thing comes through loud and clear.
Writer‘s block. Staring at a blank piece of paper, trying to figure out the first
words you‘re going to put on it.
This song has, ever since I first heard it in the early 1970s (OK, so I‘m
getting old… ) held a particular fascination for me.


I had made some attempts at writing, so I certainly knew about writer‘s
block. But I also found meaning in the lyrics related to life – that life too was
an empty page, waiting to be filled…


But let‘s not go there… we could be lost for days. Back to writer‘s block!


In those days, the empty page was not on a computer screen. Believe it or
not, it was usually a notebook or pad and pen or pencil sitting in front of
you. (How odd and antiquated!)


So now we get to the heart of it… you either want to (because you have a
creative side) or need to (because someone has paid you money to write –
and you‘d better start producing!) start getting some words down on that
piece of paper.
You have to conquer that empty page.


                       www.ProCopyWritingTactics.com
So everyone who has ever written has faced the same dilemma at some
time – an empty page starting at you… daring you to put the first word on it.
Now, for someone who has been doing it for years, there are all kinds of
tricks you can use on that piece of paper.


To help those who are new, I‘ve set down a list of ―tricks‖ you can use. It‘s
hard to order them, because you can use one or several, or mix them up. So
it‘s more of a ―bag of tricks‖ for you to reach into, to conquer that damn
page (and it will keep right on staring at you until you get something done,
so the sooner you move, the better… )…


So, to start…
         You can start by writing your name, the date, and the project name
          at the top. Now at least you‘ve started – your page isn‘t blank any
          more… you‘ve taken some of the power out of it already…

         You can write an outline for your project. Include things like the
          back cover, or order form. The more you get, the further down the
          road you are.

         As a copywriter, you should have gotten a starter kit from your
          client. You can take some of the main points and just rough them
          out on paper.

         You can start copying some of the testimonials from your starter
          kit.
         If it‘s an email, start some subject lines that could catch attention.
          Remember, they need to be catchy but if they‘re not related to the
          subject, you‘re going to lose your prospect with the next click.

         Many people like to start with the offer. So you can write out the
          complete offer, just as if you were writing it for your promotion.
          Start with the close, and write all the way through the order
          device. Now you‘re actually making concrete progress on your
          assignment. That also helps because now you know exactly where
          you have to lead your prospect… you‘ve defined the ―finish line‖ for
          the project.


   Pull out some strong points you may want to use as sidebars, and start
   writing them up.
                       www.ProCopyWritingTactics.com
   Take whole ideas – major copy points – and start writing them out.
          They don‘t have to be in order, just start somewhere. That usually
          leads to something else… and so it goes…

         This is my favorite part – work on the headline or how you‘re going
          to open the promo. What‘s the special hook that‘s going to grab
          your prospect and drag them into the promo? Get this part, and
          you‘ve got a WHOLE LOT of your work done.

         Work on a whole list of headlines. A lot that won‘t wind up at the
          top will be strong subheads you can use.

         Make ―thumbnail‖ sketches of how you see the package. Some of
          the most successful writers work this way – figuring out their main
          points of their promo, how it‘s going to fit together, and then
          starting to fill in the individual parts. This is especially helpful if you
          work with a particular designer, because you can stay on track all
          the way through the promo.


So there‘s a little ―cheat sheet‖ to beat the ―empty pages‖ – that beast that
most of us will face at some time or other.


Maybe next time we‘ll tackle things like the power of the word, meaning,
flow, revisions, building credibility, or the famous ―Golden Thread,‖ (which
you WILL NOT find in ANY college writing course… ).


And, if you‘re coming to Bootcamp this year, I hope you‘ll be front and
center for my presentation with Will Newman. We‘ll be giving a Master Class
on headlines called Hidden Gateways into Your Promotion: How ―Mini-
Headlines‖ Lead Prospects into Your Package. Specifically, we‘re going to
show you:
    Why you need to intercept your prospect's ―end around‖ before you
     lose him.
    How to identify the best places to connect to your prospect‘s hidden
     desires, fears, and passion
    And, why less can be more when leading your prospect through one of
     the gateways.




                        www.ProCopyWritingTactics.com
Network with master copywriters like Don Mahoney, Bob Bly and Paul
Hollingshead at the AWAI Fast Track to Success Bootcamp & Jobfair which is
taking place on October 26-29, 2011 Delray Beach, Florida




     This article was originally published as part of The Golden Thread



Don Mahoney:
Cabinet Maker Turned Six-Figure Copywriter
“Businesses don’t stop advertising just because the economy takes a turn for
the worse. If they did, they wouldn’t be in business very long. When money
is tight, business owners spend their advertising dollars where they can get
the most bang for their buck.

And direct-marketing advertising has been proven to be the most cost-
effective way to advertise.

Another great thing is that the companies that’ll pay you big bucks to write
sales letters don’t care if you’re 25 or 75 … thin, fat, male or female. They
only care how your work performs.

If you have the desire, you can always reinvent yourself. I did … and you
can too!”

— Don Mahoney




                       www.ProCopyWritingTactics.com
DON MAHONEY is a co-founder of AWAI. As a one-time cabinet maker in
upstate New York, Don barely eked out a living, getting sicker and sicker
from the lacquer fumes and other chemicals he‘d breathe in every day. In
1993, a year after learning Michael Masterson‘s copywriting secrets, Don
moved to Florida and started writing his own copy.

Since then Don has risen to be one of the top copywriters working today,
earning over $300,000 writing letters from his Miami Beach home. He has
also personally mentored dozens of now-successful copywriters and helped
them achieve their dreams of freedom and financial independence.

Don‘s letters are consistently successful because he has mastered the art of
―overwhelming evidence‖ – a technique of providing indisputable proof that
your service or product can deliver its promise. AWAI‘s program reveals all
of Don‘s secrets for building the kind of product credibility that‘s proven to
turn fence-sitters into buyers.

Learn firsthand from Don at the AWAI Fast Track to Success Bootcamp &
Jobfair which is taking place on October 26-29, 2011 Delray Beach, Florida




"For more great free information on how to take your copywriting career to
the next level please visit www.ProCopyWritingTactics.com
  and don't forget to collect your free Pro Copywriting Tactics Reports
                              while you're there."




                       www.ProCopyWritingTactics.com

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Copywriting secrets of the masters don mahoney - empty pages

  • 1. Copywriting Secrets of the Masters: Don Mahoney This special report is brought to you free courtesy of www.ProCopyWritingTactics.com www.ProCopyWritingTactics.com
  • 2. "For more great free information on how to take your copywriting career to the next level please visit www.ProCopyWritingTactics.com and don't forget to collect your free Pro Copywriting Tactics Reports while you're there." Empty Pages OK – anyone remember Traffic (the rock and roll group)? And if, by chance, you do, do you remember ―Empty Pages‖? Either way, it was a hit rock song in the early ‗70s. You can read a lot of theories about what the song means, but I think one thing comes through loud and clear. Writer‘s block. Staring at a blank piece of paper, trying to figure out the first words you‘re going to put on it. This song has, ever since I first heard it in the early 1970s (OK, so I‘m getting old… ) held a particular fascination for me. I had made some attempts at writing, so I certainly knew about writer‘s block. But I also found meaning in the lyrics related to life – that life too was an empty page, waiting to be filled… But let‘s not go there… we could be lost for days. Back to writer‘s block! In those days, the empty page was not on a computer screen. Believe it or not, it was usually a notebook or pad and pen or pencil sitting in front of you. (How odd and antiquated!) So now we get to the heart of it… you either want to (because you have a creative side) or need to (because someone has paid you money to write – and you‘d better start producing!) start getting some words down on that piece of paper. You have to conquer that empty page. www.ProCopyWritingTactics.com
  • 3. So everyone who has ever written has faced the same dilemma at some time – an empty page starting at you… daring you to put the first word on it. Now, for someone who has been doing it for years, there are all kinds of tricks you can use on that piece of paper. To help those who are new, I‘ve set down a list of ―tricks‖ you can use. It‘s hard to order them, because you can use one or several, or mix them up. So it‘s more of a ―bag of tricks‖ for you to reach into, to conquer that damn page (and it will keep right on staring at you until you get something done, so the sooner you move, the better… )… So, to start…  You can start by writing your name, the date, and the project name at the top. Now at least you‘ve started – your page isn‘t blank any more… you‘ve taken some of the power out of it already…  You can write an outline for your project. Include things like the back cover, or order form. The more you get, the further down the road you are.  As a copywriter, you should have gotten a starter kit from your client. You can take some of the main points and just rough them out on paper.  You can start copying some of the testimonials from your starter kit.  If it‘s an email, start some subject lines that could catch attention. Remember, they need to be catchy but if they‘re not related to the subject, you‘re going to lose your prospect with the next click.  Many people like to start with the offer. So you can write out the complete offer, just as if you were writing it for your promotion. Start with the close, and write all the way through the order device. Now you‘re actually making concrete progress on your assignment. That also helps because now you know exactly where you have to lead your prospect… you‘ve defined the ―finish line‖ for the project. Pull out some strong points you may want to use as sidebars, and start writing them up. www.ProCopyWritingTactics.com
  • 4. Take whole ideas – major copy points – and start writing them out. They don‘t have to be in order, just start somewhere. That usually leads to something else… and so it goes…  This is my favorite part – work on the headline or how you‘re going to open the promo. What‘s the special hook that‘s going to grab your prospect and drag them into the promo? Get this part, and you‘ve got a WHOLE LOT of your work done.  Work on a whole list of headlines. A lot that won‘t wind up at the top will be strong subheads you can use.  Make ―thumbnail‖ sketches of how you see the package. Some of the most successful writers work this way – figuring out their main points of their promo, how it‘s going to fit together, and then starting to fill in the individual parts. This is especially helpful if you work with a particular designer, because you can stay on track all the way through the promo. So there‘s a little ―cheat sheet‖ to beat the ―empty pages‖ – that beast that most of us will face at some time or other. Maybe next time we‘ll tackle things like the power of the word, meaning, flow, revisions, building credibility, or the famous ―Golden Thread,‖ (which you WILL NOT find in ANY college writing course… ). And, if you‘re coming to Bootcamp this year, I hope you‘ll be front and center for my presentation with Will Newman. We‘ll be giving a Master Class on headlines called Hidden Gateways into Your Promotion: How ―Mini- Headlines‖ Lead Prospects into Your Package. Specifically, we‘re going to show you:  Why you need to intercept your prospect's ―end around‖ before you lose him.  How to identify the best places to connect to your prospect‘s hidden desires, fears, and passion  And, why less can be more when leading your prospect through one of the gateways. www.ProCopyWritingTactics.com
  • 5. Network with master copywriters like Don Mahoney, Bob Bly and Paul Hollingshead at the AWAI Fast Track to Success Bootcamp & Jobfair which is taking place on October 26-29, 2011 Delray Beach, Florida This article was originally published as part of The Golden Thread Don Mahoney: Cabinet Maker Turned Six-Figure Copywriter “Businesses don’t stop advertising just because the economy takes a turn for the worse. If they did, they wouldn’t be in business very long. When money is tight, business owners spend their advertising dollars where they can get the most bang for their buck. And direct-marketing advertising has been proven to be the most cost- effective way to advertise. Another great thing is that the companies that’ll pay you big bucks to write sales letters don’t care if you’re 25 or 75 … thin, fat, male or female. They only care how your work performs. If you have the desire, you can always reinvent yourself. I did … and you can too!” — Don Mahoney www.ProCopyWritingTactics.com
  • 6. DON MAHONEY is a co-founder of AWAI. As a one-time cabinet maker in upstate New York, Don barely eked out a living, getting sicker and sicker from the lacquer fumes and other chemicals he‘d breathe in every day. In 1993, a year after learning Michael Masterson‘s copywriting secrets, Don moved to Florida and started writing his own copy. Since then Don has risen to be one of the top copywriters working today, earning over $300,000 writing letters from his Miami Beach home. He has also personally mentored dozens of now-successful copywriters and helped them achieve their dreams of freedom and financial independence. Don‘s letters are consistently successful because he has mastered the art of ―overwhelming evidence‖ – a technique of providing indisputable proof that your service or product can deliver its promise. AWAI‘s program reveals all of Don‘s secrets for building the kind of product credibility that‘s proven to turn fence-sitters into buyers. Learn firsthand from Don at the AWAI Fast Track to Success Bootcamp & Jobfair which is taking place on October 26-29, 2011 Delray Beach, Florida "For more great free information on how to take your copywriting career to the next level please visit www.ProCopyWritingTactics.com and don't forget to collect your free Pro Copywriting Tactics Reports while you're there." www.ProCopyWritingTactics.com