2. “Star image needs to be represented more clearly as quirky and
down to earth. Use aspects of mise-en-scene to further develop
this”
Using this feedback we developed our portrayal of the star image
and constructed this through the costume, makeup and hair of the
star image in the music video.

3. “Emphasise narrative more clearly. Have more subjective point of
view shots from the artists perspective. For example Eye line
matches”
I added in more eye-line matches prior to this feedback. This
presented a challenge to the conventional use of voyeurism as
rather than having the star image is the subject of the voyeurism
we instead have the couple in the video as the subject. This goes
with the „Indie‟ genre which generally opposes the mainstream. c

4. We used this feedback and went back to our filming location and filmed
more close up shots of the star and some tracking shots.

5. One of the people from our focus group, Raimonda in her
response stated that the narrative could have been made clearer.
For this reason we made some narrative more clear through our
footage. Such as when the artist says the lines “I saw you the
other day” we used an eye-line match of the artist looking at the
couple through her binoculars to emphasise the lyrics and that
she likes the guy in the video.

6. In our focus group all 3 people we asked said that our star image is very
quirky, easy to relate to, down to earth and natural in the music video.
This was the response I was looking for therefore in my ancillary texts I
chose to emulate the representation of my star image in a similar way in
order to further develop my star image.

7. Other than the feedback mentioned above the rest of our focus group
feedback is all positive and everyone watching said that they thought
the video was very interesting, funny and enjoyable and in terms of
narrative found that it was easy to follow. They also said that they
found it conformed to conventions of the genre and correctly identified
the genre of the song.