Draft 4 part 2

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Draft 4 part 2

  1. 1. WWW on draft #3Close up of the phone. Focus of this shot.Bath scene. Close up of her giving her number, in the flashback.
  2. 2. Ebi on draft #3 Better title More close-ups to show her thinking.Better props Have a more variety of shots.
  3. 3. Things to do for draft 4• Have a variety of shots• More close up shots and extreme close ups.• Improve on props.• Change effect for the flashbacks.• Make the titles and credits better, have them in a better location.• Have music throughout the whole opening sequence.• Improve on files papers.

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