Fragments 1: Practice 1 Underline the dependent-word fragment in each of the following items. Then correct it in the space provided. 1. Because the movie was so violent. Some people left the theater. __________________________________________________________________ 2. Everything was peaceful. Before Martha stormed into the room. ___________________________________________________________________ 3. Even though I’ve never seen a ghost. I still believe ghosts exist. ___________________________________________________________________ 4. The batter argued with the umpire. While the crowd booed. __________________________________________________________________ 5. When two guests began to argue. The hostess moved the party outside. __________________________________________________________________ 6. There’s always a big party in the park. After the last day of school. __________________________________________________________________ 7. We jumped up from the soft. When we heard the crash in the kitchen. __________________________________________________________________ 8. Although the car was totaled. The passengers were unharmed. __________________________________________________________________ 9. Emily takes a quick walk at lunchtime. Because it keeps her from getting sleepy at work. __________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ 10. Our neighbor is a quiet man. Who works as a nurse on the night shift. __________________________________________________________________ Last Name 1 Last Name 6 Mohammed Saadi Abdulhamza Alshammari Address: 523 Norwood Circle E, Arlington, TX, 76013 Email:[email protected] Phone#4695409658 Authorized to work in the US for any employer Work Experience Security Dispatcher: MEDICAL CITY DALLAS - Dallas, TX November 2017 to May 20, 2020 Security dispatch and security officer Security Dispatcher: Texas Health Resources Harris Methodist Hospital Downtown Fort Worth, TX July 21, 2020 to Present DOB: 12/07/1990 Gender: Male Marital Status: Married Education Dallas College –Associate of science Skills Skills Excellent customer service skills. Good verbal and written communication skills, evidenced by demeanor and previous training. Basic computer skills with MS Office and knowledge of a CAD system software. Must be able to give accurate geographical directions and maintain a positive attitude when giving details. Must be able to communicate calmly and speak clearly. Must be able to handle stress and have working knowledge of the keyboard. Knowledge of CAD system software is a must as well as basic computer skills. Must be flexible with schedule, be available to take on-call and work any shift: days, nights, or weekends is also a must. Responsibilities · Receive incoming telepho ...

1. Fragments 1: Practice 1
Underline the dependent-word fragment in each of the following
items. Then correct it in the space provided.
1. Because the movie was so violent. Some people left the
theater.
_____________________________________________________
_____________
2. Everything was peaceful. Before Martha stormed into the
room.
_____________________________________________________
______________
3. Even though I’ve never seen a ghost. I still believe ghosts
exist.
_____________________________________________________
______________
4. The batter argued with the umpire. While the crowd booed.
_____________________________________________________
_____________
5. When two guests began to argue. The hostess moved the
party outside.
_____________________________________________________
_____________
6. There’s always a big party in the park. After the last day of

2. school.
_____________________________________________________
_____________
7. We jumped up from the soft. When we heard the crash in
the kitchen.
_____________________________________________________
_____________
8. Although the car was totaled. The passengers were
unharmed.
_____________________________________________________
_____________
9. Emily takes a quick walk at lunchtime. Because it keeps her
from getting sleepy at
work.
_____________________________________________________
_____________
_____________________________________________________
_____________
10. Our neighbor is a quiet man. Who works as a nurse on the
night shift.
_____________________________________________________
_____________

3. Last Name 1
Last Name 6
Mohammed Saadi Abdulhamza Alshammari
Address: 523 Norwood Circle E, Arlington, TX, 76013
Email:[email protected]
Phone#4695409658
Authorized to work in the US for any employer
Work Experience
Security Dispatcher: MEDICAL CITY DALLAS - Dallas, TX
November 2017 to May 20, 2020
Security dispatch and security officer
Security Dispatcher: Texas Health Resources Harris Methodist
Hospital Downtown Fort Worth, TX
July 21, 2020 to Present
DOB: 12/07/1990
Gender: Male
Marital Status: Married
Education
Dallas College –Associate of science

4. Skills
Skills
Excellent customer service skills. Good verbal and written
communication skills, evidenced by demeanor and previous
training. Basic computer skills with MS Office and knowledge
of a CAD system software. Must be able to give accurate
geographical directions and maintain a positive attitude when
giving details. Must be able to communicate calmly and speak
clearly. Must be able to handle stress and have working
knowledge of the keyboard. Knowledge of CAD system
software is a must as well as basic computer skills. Must be
flexible with schedule, be available to take on-call and work
any shift: days, nights, or weekends is also a must.
Responsibilities
· Receive incoming telephone or alarm system calls regarding
emergency and non-emergency police and security services,
information, and after-hours calls for departments.
· Question callers to determine their locations, and the nature of
their problems to determine type of response needed.
· Determine response requirements and relative priorities of
situations, and dispatch units in accordance with established
procedures.
· Record details of calls, dispatches, and messages.
· Search files, databases or reference materials to obtain needed
information.
· Enter information into databases or software programs.
· Monitor alarm systems to detect emergencies such as fires and
illegal entry into establishments.
· Monitor and operate security video system to observe and
detect potential issues
· Maintain access to, and security of, highly sensitive materials.
· Relay information and messages to and from emergency sites,
and to all other individuals or groups requiring notification.
· Monitor equipment operation to ensure proper functioning.

5. · Adjust office equipment to ensure proper operation.
· Report maintenance or equipment problems to appropriate
personnel.
PBX Operator coordinates the hospital switchboard, handling
incoming, outgoing, and internal telephone calls. primary
person responsible for monitoring all alarm indicators and
disseminating information in the event of internal emergencies
such as, fires, and emergency alarms. Also responsible for
performing overhead pages, paging medical alerts, calling
outside 911 and coordinating with them. • Security dispatcher at
Medical City Dallas Hospital. Dispatch and scheduled workers
to certain locations depending on the requests of the client.
Record and maintain files on expenses, services, inventory,
charges, customer requests and other dispatch information.
Advise personnel regarding traffic problems, accidents and
other hazards. Prepare daily run and work schedules. Utilize
250+ cameras to oversee workers and crews within specified
locations. Prepare incident reports, obtain written or oral
statements, and assist local police agencies during
investigations or emergencies. Control and enforce vehicular
and pedestrian traffic patterns in the Medical Center as
assigned. Customer service of tenants and guests. Interventions
of guests and or tenants when violating lease policies of tenants
to include banning from property or violation reports
completed, when violations are severe. Document all activity in
daily log while making notifications to superiors regarding
escalated

6. Situations. Ensure all personnel understand how to properly
document all security activity. Send emails to leadership with
overall outcomes of security situations. Monitor three radio
frequencies for dispatch information while conducting security
dispatch duties. • Security officer writing reports, observes,
protect staff, patients, and visitors to ensure that all hospital
property is secure. Patrol the buildings and its grounds, monitor
all activity in and out of the hospital, and endeavor to prevent
vandalism, theft, fire, and disturbances within the facility.
Frequently report to the manager or other security personnel
about what I have observed on my rounds. Be on the lookout for
all sorts of issues at the hospital, including maintenance issues,
which may compromise people's safety or the integrity of the
building. • I have experience in training Iraqi army soldiers on
how to use ITT radios and installing, programing them. Giving
classes on using battlefield tactical operations (defense and
offence plans). • computing skills using all MS office programs
and open office software and experienced in using internet and
all familiar windows programs. • worked as instructor in
medical training courses and medical evacuation plans. • I
trained more than 25 Iraqi army battalions for both the 8th and
the 10th divisions how to use and utilize the m4- m16- rpk-
ak47-50 caliber machine gun and m113 armored personnel
carrier. I used to give safety brief to the soldiers at the ranges. •
worked as screener and biometric scanner and monitoring
badges validity at the US embassy in Baghdad and the general
consulate in Basra • worked as interpreter and cultural advisor
for the BPC team at ALASAD air base in the following training
courses: individual weapons training, crew-served weapons
training, counter-improvised explosive device training, live fire
training, explosive ordinance disposal, medic training,
interpreting key leaders meetings at the 7th division operations
conference room. • also worked as linguist with the US military
(marines - navy - army- MP- special forces- and coalition

7. forces) • I have level 4 degree in English according to the DOS
standards and provide a high performance in both Arabic and
English translation and interpreting during military courses
according to the traditional and cultural standers. • Days
available to work: all days • Eligibility to work in the country:
yes Training certifications: CPR, Sama, Nuclear transport,
Helistop and Helipad safety, security operations center dispatch,
Radios, Pbx operator, first aid -ak47-m4-m16-rpk-50cal mg-
m113 APC- safety - range safety, interpreters', screeners
training in the US embassy in Baghdad and another one in the
US general consulate in Basra.
Last Name 1
Last Name 2
I need the letter of intent to be at least 5 paragraphs and talk
about my son when he came to life as sick kid with urinary
track problem and how we spend 2.5 years in hospital back in
Iraq then 6 months in medical city Dallas. And explain how
nursing staff helped me and my son through the surgery and on
daily basis. Also talk about my compassion to become nurse to
help other people. Also how much I’m committed to get my
degree and become 1st generation in my family to get a degree
in USA.
Fragments 1 Practice 2
Underline the dependent-word fragment in each of the following
items. Then correct it in the space provided.

8. 1. Because we have smoke detectors. We survived the fire.
________________________________________________
________________
2. The kitchen looked like new. After we painted it.
________________________________________________
________________
3. My sister is always out of money. Although she has a good
job.
________________________________________________
________________
4. Before the game even started. I could tell team morale was
low.
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5. I wouldn’t date him again. If he begged me on his knees.
________________________________________________
________________
6. Our car is making a chugging noise. Which sounds
ominous.
________________________________________________
________________
7. Young elephants stay with their mothers. Until they are
about sixteen years old.
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________________
8. After this rain stops. The children can play outside.
________________________________________________
________________

9. 9. A crowd showed up to meet the author. Who had written a
best-selling novel at
the age of nineteen.
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________________
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10. Until the tornado warning ended. Everyone stayed in the
basement.
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Fragments II: Practice 2
Underline the fragment in each item that follows. Then correct
the fragment in the space provided.
1. Glancing at his watch frequently. The man seemed anxious
to leave.
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________________
2. There are many healthful deserts. Including sherbet and
fruit salad.
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3. Our teacher sometimes loses her temper. However, always
apologizes afterwards.
________________________________________________
________________
4. To keep his bike from being stolen. Gilbert bought a
padlock.
________________________________________________

10. ________________
5. The small town is a beautiful place to visit. Especially in
the spring.
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________________
6. Tarik lost the key to the front door. As a result, had to call
a locksmith.
________________________________________________
________________
7. Certain dogs are well suited to be guide dogs. Including
German shepherds and golden retrievers.
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________________
8. To get to school on time. I keep the clock in my room set
ten minutes ahead.
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9. Relaxing on the beach. Anna said, “I want to be a
lifeguard.”
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10. Many town in the United States have amusing names. Such
as Boring, Oregon; Peculiar, Missouri; and Okay, Oklahoma.
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________________
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Fragments 1 Practice 2
Underline the dependent-word fragment in each of the following

11. items. Then correct it in the space provided.
1. Because we have smoke detectors. We survived the fire.
________________________________________________
________________
2. The kitchen looked like new. After we painted it.
________________________________________________
________________
3. My sister is always out of money. Although she has a good
job.
________________________________________________
________________
4. Before the game even started. I could tell team morale was
low.
________________________________________________
________________
5. I wouldn’t date him again. If he begged me on his knees.
________________________________________________
________________
6. Our car is making a chugging noise. Which sounds
ominous.
________________________________________________
________________
7. Young elephants stay with their mothers. Until they are
about sixteen years old.
________________________________________________
________________
8. After this rain stops. The children can play outside.
________________________________________________

12. ________________
9. A crowd showed up to meet the author. Who had written a
best-selling novel at
the age of nineteen.
________________________________________________
________________
________________________________________________
________________
10. Until the tornado warning ended. Everyone stayed in the
basement.
________________________________________________
________________