2. After receiving feedback from the pitch and talking as a group, we have decided to
change the narrative in the music video as we think our previous idea was over
complicated and didn’t link in with the song lyrics. Our new idea is to simplify our
initial ideas so that we can focus on the finer details and quality of our product as
well as having shots which link specifically to the lyrics.
New Idea
3. Verse 1-
Larry call a load of smoke in I wanna lose a couple days
We've probably never struggled coping but I never want to
Promise again that I would call her
Forget the time because I'm 7 hours behind
It's probably good I didn't call though but I always want to.
chorus
I don't think through things, I never get time cause I don't think things through
Larry call a load of smoke in I wanna disappear for days
We've probably never struggled sleeping but I never want to
Promise again that I would call her
Forget the time because I'm 7 hours behind
It's probably good I didn't call though but I always want to
Chorus
I don't think through things, I never get time cause I don't think things through
I don't think through things, I never get time cause I don't think things through
An' I'd beg you but you know I'm never home
An' I love you but I need another second to myself
An' I've tried to ignore it every time you phone
But I never come close
Chorus
Performance
Narrative
4. Narrative ideas:
“Promise again that I would call her” - Starts to call “her” but hangs up
“Forget the time because I’m seven hours behind”- looking at a clock
“I wanna disappear for days”- packing a bag and shown walking out the house
“Forget the time because I’m seven hours behind”- walking down a street, looks at a watch
“Ignore it every time you call”- Phone call shows up on the phone and he ignores it
