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srprspoon river poetry review
39.2
winter 2014
spoon river poetry review
Editor: Kirstin Hotelling Zona
Guest Editor: Summer Qabazard
Managing Editor: Emily Johnston
Feature Poet and Interview Editor: Joanne Diaz
Review Essay Editor: Michael Theune
Contributing Editors: Ewa Chrusciel, Duriel Harris, Kass Fleisher,Arielle Greenberg,
Gabriel Gudding, and Andrew Schelling
Senior Editorial Assistant: Shailen Mishra
Manuscript Readers: Ryan Clark, Kass Fleisher, Jamison Lee, Bill Morgan, and
Summer Qabazard
Copyeditors: Danielle Duvick and Brooke Burns
Website Manager: Shailen Mishra
Blog Editor: Shailen Mishra
Production: The Illinois State University English Department’s Publications Unit
Codirectors of Publications Unit: Steve Halle and Jane L. Carman
Production Intern: Elora Karim
Cover Art: Melissa Jay Craig, "That's Life" (detail)
SRPR (Spoon River Poetry Review) is published twice a year by the Spoon River Poetry
Association. The editors read submissions of fine poetry from all over the nation and
world from September 15 to February 15 each year. Submit 3–5 poems online or via
postal mail to the address below. Submissions to the SRPR Illinois Poet feature should
contain 12-18 pages of mostly unpublished poems by poets who have an Illinois
connection. All submissions should be accompanied by a self-addressed stamped
envelope and addressed to: SRPR (Spoon River Poetry Review), 4241 Publications
Unit, Illinois State University, Normal, Illinois 61790-4241. Deadline for the annual
Editors’ Prize Contest is April 15. Visit our website for guidelines: www.srpr.org
Annual subscription price: $18.00 individuals; $20.00 institutions
Single copy price: $10.00
Copyright © 2014 by Kirstin Hotelling Zona
Distributed by: Ubiquity (718) 875-5491 and Ingram Periodicals, Inc. (800) 627-6247
Printed by: United Graphics Incorporated, Mattoon, IL
The Spoon River Poetry Review is indexed in the Index of American Periodical Verse,
the Annual Index to Poetry in Periodicals, Humanities International Complete,
and Poem Finder.
ISSN: 0738-8993
54
The SRPR Interview: Jacob Saenz
Joanne Diaz: Thank you for sharing your work in this issue of SRPR
and for taking the time to talk with me. If I may, I’d like to start our
conversation by asking about the narrative excitement in your work.
When I read your poems, I feel like I am launched into dramatic situa-
tions that feel urgent and necessary. How do you think about arriving
at that place of maximum interest, not in the fifth or sixth stanza, but
from the opening lines of a poem?
Jacob Saenz: Initially, in the first drafts, it’s often an image or a few
words phrased together that prompt me into the flow of the poem. For
example, in “Bait” which is featured here, I had had that idea for years,
and it was something that I recently revisited. For me, what tends to
drive and keep the flow of a poem going is image—in this case, the
image of a young boy going into the bar to find his father—but also
I’m driven a lot by rhyme and sonic devices. I let those guide me and
take me further into the poem and explore the sonic aspects but I also
pay attention to how it looks on the page. In “Bait,” I was very much
driven by assonance and consonance (“a pool shark chalking / up
his cue stick”) as well as alliteration (“dark bottles of beer, burning”),
which is a tool I use often in writing. I like deploying those devices
as a way to give the poem a musicality that, perhaps, the narrative
might lack.
I tend to write in spurts. I’m not a very disciplined writer, so when
I feel the urge to write, sometimes it works and sometimes it doesn’t.
In the process of revision I’ll stick with what I feel is strong and build
on that. Whether that is an image or sonic devices or the metaphor
that I’m trying to explore, I try to let those guide me.
JD: When you use assonance and consonance, you create really power-
ful percussive effects in your lines. It doesn’t feel gratuitous—it feels
effective and essential. I wonder if you could say more about the
auditory experience of your poems.
JS: I grew up listening to hip-hop and rap music as a kid, and I’m not
a rapper at all, but I know a lot of verses off the top of my head, and
55
I feel that that has seeped into my work in different ways. I try to fol-
low it and it helps guide me from one idea to the next as I’m writing.
But like you said, a lot of my poems are narrative-based as well, and
I think that too is linked to hip-hop. A lot of the great hip-hop songs
are just stories told in a great, rhythmic way. For example, Ice Cube’s
“It Was a Good Day” or A Tribe Called Quest’s “I Left My Wallet in
El Segundo.” I can’t emulate that, but I try to incorporate the tools
hip-hop artists use for telling their stories into the particular story
that I’m trying to tell.
JD: In addition to your conversation with the hip-hop tradition, how
are you also in conversation with other poets?
JS: There are definitely poets in my head and I try to incorporate
the devices they use. One of my influences is Ed Roberson. He was
my professor at Columbia College Chicago. It was an eye-opening
experience having him as a teacher and reading his work, which I’m
a huge fan of. There’s this musicality to his work and he goes in these
strange and beautiful directions. It blows my mind how he gets from
one point to another. I don’t always understand what I’m reading,
but I know that there’s something there that intrigues me and moves
me. A lot of my early poems were definitely influenced by him and
what I saw he was doing in terms of craft.
Another influence is the poet Sharon Olds. I love the brutally and
beautifully honest way she writes poetry. While I wouldn’t call my
work confessional, I tend to write autobiographically and I feel read-
ing Sharon Olds’s work helped me in that regard early on. I feel her
work gave me permission to open up and explore myself.
I also feel that I’m just trying to keep up with my peers in terms
of what they’re writing. I’m thinking more in terms of Latino poets
and trying to keep up with the tradition of Latino poetry—telling our
stories and telling them in a fresh and moving way.
JD: Who are some of the Latino poets who have provoked or chal-
lenged you to think in new ways about your own work?
JS: I’m a huge fan of Erika Sánchez. We’re both from Cicero, Illinois.
I feel a lot of her work is really great, and I’m trying to keep up with
her in some ways. But also I really enjoy Carmen Giménez Smith
and Eduardo Corral. Eduardo’s book Slow Lightning is just beautiful.
56
Another of my earliest influences was the work (poetry and fiction)
of Sandra Cisneros. Her having a Chicago connection made her
work extra sweet for me, as I recognized many of the landmarks and
people in my own life. Pablo Neruda is also a major figure in my life,
particularly his love poems, which made an impression on me as a
high school student. Twenty Love Poems and a Song of Despair is one of
my favorite books ever!
Last year I participated in CantoMundo, an annual intensive
workshop for Latino poets. It was such a great and nourishing experi-
ence for me, not only in terms of writing, but also emotionally. I made a
lot of great friends and connections that I’ll have for a long time. Erika
Sánchez and I both got to go the same year. She had a great way of
talking about the CantoMundo network—sometimes as Latino poets
we have to explain ourselves and where we’re coming from. We’ll
have to justify poetic choices in a traditional poetry workshop, but
at CantoMundo, everyone essentially knew where we were coming
from. Obviously we all have different backgrounds and upbringings,
but there was an essence there that connected us.
Let me give you an example of what I mean with my poem “Poem
for the Grandmother.” At CantoMundo there was talk about this idea
of the “abuela” poem. As Latino poets, everyone sort of has their
abuela poem, and this was my attempt to write it while being aware
of the tradition. Do you know the poet Paul Martínez Pompa? He’s
in Chicago as well. In his book My Kill Adore Him, he has an abuela
poem. In my poem that’s featured here in SRPR, I feel like I’m riffing
off of that in some ways. His is a two-part poem: one part is written
in a very traditional way, heavy on clichéd images of grandmothers,
and the second part is the real story, what actually happened with his
grandmother, written by a poetic speaker who doesn’t speak Spanish.
So I wanted to be playful with that, but I also wanted to connect with
the idea of an abuela poem. Sometimes you’ve got to write it and get
it out of your system.
JD:And you got the Coke-bottle glasses and the pink rollers in one line!
JS: That’s because it’s right there, all in one photograph, literally.
JD: In this feature, you’ve shared such a range of poetry, and I admire
how different each of the poems is in terms of shape and structure.

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SRPR39-2_Sample

  • 1. srprspoon river poetry review 39.2 winter 2014
  • 2. spoon river poetry review Editor: Kirstin Hotelling Zona Guest Editor: Summer Qabazard Managing Editor: Emily Johnston Feature Poet and Interview Editor: Joanne Diaz Review Essay Editor: Michael Theune Contributing Editors: Ewa Chrusciel, Duriel Harris, Kass Fleisher,Arielle Greenberg, Gabriel Gudding, and Andrew Schelling Senior Editorial Assistant: Shailen Mishra Manuscript Readers: Ryan Clark, Kass Fleisher, Jamison Lee, Bill Morgan, and Summer Qabazard Copyeditors: Danielle Duvick and Brooke Burns Website Manager: Shailen Mishra Blog Editor: Shailen Mishra Production: The Illinois State University English Department’s Publications Unit Codirectors of Publications Unit: Steve Halle and Jane L. Carman Production Intern: Elora Karim Cover Art: Melissa Jay Craig, "That's Life" (detail) SRPR (Spoon River Poetry Review) is published twice a year by the Spoon River Poetry Association. The editors read submissions of fine poetry from all over the nation and world from September 15 to February 15 each year. Submit 3–5 poems online or via postal mail to the address below. Submissions to the SRPR Illinois Poet feature should contain 12-18 pages of mostly unpublished poems by poets who have an Illinois connection. All submissions should be accompanied by a self-addressed stamped envelope and addressed to: SRPR (Spoon River Poetry Review), 4241 Publications Unit, Illinois State University, Normal, Illinois 61790-4241. Deadline for the annual Editors’ Prize Contest is April 15. Visit our website for guidelines: www.srpr.org Annual subscription price: $18.00 individuals; $20.00 institutions Single copy price: $10.00 Copyright © 2014 by Kirstin Hotelling Zona Distributed by: Ubiquity (718) 875-5491 and Ingram Periodicals, Inc. (800) 627-6247 Printed by: United Graphics Incorporated, Mattoon, IL The Spoon River Poetry Review is indexed in the Index of American Periodical Verse, the Annual Index to Poetry in Periodicals, Humanities International Complete, and Poem Finder. ISSN: 0738-8993
  • 3. 54 The SRPR Interview: Jacob Saenz Joanne Diaz: Thank you for sharing your work in this issue of SRPR and for taking the time to talk with me. If I may, I’d like to start our conversation by asking about the narrative excitement in your work. When I read your poems, I feel like I am launched into dramatic situa- tions that feel urgent and necessary. How do you think about arriving at that place of maximum interest, not in the fifth or sixth stanza, but from the opening lines of a poem? Jacob Saenz: Initially, in the first drafts, it’s often an image or a few words phrased together that prompt me into the flow of the poem. For example, in “Bait” which is featured here, I had had that idea for years, and it was something that I recently revisited. For me, what tends to drive and keep the flow of a poem going is image—in this case, the image of a young boy going into the bar to find his father—but also I’m driven a lot by rhyme and sonic devices. I let those guide me and take me further into the poem and explore the sonic aspects but I also pay attention to how it looks on the page. In “Bait,” I was very much driven by assonance and consonance (“a pool shark chalking / up his cue stick”) as well as alliteration (“dark bottles of beer, burning”), which is a tool I use often in writing. I like deploying those devices as a way to give the poem a musicality that, perhaps, the narrative might lack. I tend to write in spurts. I’m not a very disciplined writer, so when I feel the urge to write, sometimes it works and sometimes it doesn’t. In the process of revision I’ll stick with what I feel is strong and build on that. Whether that is an image or sonic devices or the metaphor that I’m trying to explore, I try to let those guide me. JD: When you use assonance and consonance, you create really power- ful percussive effects in your lines. It doesn’t feel gratuitous—it feels effective and essential. I wonder if you could say more about the auditory experience of your poems. JS: I grew up listening to hip-hop and rap music as a kid, and I’m not a rapper at all, but I know a lot of verses off the top of my head, and
  • 4. 55 I feel that that has seeped into my work in different ways. I try to fol- low it and it helps guide me from one idea to the next as I’m writing. But like you said, a lot of my poems are narrative-based as well, and I think that too is linked to hip-hop. A lot of the great hip-hop songs are just stories told in a great, rhythmic way. For example, Ice Cube’s “It Was a Good Day” or A Tribe Called Quest’s “I Left My Wallet in El Segundo.” I can’t emulate that, but I try to incorporate the tools hip-hop artists use for telling their stories into the particular story that I’m trying to tell. JD: In addition to your conversation with the hip-hop tradition, how are you also in conversation with other poets? JS: There are definitely poets in my head and I try to incorporate the devices they use. One of my influences is Ed Roberson. He was my professor at Columbia College Chicago. It was an eye-opening experience having him as a teacher and reading his work, which I’m a huge fan of. There’s this musicality to his work and he goes in these strange and beautiful directions. It blows my mind how he gets from one point to another. I don’t always understand what I’m reading, but I know that there’s something there that intrigues me and moves me. A lot of my early poems were definitely influenced by him and what I saw he was doing in terms of craft. Another influence is the poet Sharon Olds. I love the brutally and beautifully honest way she writes poetry. While I wouldn’t call my work confessional, I tend to write autobiographically and I feel read- ing Sharon Olds’s work helped me in that regard early on. I feel her work gave me permission to open up and explore myself. I also feel that I’m just trying to keep up with my peers in terms of what they’re writing. I’m thinking more in terms of Latino poets and trying to keep up with the tradition of Latino poetry—telling our stories and telling them in a fresh and moving way. JD: Who are some of the Latino poets who have provoked or chal- lenged you to think in new ways about your own work? JS: I’m a huge fan of Erika Sánchez. We’re both from Cicero, Illinois. I feel a lot of her work is really great, and I’m trying to keep up with her in some ways. But also I really enjoy Carmen Giménez Smith and Eduardo Corral. Eduardo’s book Slow Lightning is just beautiful.
  • 5. 56 Another of my earliest influences was the work (poetry and fiction) of Sandra Cisneros. Her having a Chicago connection made her work extra sweet for me, as I recognized many of the landmarks and people in my own life. Pablo Neruda is also a major figure in my life, particularly his love poems, which made an impression on me as a high school student. Twenty Love Poems and a Song of Despair is one of my favorite books ever! Last year I participated in CantoMundo, an annual intensive workshop for Latino poets. It was such a great and nourishing experi- ence for me, not only in terms of writing, but also emotionally. I made a lot of great friends and connections that I’ll have for a long time. Erika Sánchez and I both got to go the same year. She had a great way of talking about the CantoMundo network—sometimes as Latino poets we have to explain ourselves and where we’re coming from. We’ll have to justify poetic choices in a traditional poetry workshop, but at CantoMundo, everyone essentially knew where we were coming from. Obviously we all have different backgrounds and upbringings, but there was an essence there that connected us. Let me give you an example of what I mean with my poem “Poem for the Grandmother.” At CantoMundo there was talk about this idea of the “abuela” poem. As Latino poets, everyone sort of has their abuela poem, and this was my attempt to write it while being aware of the tradition. Do you know the poet Paul Martínez Pompa? He’s in Chicago as well. In his book My Kill Adore Him, he has an abuela poem. In my poem that’s featured here in SRPR, I feel like I’m riffing off of that in some ways. His is a two-part poem: one part is written in a very traditional way, heavy on clichéd images of grandmothers, and the second part is the real story, what actually happened with his grandmother, written by a poetic speaker who doesn’t speak Spanish. So I wanted to be playful with that, but I also wanted to connect with the idea of an abuela poem. Sometimes you’ve got to write it and get it out of your system. JD:And you got the Coke-bottle glasses and the pink rollers in one line! JS: That’s because it’s right there, all in one photograph, literally. JD: In this feature, you’ve shared such a range of poetry, and I admire how different each of the poems is in terms of shape and structure.