1. SCENES I’VE CUT OUT
These footage are from the start of the trailer and because I was advised to make the beginnings short and snappy to
resemble a flashback. I have decided to get rid of these scenes because I feel they are too long and not relevant to the
flashbacks or the footage does not include both the couple and just one actor. Removing these footage has made the
beginning resemble a memory shows that the relationship was in the past.
2. SCENES I’VE CUT OUT
I have decided to get rid of these scenes because when I was researching into similar products to create my final draft, in order to
create this thrilling effect I would need to include very short and snappy clips, like for example when she's opening the door its
supposed to be a tense moment so putting in 3 clips of her attempting to open the door elongates the trailer and does not make i
that thrilling. The same goes for the cheating scene instead of doing shots with sex toys on the bed and the mistress being
seductive jumping into a shot of the couple committing the infidelity would be more thrilling, exhilarating and time consuming.
3. SCENES I’VE CUT OUT
The same goes for the ending of the trailer because it is a trailer it needs to be anticipating and the end gives a lot away, it goes
from a mad possessed women to shooting her husband and its better to live on a cliff-hanger to how dangerous is this woman,
what is she capable of so instead of this long giveaway ending, leave it on a cliff-hanger.
4. SCENES I’VE CUT OUT
Revealing and too much shots make it less thrilling and anticipating.
