2. Write a short-description of a personal environment
(such as a room, house, office).
Now read the description to a classmate or friend. Can
your listener guess at the character’s personality and
occupation by your description alone?
In-Class Exercise
3. A movie’s “world” includes:
The story’s season
Geographic location
Physical environment and historical period.
War and peace.
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4. In many ways the world is like another character.
- Distinct appearance and identity
- Defining the course of the story
- Creates a mood and defines the protagonist
- Defines the stakes
- Defines the antagonist or IS the antagonist
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5. There should be a sense that for these particular
characters and this particular story, this is the essential
world.
Novice writers treat the environment of the screenplay
as decoration or ornamentation
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6. Imagine FARGO set in Hawaii
Miracle on 34th
Street set in the south where it’s hot all the
time.
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7. Have I selected the right world for my story and the right
characters for that world?
Will not necessarily make for an interesting story.
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8. Some films get their title from their world:
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9. The world reflects the story
- Perspective
-Tone
- Context
The world can also affect a story by supplying sources of
conflict.
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10. Characters GROW OUT of a specific environment, which
they understand and which defines and reveals their
personalities.
Home, car, office, bedroom, etc.
We know who they are
because we see where and how they live
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11. A Stranger in a Strange Land – source of conflict.
“Fish out of water” story
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12. Create a character and a world that is in direct conflict
How is this present in Django Unchained?
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13. Create a character and a world that is in direct conflict
A black slave who finds himself freed in the years
leading up to the American CivilWar
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14. We crave CONTRAST!
Contrast provides perspective, boundaries or imagery
The environment must progress the story
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15. The world (environment) is key to exposition (backstory)
SHOW (world) andTELL (exposition)
Consider this scene:
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16. Kasey, 30-years-old and still lives at home.
She had a fight with her father and is running away.
She comes to her bedroom to pack her bags and her
concerned brother follows her in.
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17. Here is the scene:
Kasey storms in and packs her luggage. Norman follows.
NORMAN, Jr.
Where are you going? You have
No money. No place to stay. Kasey,
You’re just a child in a grownup’s body.
KASEY
Do me a favor and get that bastard.
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18. Continued:
KASEY
Why didn’t you speak up?Why did
You stand there and not say a word?
NORMAN, Jr.
I don’t know. I’m scared of him, too.
KASEY
Screw off, Norman.
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19. Continued:
NORMAN, Jr.
Kasey, I don’t think you should do this.
KASEY
Are you trying to tell me I can’t
Take care of myself?
NORMAN, Jr.
I didn’t say that.
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20. Continued:
KASEY
But you thought it.
NORMAN, Jr.
You do act a little young for your age.
KASEY
I do not. I am an adult!
NORMAN Jr.
You still play with dolls!
KASEY
I collect them!
She gives him the finger and crawls out the window.
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21. Kasey struggles with the latch on her ancient Barbie
luggage set. She rips it open and begins dumping in her
meager belongings: Party dresses, a diary, several
porcelain dolls. Norman runs in.
NORMAN, Jr.
I’m sorry
KASEY
Do me a favor and get that bastard.
Kill him if you have to!
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22. She pulls her pictures ofThe Monkees andThe Bee Gees off
the wall and loads them in to her Ken Doll shoulder bag.
KASEY
Why didn’t you speak up?Why did you
Stand there and not say a word?
NORMAN, Jr.
I don’t know. I’m scared of him, too.
KASEY
Screw off, Norman
She gives him the finger, pulls the bows on her perfect pink curtain
sash, and crawls out the window.
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23. DoYOUR research! Be consistent!
Just because you visit a location
doesn’t mean you know it!
Books, newspapers, personal interviews
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Editor's Notes
Outer space or a small attic, A children’s fable…once upon a time…
Not as a critical part of the story.
Old school theater painted the sets on flats and backdrops, furniture and all.
Consider how most well-known and dialogue-driven plays by Shakespeare – transformed when turned into movies – based on the locations
A screenplay full of wild parties, stadiums jammed full of screaming fans and wonderful island sunsets might dress the scenes, but
Can you think of examples?
Fort Apache, A Bronx Tale, Journey to the Center of the Earth, etc.
We know who they are because we see where and how they live.
Sling Blade – From mental hospital to small southern town – affects Karl Childers – talks, lives his life and makes decisions.
Sense & Sensibility – There is a code of behavior. Carefully planned homes, etc.
Dog Day Afternoon – to incompetent bank robbers – mundane as the bank environment that they are trapped in. Brooklyn – money sealed.
Claustrophoic – they have to face themselves.
Rear Window – Broken leg reduces his world to what he can see through his window. Distorts his perspective…cannot see what is real anymore.
How is the personal environment in or out of harmony with the character?
The world is the background for/source of the essential conflict – trapping characters to confront their desires and limitations.
Character’s tastes, lifestyles, income, education
Man who has every can in his cabinet in perfect order
Woman who overstocks on food – childhood hungry
Obession with clothes
New kid in a new neighborhood
New city/New Environment.
Conflict = Time Period
Conflict = Location (The South)
Complexity of life, character and world!
EXAMPLE – A man reading a book in a noisy construction site is interesting!
Contrast and irony make for a visually interesting scene that can define the characters, reinforce and reflect the theme, and move the story forward in unique, dramatic ways.
We learn everything based on what is said.
How can we fix it using environment/location – space?
We learn everything based on what is said.
How can we fix it using environment/location – space?
Describing a key bit of world allows the audience to see that Kasey is immature.
No excessive dialogue.
The environment is a critical part of the story.
If you write about cowboys = interview cowboys
Taratino is a master of Blaxploitation and loves the westerns