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Observing your world
Identify your subject
• Be specific; define your subject with unique
  characteristics

  Nowhere else in the world can we find the
  array or number of geysers, hot spring, mud
  pots, and fumaroles found in Yellowstone.
Background
• Tell your reader WHY this subject is worth
  talking about.

  As an American, I was raised to believe that
  the simple act of passing one’s soles across a
  nubbly plastic mat sporting a cute syaing will
  somehow dislodge an accumulated eight
  hours of filth, muck, and germs…The Japanese
  remove their shoes at the door.
Assembly
• Chronologically      1:00


• Most surprising
  discovery            2:30

• Most important
  observation
                       4:00




                       6:15
Details, details, details!
• Show your reader what you saw by providing
  concrete details.

 Three more dollars earned you a trip to the
 salad bar – featuring Lady Lee peas, which the
 cook poured expressionlessly from the can.
 They made a gentle splattering sound as they
 slid into the copious salad-bar vat.
Big Picture
• Place your observations in the larger context of
  your field. What questions are left unanswered?
  How are your results atypical?

  I realized that I had unknowingly committed the
  most egregious of cultural misunderstandings.
  Forget the glaring red bouquet, my self-conscious
  sobs, or my battle with the chicken feet; I have
  absolutely no idea whose funeral I attended.
Being objective
• Know your purpose and audience
• Social science observations vs. descriptive
  essays of a personal experience
Visuals
• Again – know your purpose and audience
• Visuals can work nicely in combination with
  written observations.
Observation Assignment
• Using worksheets, take notes while you observe
  an area on campus. You will observe the area AT
  LEAST twice (you may do more if you want) for
  30-60 min.
• Write a one page (double –spaced) summary of
  what you observed. Consider how the two
  observations differ or are the same. What might
  we learn from this?
• Bring this to class on Tuesday along with your
  notes.

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Observing your world

  • 2. Identify your subject • Be specific; define your subject with unique characteristics Nowhere else in the world can we find the array or number of geysers, hot spring, mud pots, and fumaroles found in Yellowstone.
  • 3. Background • Tell your reader WHY this subject is worth talking about. As an American, I was raised to believe that the simple act of passing one’s soles across a nubbly plastic mat sporting a cute syaing will somehow dislodge an accumulated eight hours of filth, muck, and germs…The Japanese remove their shoes at the door.
  • 4. Assembly • Chronologically 1:00 • Most surprising discovery 2:30 • Most important observation 4:00 6:15
  • 5. Details, details, details! • Show your reader what you saw by providing concrete details. Three more dollars earned you a trip to the salad bar – featuring Lady Lee peas, which the cook poured expressionlessly from the can. They made a gentle splattering sound as they slid into the copious salad-bar vat.
  • 6. Big Picture • Place your observations in the larger context of your field. What questions are left unanswered? How are your results atypical? I realized that I had unknowingly committed the most egregious of cultural misunderstandings. Forget the glaring red bouquet, my self-conscious sobs, or my battle with the chicken feet; I have absolutely no idea whose funeral I attended.
  • 7. Being objective • Know your purpose and audience • Social science observations vs. descriptive essays of a personal experience
  • 8. Visuals • Again – know your purpose and audience • Visuals can work nicely in combination with written observations.
  • 9.
  • 10. Observation Assignment • Using worksheets, take notes while you observe an area on campus. You will observe the area AT LEAST twice (you may do more if you want) for 30-60 min. • Write a one page (double –spaced) summary of what you observed. Consider how the two observations differ or are the same. What might we learn from this? • Bring this to class on Tuesday along with your notes.