Half the force holding Fort Pillow were Negroes, former slaves now enrolled in the Union Army. Toward them Forrest’s troops had the fierce, bitter animosity of men who had been educated to regard the colored race as inferior and who for the first time had encountered that race armed and fighting against white men.
From pgs. 46-47 of “The Fort Pillow Massacre,” a scholarly article by Albert Castel.
Albert Castel notes that 50 percent of the Union troops holding Fort Pillow were former slaves. Toward them Forrest’s soldiers displayed the savage hatred of men who had been taught to view blacks as inferior and who for the first time had encountered them armed and fighting against white men (46-47).
Although the source is correctly documented with an MLA in-text citation, the second sentence paraphrases the original source far too closely.
ORIGINAL SOURCE Apart from the fact that music accounts for much of the power of Hindi movies, , creating a heightened mood …, the film song spreads out from cinema to permeate many other areas of Indian society. From pg. 41 of “Playback Time: A Brief History of Bollywood ‘Film Songs,’” an article in Film Comment by Nasreen Munni Kabir
SAMPLE In India, film music creates a heightened mood that accounts for a great deal of the power of Hindi movies , says Nasreen Munni Kabir (41). The writer has paraphrased too closely by only changing a few words and switching order of phrases. A paraphrase should be in the writer’s own words.
ORIGINAL SOURCE Apart from the fact that music accounts for much of the power of Hindi movies, … the film song spreads out from cinema to permeate many other areas of Indian society . From pg. 41 of “Playback Time: A Brief History of Bollywood ‘Film Songs,’” an article in Film Comment by Nasreen Munni Kabir
SAMPLE Nasreen Munni Kabir argues that the film songs disseminate from the movies to pervade several other aspects of Indian life (41). The writer has paraphrased the source too closely by borrowing the sentence structure of the original and then plugging in synonyms.
ORIGINAL SOURCE For many Southerners it was psychologically impossible to see a black man bearing arms as anything but an incipient slave uprising complete with arson, murder, pillage, and raping. From pg. 158 of The Sable Arm , a book by historian Dudley Taylor Cornish
CORRECT SAMPLE Civil War historian Dudley Taylor Cornish observes that many Southerners were so terrified of slave revolt that the sight of armed black men filled them with fear (158). Correctly paraphrased in writer’s own words and documented with an MLA in-text citation.
Alice Stone Blackwell argues that “every improvement in the condition of women thus far has been secured not by a general demand from the majority of women, but the argument …of [a] persistent few” (30).
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Before he dies, Unoka warns Okonkwo, “‘A proud heart can survive … because such a failure does not prick its pride. It is more difficult and more bitter when a man fails alone’” (Achebe 21).
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Obierika points out the impossibility of the colonialists understanding anything about the Umuofians without speaking their language, “’How can he when he does not even speak our tongue ? ’” (151). If a question mark or exclamation point is part of the quotation, leave in the quoted text.
The descending of the locusts foreshadows the arrival of the
colonists and their influence on the Igbo people:
And at last the locusts did descend. They settled on every tree and on every blade of grass; they settled on the roofs and covered the bare ground. Mighty tree branches broke away under them, and the whole country became the brown-earth color of the vast, hungry swarm. (Achebe 49)
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Achebe, Chinua. Things Fall Apart: with Connections . New York: Harcourt School, 1999.
Blackwell, Alice Stone. “Opposition of Women.” Oppositions answered. New York: National American woman suffrage association, 1913. Votes for Women: Selections from the National American Woman Suffrage Association Collection, 1848-1921 < http://memory.loc.gov/ammen/naw/nawshome.html>