2. 2nd review—make 2 comments each on the paper

3. ask a question

4. about something that doesn’t make sense or

5. something that you want to know more about (history, personality traits, why someone is doing something…)

6. make a statement about what is interesting (try to find a positive idea or part of the story that seems very interesting to you and specifically explain why you think it works!)

7. 3rd review: -Offer 2 pieces of advice:

8. about how to make the story better

9. about how to represent the ideas visually (could be funny idea or suggestions about what visual things might help tell the story!

11. 2nd review—make 2 comments each on the paper

12. ask a question

13. about something that doesn’t make sense or

14. something that you want to know more about (history, personality traits, why someone is doing something…)

15. make a statement about what is interesting (try to find a positive idea or part of the story that seems very interesting to you and specifically explain why you think it works!)

16. 3rd review: -Offer 2 pieces of advice:

17. about how to make the story better

18. about how to represent the ideas visually (could be funny idea or suggestions about what visual things might help tell the story!

19. What songs might be a great fit with the story’s theme (please be as specific as possible—give title and artist if you know it)Your name: (please write your name and the number of the story that you reviewed) #1-- #2-- #3--